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...then you break your mother's back!
Here it is! FINALLY. My entry for =SparklyDest 's March EMTC. Is it just me, or has March been the worst month to-date this year?

In any case, the theme is "Superstitions," and it was one of my new year's goals to enter every EMTC! Going strong, so far.

The original version of this has clouds in the sky, but I was doing that at 12 AM last night, and somehow I royally messed up the timing. I spent an hour and a half trying to fix it this morning until I realized that they're not necessary.

Frames: 236
Program: CS3
Time: ~5 hours?
Feelings: I know it's not amazing.

I will never wait this long to start my contest entry again!

AND OH MY GOD, I FOUND A WAY TO MAKE THE EMOTES BOUNCE THAT ISN'T ABSOLUTELY RIDICULOUS. I LOVE IT.
And I hand-shaded them for the first time.

Constructive feedback encouraged.
`SanguineEpitaph

No mothers were harmed in the making of this animation.
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Comments: 105

victoriadarke In reply to ??? [2011-03-28 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]

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creativsis In reply to ??? [2011-03-28 02:06:54 +0000 UTC]

Well done as always.

What's up with the >> in the break your mother's back part? Hmm?
Not nice. lolz.

I can't give Constructive feedback though because I don't know much about this.
Oh well.

Keep the awesome work!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to creativsis [2011-03-28 11:49:07 +0000 UTC]

I was just adding it for...for...for..



I'm glad you like it! Thank you for your comment.

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creativsis In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-31 01:42:17 +0000 UTC]

lolz, I was joking.

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DannyMarie [2011-03-27 16:36:33 +0000 UTC]

hahaha oops mom needs an ambulances

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to DannyMarie [2011-03-27 19:26:41 +0000 UTC]

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neonpenz [2011-03-27 11:45:53 +0000 UTC]

so cute! I like how you did this superstition. The stumble was cute! and the bounce.... well was amazing!!! I think you did a great job on it!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to neonpenz [2011-03-27 19:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so, so much!

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neonpenz In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-27 20:08:32 +0000 UTC]

no problem!

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TempestuousWorgen In reply to ??? [2011-03-27 03:51:08 +0000 UTC]

Fantastic work! I wasn't aware, though, that emotes had spines to break. Wonderful topic for the EMTC.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to TempestuousWorgen [2011-03-27 04:40:19 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks!

Haha, I didn't know how to accomplish that until I thought about how they would look without support.

I love superstitions!

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TempestuousWorgen In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-28 21:46:54 +0000 UTC]

You're very welcome.

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quietlyintheshadows In reply to ??? [2011-03-26 21:06:42 +0000 UTC]

Nice job! and I love your take on this poor mother emote

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to quietlyintheshadows [2011-03-26 21:13:31 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks so much! I'm glad you like it.

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AwsomeEevee [2011-03-26 20:39:02 +0000 UTC]

lol i don't get it. jk i do get it. dB

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to AwsomeEevee [2011-03-26 20:43:46 +0000 UTC]

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darkmeridian13 In reply to ??? [2011-03-26 15:11:54 +0000 UTC]

ES SO SILLY. XD

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Lokiev [2011-03-26 08:28:38 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE IT TOO.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Lokiev [2011-03-26 13:33:07 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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davidanaandrake In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 21:56:06 +0000 UTC]

*watches it a few times and reads the blurb again* ... ooooh! XD Now I get it XD

In NZ it's "If you step on a crack you marry a rat!" XD The bouncy and the sploooooge work really well!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to davidanaandrake [2011-03-26 01:03:06 +0000 UTC]

! That's interesting. I wonder why it's different for the two countries.

Glad you like it.

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davidanaandrake In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 05:05:13 +0000 UTC]

*shrug* cultural. And "you'll break your momas back" probably flows worse with our accent than yours. :3

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to davidanaandrake [2011-03-26 05:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh right, y'all do weird things.

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davidanaandrake In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 19:36:21 +0000 UTC]

XD

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funinsun2 In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 21:44:13 +0000 UTC]

SOOOOOO CUTEE!!
OMFFFG!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to funinsun2 [2011-03-25 22:13:22 +0000 UTC]

!

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funinsun2 In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 00:13:07 +0000 UTC]

hehe

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Leitography In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 21:41:51 +0000 UTC]

har har har har i like it. but i wouldnt understand it you didnt explain it to me as you were making it!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Leitography [2011-03-26 01:00:50 +0000 UTC]

! I didn't explain it to you.

