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Published: 2014-10-01 15:37:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 695; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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I don't usually upload drawings from my sketchbook here, but I thought this one was detailed enough to warrant it.Torque (born Temari) is as Astur, one of the 5 species of Esper*. Unlike most Espers, she is stuck in her Nate-form (a.k.a. "Beast form") and cannot switch to a humanoid form. She also has supernatural abilities of sublimation; she can turn solid objects around her into gas and vice-versa.
Both of these oddities were caused by her demonic blood. This has led to her being locked up into various facilities, far away from her family, while doctors and exorcists attempt to "cure" her. She also has very low self-esteem and believes that she in inherently evil and sinful, and she does very damaging things to herself in order to pay for those sins, like fasting (read: starving herself) and wrapping her limbs, torso and face with tight, constricting bandages, similar to but much more harmful than the ancient cilice.
She was originally nicknamed "Tourniquet" due to her strange habit with the bandages, but she shortened it to "Torque" after taking a liking to the mathematical term.
I have some more details of her backstory written down, but I need to polish those.
Thekittenfangirl described Torque as looking miserable but pretty. I like that description. Koneko-chan is practically a poet :3
Art, character and species (c) LumnieRaptor.
Medium: black ballpoint pen and mechanical pencil.
*Info: Espers refer to 5 animal-like species of aliens. Asturs such as Torque are canine and feline Espers, while Nyrans such as Lumnie are bird-like Espers. They spend most of their lives in a humanoid form, but they can transform into a more powerful beast-like form, called the "Nate-form".
[EDIT] I have been informed that Torque looks very similar to Shanol 's drawings. The character itself is completely different, but I must admit that, by accident, the drawing ended up looking too much like his style. I have personally settled the matter with him, and I offer my sincere apologies for my mistake.
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Comments: 20
Hantari [2014-10-30 13:07:31 +0000 UTC]
heh) This is fun!
Looks like a Shanol - - - - - - shanol.deviantart.com/art/How-…
Or not? What you think? You so liked character Shanol and decide to make own character so similar to other char? I can show you WHAT i see in Torque what remides me Shanol, if you not see it. And I don`t care that your char is female.
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Ryukocha In reply to Hantari [2014-10-30 20:15:39 +0000 UTC]
I see the similarities, however I think it's unfair to say from this sketch only that the character is a copy of Shanol. In fact, I did not even think about Shanol when I made this character. If you need me to explain the differences, I can do that.
What I think is fair is to criticize me for the drawing style I used here. This style was inspired by an artist called CanisAlbus, but I mixed it with the style I always use for sketches, because I don't wish to copy any other artist's style.
It turned out similar to Shanol's drawings by accident, and I apologized to him for that. Accidents do happen, and trying to police other artists when you think someone's drawing is too similar to another person's art is no one's right.
I appreciate the criticism, and I'll learn from it, but you could have been more polite about it and avoided making judgements about people you don't know.
I'm really sorry that this happened, and I know that you're defending your bro, but I would rather settle the matter with Shanol himself.
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Hantari In reply to Ryukocha [2014-10-30 22:08:43 +0000 UTC]
Allright, sorry.... I realy can`t understand why people steal Arts, ideas and characters.
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Ryukocha In reply to Hantari [2014-10-30 22:30:12 +0000 UTC]
Me neither. Thank you for being understanding
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Hantari In reply to Ryukocha [2014-10-30 22:00:30 +0000 UTC]
I see, you are honest guy) Don`t steal the art and styles.
Allright. Draw further and be nice.
You understand why I comment your work like this? Many people has stolen Shanol`s character called Shanol. A hate thoose people. They must burn in the hell.
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Ryukocha In reply to Hantari [2014-10-30 22:10:10 +0000 UTC]
I've heard of those people, and you're right, they're the scum of the earth, but rest assured that I would never do something like that. I've had my art stolen by someone else before; it would be hypocritical if I did something like that myself.
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Hantari In reply to Shakhorht [2014-10-30 13:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Это и есть мягкость)
Я лишь просто узнать хочу, почему так похоже и видит ли автор вообще, что рисует)
Я могу поступить с его персами так же. Ему понравится?
