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SaturnGrl — Sonic OC: Master Magnus by-nc-nd

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Description This is a fan Character based on the Sonic Riders/Babylon Rouges, and is being developed for a role in an upcoming Babylon Rouges Fan Fiction I'm putting together.
I chose the Magpie, because where I come from, these birds, though very beautiful indeed, are notorious thieves! O_o
I've seen one make off with a 5 pound steak...in flight! That was a sad barbeque day...but pretty cool at the same time! These birds also love the shineys! So watch out if you wear flashy jewelry around these birds. They might just rob you blind! XD
I chose the name "Magnus" in reference to the "Magnus Effect", and also because the name "Mag-nus" shares the first part of his Species name of "Mag-pie".

*Edit: Development Complete. Character is now official in my gallery. *

Please do Comment and Critique. ^_^

Name: Magnus
Nickname: "Master Magnus", The Seeker, Herald of Babylon
Species: Black-billed Magpie (Babylonian)
Gender: Male
Eyes: Sky Blue
Color: Black, White, Iridescent Navy Blue
Height: 120 cm (3' 11")
Weight: 40 kg (88 lbs)
Age: 25
Likes: Treasure, Adventure, Loyalty, Honor
Dislikes: Thieves without Honor, Rash decisions, Disrespect, Arrogance, Milk
Team Member Type: Skill Type
The "Skill Type" ability manages to combine and maximize Dash and Curve abilities with minimal sacrifice to Limit abilities in order to gain unmatched Inertial Drifting and Cornering skills, and combined with the Gravity Control and Dive, he's a tough opponent on the track.

Skill Stats:
Dash: *****
Limit: ****
Power: ***
Curve: *****

Also as a special feature for "Skill Types" they can access areas of tracks that are only available for other player types through "Attack Mode".

Skills:
Master Thief - Speaks for itself. With age come his experience and as the designated "Skill Type" character, Magnus features abilities that enhance his Instincts, Reflexes, Agility, and Stealth, but he has no special powers.

Extreme Gear (Zero Gravity) The Swift Corsair - His skills on a board are legendary. His board also has a built in voice command module that allows the Swift Corsair to undertake certain commands from Magnus.

"Corsair" - Summons the board if Magnus is separated from it.
"Shield" - The board flies in front of Magnus and acts as a shield.
"Charge" - The board will jump into top speed for a short distance. Usually makes for an effectively fast escape, or can easily clear a path through anything...or anyone blocking Magnus' path.

The Swift Corsair hosts a central computer core, similar to the one that Wave wears around her neck, that allows for the voice command programming tech in this particular gear.

Blackbird Rush - A Stealth skill Magnus uses as an evasion tactic, and at times a tactic for catching his foes off guard. It will appear as though Magnus is surrounded by a massive flock of smaller black birds that will fly right at you. Before it looks like the birds are about to collide with you, the flock turns out to be only a bunch of black feathers.

Steel Staff - As in the tradition of the Babylong Rouges, Magnus does carry a weapon to knock others from their boards, or to just engage his enemies if he gets cornered. Its a collapsable/extendable steel bo staff.

Marital Status:Single (involved?)

Family: Deceased, his clan was massacred

Home: He is generally Nomadic, but he claims his loyalty to the Hanging Gardens of Babylon.

Personality: Magnus is steadfast, proud, level headed and always keeps an air of cool calm no matter the situation. He has a constant calculating look in his eye, and he always seems to have a plan for every situation. When he sets his sights on a goal or prize to steal, he always gets what he wants, however, he does not believe any treasure is worth more than your life.
He lives his life by a code of Honorable Thieves that he upholds to the highest degree. No other thief dares to question or violate this code, fearing Master Magnus' strict and swift discipline.
He is a strict teacher for the young heir, and demands that his student always sees to the ways of the Honorable Thief and Babylonian Society.

Fears and Flaws: His greatest flaw is his pride. He is a proud Babylonian down to the core and he will defend the honor of his home and his name, should anyone dare to raise doubt of his integrity and his Code of Honor.
His greatest fear is dishonoring the spirits of the past, and failing his service to the Heir of Babylon. He wants the Hanging Gardens of Babylon to be restored to its original glory, but even he knows that the fate of the Gardens is in the hands of the destined Heir.

