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RobinRone — Grandfather Clock
Published: 2009-10-08 18:44:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 456; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 2
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It's raining todayThe paper cranes on my desk
Cannot bring the sun.
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Comments: 7
*stunned silence*
The form... is beautiful. its like poem art. Your placement of the words and the colors.. they were perfectly placed and picked. A gorgeous and meaningful work.
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I mostly went with what felt right. It essentially wrote itself. A lot of my writing is doing that lately.
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Wow Robin....this is amazing.
I would gush more but Phantom has said everything I wanted to.
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You've caught on to one of those universal themes that all human beings feel and experience throughout their lives, and more importantly- realize that they felt or experienced, but there's no real word to succinctly describe the feeling so none of us really talk about it.
Yet you've put that into a beautiful artistic form right here, and I love it. I especially admire the bittersweet contemplative quality to the poem.
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It was that kind of morning. Scratch that. It's been that kind of MONTH.
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