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Published: 2017-08-04 19:40:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 191974; Favourites: 859; Downloads: 405
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Description I think I have fix my "weird face" issue. Gimme some more feedback! 
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Comments: 15

Demonkingswrath [2022-11-03 12:36:37 +0000 UTC]

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schnarre [2017-08-21 22:35:54 +0000 UTC]

...Very sexy from top to toes, though I think her hair needs to be in motion if she's swinging from one spot to another: this can be a simple angle change, with her hair slightly in one direction to convey motion.

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AWSOMEDUDEX90 [2017-08-06 03:08:34 +0000 UTC]

Very nice I love the outfit

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sampleguy In reply to AWSOMEDUDEX90 [2017-08-06 03:48:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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AWSOMEDUDEX90 In reply to sampleguy [2017-08-06 03:49:15 +0000 UTC]

Ur very welcome

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undeadpenguin37 [2017-08-04 21:47:26 +0000 UTC]

Overall fantastic job! One thing that stood out to me is that you have her posed like she's flying through the air shooting a web, but her hair is totally motionless. I'd expect it to look a bit more windswept if she had as much forward momentum as the drawing seems to be implying.

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sampleguy In reply to undeadpenguin37 [2017-08-06 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]

I agree. In the sketch phase I tried it a few times and I just couldn't get it to look right. 
So I need to figure out hair a little bit better as well

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VortoForgisto [2017-08-04 21:34:19 +0000 UTC]

I think she looks fine!  You rarely see the web coming out of the wrist like that.  Nice job!

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sampleguy In reply to VortoForgisto [2017-08-06 03:49:11 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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R-Masters [2017-08-04 20:06:59 +0000 UTC]

I feel bad criticizing such a great piece.

Compliments first.
So dynamic, really feels like a body in motion even thought obviously it's posed for glamour.  Great texture, it's sexy and I could easily imagine it animated.
Damn that hair looks great.

Nitpicky comments.
Her right arm (screen left) looks stubby, instead of looking like it's pointed backward.
Face is good, I think you still need a little work on noses.  

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Apokol In reply to R-Masters [2017-08-04 23:25:16 +0000 UTC]

I fully agree.

Looks great and nose does not look so bad...yet the arm looks to short

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sampleguy In reply to R-Masters [2017-08-04 21:10:55 +0000 UTC]

Agreed on all nitpicks 
i wish I could find a good nose tutorial 

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R-Masters In reply to sampleguy [2017-08-09 17:14:20 +0000 UTC]

But my main review is still "Looks really really good"

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StevenSecret [2017-08-04 19:46:22 +0000 UTC]

The face does look a lot better; I think the problem was how high up on the face you were putting the eyes. There's still something about the skin that I just can't put my finger on, though. Maybe I'm just not used to seeing such soft lighting used.

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sampleguy In reply to StevenSecret [2017-08-04 21:09:53 +0000 UTC]

There is probably something else I need to do to it thanks for the comment!

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