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Published: 2014-08-08 06:57:17 +0000 UTC; Views: 7685; Favourites: 70; Downloads: 0
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PAGE SUMMARY:Leonardo realizes this 'goodbye' might be somewhat awkward, and nervously rubs his head as he begins to address his feisty younger brother. Raphael cuts him off however, stubbornly declaring that he won't be participating in any mushy farewells.
Grabbing Leo by the shoulders, Raph turns him towards the airplane -the vehicle of his departure- and instructs their siblings to stay behind, intending to accompany the 'leader in blue' to ensure a successful boarding.
Nevertheless, despite Raphael's words, Donatello and Michelangelo see the meaning behind his actions all too clearly: Raph's dignity won't suffer the presence of onlookers when a heartfelt emotion must be expressed.
Of course, Raph is not impressed that his siblings have recognized this truth, and offers a fruity threat in order to silence them.
MY COMMENTS:
Well, there you have it - page 5! And with a much different color scheme from the previous pages! I'm utilizing a much more traditional manga style now in spite of the colors, applying screentones/patterns in order to ensure the overall manga look.
I'm not well versed in this however and had to retrace my steps a few times, testing out different ideas (seeing what worked and what didn't), before I was able to complete this page. I will be doing the majority of the comic like this, except for the random pages that will need emphasis throughout the story.
Hope you like!
EXTRA: page 5 orig. sketch
Scramble over to: Page 6
Scuttle back to: Page 4
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Comments: 25
RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to BlueRoseKelly [2014-08-29 06:29:19 +0000 UTC]
Hee hee, YES! They know just what to say to get Raphie all worked up!
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FoxKids1302 [2014-08-16 16:45:44 +0000 UTC]
I would risk a few bruises myself if I can rile Raph up like Don and Mikey did XD
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ErzaNee44 [2014-08-16 10:32:11 +0000 UTC]
As always, you did great!
Love this so much!!!!
Can't wait to see the next page!
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to ErzaNee44 [2014-08-17 00:57:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much!
And, I've already got the next page started!
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ErzaNee44 In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2014-08-18 17:37:57 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome!
And I'm so glad to hear that
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to Dragon-Artist92 [2014-08-11 06:38:57 +0000 UTC]
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hundi12 [2014-08-08 16:58:54 +0000 UTC]
That " go suck a lemon" is from the 80' raph, isn't it?
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to hundi12 [2014-08-11 06:42:59 +0000 UTC]
Probably. I don't know for sure 'cause I haven't watched much of that series. Even though it was still airing on TV when I was a little kid.
But considering Rob Paulsen was Raph's VA back then, it's easy to imagine him say that!
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Mrs-Raphael-Hamato [2014-08-08 12:10:38 +0000 UTC]
Awww, raphie boy is nothin but a big ol' softie on the inside. And he can't threaten me with a lemon. I like eating lemons XD As always, great job.
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to Mrs-Raphael-Hamato [2014-08-11 06:50:18 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!! Yeah, I like lemons too, though I can't say I've ever eaten more than a slice at any one time. Prefer lemonade on the whole!
DONNIE: Enamel erosion occurs if citrus is consumed too regularly.
ME: Thank you Donnie, for that interesting factoid... ¬_¬;
DONNIE: It's my job.
Glad you liked the page!
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ShellshockerTMNT117 [2014-08-08 11:56:06 +0000 UTC]
XD the way you explained it. Offered them a fruit.
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LittleChaCha [2014-08-08 09:27:54 +0000 UTC]
Love it !! Can't wait for the next chapter as usual ! I like how you drew this page, I like this manga style. I wonder what Raph's gonna say to Leo X) The next page's gonna be awesome for sure !
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to LittleChaCha [2014-08-08 09:41:57 +0000 UTC]
Wow, thank you for that vote of confidence! I'm really glad you like the manga-style.
It's always a little weird switching from one color style to another - you can never be sure how the readers are gonna take it because it interrupts the continuity a bit.
But thank you so much for letting me know what you think of this! I appreciate it!
Do you read manga? If so, what series do you like?
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LittleChaCha In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2014-08-08 17:28:08 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome, it's a pleasure to comment and to read ^^ I guess it's normal to have doubts because yeah, you change your color style along the way and it might bother your readers. In my case it doesn't bother me, I think it's pretty cool as a color style !
I don't read manga but I used to watch animes when I was younger ^^ I was a fan of Naruto !
I ask you the same question sorry, do you read manga ? If so what series ?
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to LittleChaCha [2014-08-11 06:59:42 +0000 UTC]
I like several manga series as a matter of fact.
1. D.Gray-man 2. Psyren
3. Yu-Gi-Oh R and 5D's
4. Aria 5. +Anima
Plus a few others like Magic Knight Rayearth and Kingdom Hearts. I was keeping up with Naruto for a while - then my subscription to SJ ran out.
Still, I love reading and learned to draw manga and comics by reading them!
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simbeau2012 [2014-08-08 09:27:32 +0000 UTC]
awwww cute I wonder what there gonna say to each other
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RoseDuelistBBSHM In reply to simbeau2012 [2014-08-08 09:34:04 +0000 UTC]
We shall see! OH yes, we shall!
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simbeau2012 In reply to RoseDuelistBBSHM [2014-08-08 10:48:53 +0000 UTC]
we shall!!!!
yay I can't wait!
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