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Leitography In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 20:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Um hello I was sitting next to you while you were making it and we talked about the idea for it while walking to the whole school meeting!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Leitography [2011-03-26 20:28:17 +0000 UTC]

No you weren't. .-.

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Leitography In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 20:29:34 +0000 UTC]

Be that way. You big baby.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Leitography [2011-03-26 20:31:56 +0000 UTC]

!

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Leitography In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 20:33:32 +0000 UTC]

Stop being so babyish! It's not attractive.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Leitography [2011-03-26 20:39:13 +0000 UTC]

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SparklyDest In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 18:14:54 +0000 UTC]

When the purple guy just kinda sagged....I admit, I laughed out loud. I still avoid cracks.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to SparklyDest [2011-03-25 19:37:58 +0000 UTC]

Yay! Mission accomplished.

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Katuend [2011-03-25 17:51:11 +0000 UTC]

And ignore the parts which are bad in grammar and/or missing spaced and/or missing enters
I tend to fail at those alot

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Katuend In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 17:48:04 +0000 UTC]

I would give a critique but I fail at those (Or I just prefer constructive comments xD)
I have to admit, I absolutely love the little bounce the little stumble is nicely done, it looks somewhat true to life. But I could imagine the emote almost falling more flat on its face? Could be an idea to make it so it flattens out more, and maybe even twist more as if it was falling down, but that's just me, as it seems like a spring and it just bounces up (Oh how I would love that to happen irl) The scrolling from one scene to another seems somewhat slow in places, maybe make it a consistent 2pixel move if not already?
I did think of this superstition myself...and Emotes don't have backs so I completely avoided it - I love how you made it, and it's so..jelly like I can't say anything to improve there, I do like it
As for the scenery The crack is defiantly well made It's easy to see and recognisable, the path does seem a bit flat though, the only idea I have for that though is maybe trying more of a 3D type effect, maybe more towards isometric pixeling As you said with the clouds it does seem a little bland, one Idea could be just to put some stereotypical type of skyscrapers in the background? even if faint I think it could add something to it The sun is very...whitish? I think maybe making it a bit more yellow could work
Ohey, wall of text. And honestly I may steal that bouncing soon I love the emote

Good luck in the contest <3
Sorry for the wall of text D:

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Katuend [2011-03-25 21:54:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh, hush, you! You're an amazing feedback-er!! It's just that everyyyyoneeee will see it if you put it in the critique box. xD

YAY! Glad you like my bounce...er..THE bouncing. D'x
It's funny that you mention the falling on its face. That was part of my original idea, and I don't really know why I didn't follow through with it. I think when I got to that part, I didn't think about a big fall, so I just went with an easier bounce. It was meant to be a stumble, anyway.


THE SCROLLING.
NIGHTMARES. DEATH.
It was such a terrible process. The initial scroll to the mother was 1px the whole way. The way back, actually, was more difficult because of the clouds I deleted and blahblahblah. It was just a mess.
But yes, I will foresee that next time. c:

Looking back, I do wish I had something in the background. Maybe an edit at a later time.

Isometric pixelling. Maybe I have to look into this.


Thanks so much for your wall of helpful text.


I appreciate it so much.

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Katuend In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 04:19:55 +0000 UTC]

Stumble work, that works also

Dont die with the scrolling, that would be...unhealthy, you know
Fair neough, I can udnerstand the xcrollign thing, I hate scenery and what not xD

Iso pixel work is fairly simple once you get the hang of it- althought it can be hard to begin with, i'd say start glaring at tutorials

I will help how I can

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Katuend [2011-03-26 17:24:29 +0000 UTC]

I'll have to look into isometric pixeling, since I have no idea what it is now. .-.


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Katuend In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-26 18:49:35 +0000 UTC]

If you need any help just say so, I may not be perfect at isometic stuff, but I can do enough with it

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Katuend [2011-03-26 22:21:09 +0000 UTC]

Okay! Thank you! I'll keep you in mind.

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Steeboh In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 16:40:52 +0000 UTC]

Woo!

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Icyiceman [2011-03-25 15:26:50 +0000 UTC]

Ahaha! I love how the mother just flops.

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to Icyiceman [2011-03-25 16:05:30 +0000 UTC]

Yay!

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RinKiriyu In reply to ??? [2011-03-25 15:12:37 +0000 UTC]

i love it, i love it, i love it!

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SanguineEpitaph In reply to RinKiriyu [2011-03-25 15:13:19 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, thank you, thank you!

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RinKiriyu In reply to SanguineEpitaph [2011-03-25 15:13:36 +0000 UTC]

: D

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