Да вот только так я не поступаю.
Только ты не думай, я не злюсь)
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Shakhorht In reply to Hantari [2014-10-30 13:32:47 +0000 UTC]
Я понимаю, что ты не злишься, просто можно быть ещё мягче, тут ты всё-же грубоват.
Спасибо, что защищаешь, но не будь слишком вызывающим, угу?
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Shakhorht [2014-10-30 12:51:01 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was my drawing, when i saw it first. I was pretty confused :/
The style looks quite different from your usual style.
But i like how it turned out, but still feel worried ._.
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Ryukocha In reply to Shakhorht [2014-10-30 19:54:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm really sorry for all the confusion. The style here is very different because I was experimenting and refining my technique. The style I actually based this drawing on is from an artist called CanisAlbus, and if you take a look at her gallery, you'll see that she also draws skinny canines. But because I didn't want to copy her style, I mixed it with my own.
I actually draw a lot of sketches with ballpoint pens just like this one, I just don't usually post them on DA.
If it looks like one of your drawings, then I'm terribly sorry, it must have been something subconscious. I actively try to not mimic your art style because I know how protective you are of it. If you need me to explain more about this character to show that it's not a copy of yours, or if you want me to put a disclaimer on the description or even take down the image, I can do that too.
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Shakhorht In reply to Ryukocha [2014-10-30 21:57:27 +0000 UTC]
Ok, same to me, i draw with ballpoint pen in my sketchbook very often and do not post it to DA.
I've heard of her, and i didn't knew that mix of her and your style will look like this, lol.
I understand, and i am sorry for me being so paranoiac. That's the sign for me to improve my style to make it better~ c:
I wasn't sure if i should even tell you something, so i asked two of my friends if your drawing looks like mine or not, and they said yes, that's why it was such an alert.
I am glad to know you improve, and i do not mind if someone uses my art to learn, i just would like to know who uses it, that's why i always ask for credit.
Thank you for your answer. I hope this didn't made you think bad of me.. paranoia you know..
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Ryukocha In reply to Shakhorht [2014-10-30 22:28:57 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, I failed at emulating CanisAlbus, she's way out of my league xD
But I'll put a disclaimer in the picture description, just to be sure. Sorry for the trouble.
I don't think any less of you, I think you did the right thing and responded in a polite way
I'm just sad that all those thieves made you paranoid.
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Shakhorht In reply to Ryukocha [2014-10-30 22:50:19 +0000 UTC]
He-he, you're doing very good, i love your own style c:
Well, i must say, i've heard one very good phrase and now using it as my art-injunction.
"Aim to get ahead yourself, not others", it helps me alot. Sometimes if we look at others work, we judge ourselves and make parallels. This can drive us into jelaousy. The way out is not to make parallels between us and others. We must learn on others mistakes and not be afraid to make mistakes, because someone can learn from us.
Oh, thank you, i am trying to be as polite as possible, because i never know the reason. I become rude only if others are allow themself to show pure ignorance and disrespect of what i do and say.
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Ryukocha In reply to Shakhorht [2014-10-30 23:45:38 +0000 UTC]
Haha, thank you very much! \(//∇//)\
When I told my friend that you complimented my art, she didn't believe me xD
And that is an excellent phrase to live by. I think I've heard it said in a thousand different ways... all of them equally as true.
Kind of off-topic: I have an Art teacher who always makes us copy other artists' works for practice (which I understand), but then he judges the students' work by comparing them to the original, instead of considering the student's own merit. And sometimes, he compares the members of the class with each other (and he's very rude about it too).
Next time he does that, I'll tell him your art-injunction, if you don't mind.
(^ー^)ノ
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Shakhorht In reply to Ryukocha [2014-10-31 00:19:56 +0000 UTC]
Wow, lol
Thank you! c:
Lol, ok! I am curious to know what will he say xD
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Ryukocha In reply to CrisCanvas [2014-10-01 16:10:58 +0000 UTC]
That triple heart is more than enough for me
Thank you~ You're so sweet ^_^
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