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Published: 2017-08-04 19:40:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 191974; Favourites: 859; Downloads: 405
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I think I have fix my "weird face" issue. Gimme some more feedback!Related content
Comments: 15
Demonkingswrath [2022-11-03 12:36:37 +0000 UTC]
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schnarre [2017-08-21 22:35:54 +0000 UTC]
...Very sexy from top to toes, though I think her hair needs to be in motion if she's swinging from one spot to another: this can be a simple angle change, with her hair slightly in one direction to convey motion.
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undeadpenguin37 [2017-08-04 21:47:26 +0000 UTC]
Overall fantastic job! One thing that stood out to me is that you have her posed like she's flying through the air shooting a web, but her hair is totally motionless. I'd expect it to look a bit more windswept if she had as much forward momentum as the drawing seems to be implying.
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sampleguy In reply to undeadpenguin37 [2017-08-06 03:48:44 +0000 UTC]
I agree. In the sketch phase I tried it a few times and I just couldn't get it to look right.
So I need to figure out hair a little bit better as well
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VortoForgisto [2017-08-04 21:34:19 +0000 UTC]
I think she looks fine! You rarely see the web coming out of the wrist like that. Nice job!
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R-Masters [2017-08-04 20:06:59 +0000 UTC]
I feel bad criticizing such a great piece.
Compliments first.
So dynamic, really feels like a body in motion even thought obviously it's posed for glamour. Great texture, it's sexy and I could easily imagine it animated.
Damn that hair looks great.
Nitpicky comments.
Her right arm (screen left) looks stubby, instead of looking like it's pointed backward.
Face is good, I think you still need a little work on noses.
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Apokol In reply to R-Masters [2017-08-04 23:25:16 +0000 UTC]
I fully agree.
Looks great and nose does not look so bad...yet the arm looks to short
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sampleguy In reply to R-Masters [2017-08-04 21:10:55 +0000 UTC]
Agreed on all nitpicks
i wish I could find a good nose tutorial
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R-Masters In reply to sampleguy [2017-08-09 17:14:20 +0000 UTC]
But my main review is still "Looks really really good"
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StevenSecret [2017-08-04 19:46:22 +0000 UTC]
The face does look a lot better; I think the problem was how high up on the face you were putting the eyes. There's still something about the skin that I just can't put my finger on, though. Maybe I'm just not used to seeing such soft lighting used.
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sampleguy In reply to StevenSecret [2017-08-04 21:09:53 +0000 UTC]
There is probably something else I need to do to it thanks for the comment!
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