Background: Before the fall of the Gardens, Magnus' ancestor was once the Master Thief in service to the Old King of the Hanging Gardens of Babylon, charged with teaching the King's heir in all his trades and skills to prepare the young Heir for a future as King.
On the fated day when the Heir of Babylon and his people were scattered to the great winds, the ancestor swore to the dying King to seek out the Heir of Babylon and to ensure the youth would ascend to restore and rebuild the Hanging Gardens of Babylon to her original pristine state and glory, and would further advise the prince to govern as a great King for the future.
Since the fall of their homeland, the descendants of this ancestor have passed down the charged duty to search for the foretold missing Heir who was said to carry with him the Key to restoring the Hanging Gardens of Babylon. Master Magnus, as the most recent descendant, has undertaken the inherited mission to seek out and mentor the Heir of Babylon. He has had many adventures, and followed many leads to seek out his charge, but the Heir always seemed to be one step ahead, and just beyond his reach...until the fateful day destiny intervened…

Babylon Rouges, Sonic Riders & Zero Gravity © Sonic Team & Sega
Master Magnus the Magpie © Me
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Comments: 197

SaturnGrl In reply to ??? [2012-06-19 03:17:59 +0000 UTC]

His favorite dream is to succeed at his mission, and be able to live a life free of fear.

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CommandantZarothaa In reply to SaturnGrl [2012-06-19 03:31:56 +0000 UTC]

And Nightmare/

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SaturnGrl In reply to CommandantZarothaa [2012-06-19 16:18:07 +0000 UTC]

His worst nightmare is to fail in his duty, and the world will fall into darkness and chaos, as per the prophecy, and that he will lose everything, and everyone he cares for.

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Kuma-Bei [2012-03-10 19:16:56 +0000 UTC]

This is a very, VERY good design, but for a babylonian with a board, something seems to be missing....*realizes something's missing from face* He has no kind of goggles or glasses on him. I'm so used to seeing those on any character from free riders that it's kinda pathetic ^^

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SaturnGrl In reply to Kuma-Bei [2012-03-10 20:17:00 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I never liked goggles very much personally, and its kinda funny how you hardly see the characters ever really wear them. In the games, you just look at the backs of their heads, and in most of the cut scenes, they don't wear the goggles/sunglasses while riding. I just found it pointless or silly. Also, I felt that birds wouldn't really need goggles to fly anyways, so I never designed any for Magnus. ^_^

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Kuma-Bei In reply to SaturnGrl [2012-03-11 02:47:01 +0000 UTC]

That's definitely understandable, and those are some REALLY valid points.....now that i think about it, do any of the characters ever wear their goggles/glasses?

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SaturnGrl In reply to Kuma-Bei [2012-03-12 15:16:05 +0000 UTC]

There are a few times when you see them wear the goggles/glasses. A couple cutscenes and a few game screen caps folks manage to take shows them wearing them occasionally, but not often.
I think it all depends on the gaming developers.

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ryukem [2011-05-20 15:25:14 +0000 UTC]

the heird of babylon is jet isn't it?

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SaturnGrl In reply to ryukem [2011-05-20 19:42:55 +0000 UTC]

Yes, he is the Heir. ^_^

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323starlight [2011-04-19 01:23:25 +0000 UTC]

So he's a hero and a theif why does that not make sense

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SaturnGrl In reply to 323starlight [2011-04-19 15:19:28 +0000 UTC]

There is such a thing as an honorable thief.

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AwalNarwhal In reply to SaturnGrl [2018-07-30 16:07:00 +0000 UTC]

no there really isnt

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SaturnGrl In reply to AwalNarwhal [2018-07-30 16:23:45 +0000 UTC]

Was not the story of Robin Hood about a man who was an honorable thief? Stealing from the rich, and giving back to the poor of Knottingham?
Was not Zorro an honorable bandit? Taking back food and gold from the corrupt governors for the people of California?
Is Batman not an honorable vigilante? Taking the law into his own hands, and uses criminal tactics to bring justice to Gotham City?

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AwalNarwhal In reply to SaturnGrl [2018-08-02 01:26:00 +0000 UTC]

1. It says your a notorious thief, as in a bad one

2. Stealing is just plain out wrong tbh, It really annoys me when people say they can steal shit just cause they dont have money

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SaturnGrl In reply to AwalNarwhal [2018-08-03 15:22:24 +0000 UTC]

I was saying that the IRL birds, Black-billed Magpies, are known to be "notorious thieves" because these birds like to fly in and take shiny things and food. You know, like most wild animals will do. I didn't say anything about myself of my character being "notorious" thieves.

If you actually read the profile for the character, he is, like the other Babylon Rogues, a type of thief, but he lives by a code of honor. He does not steal because he is hungry. His main purpose is to steal back the treasures of Babylon, because they are part of his culture and history.

Indeed, I am not sure why you are here to raise drama over a fan character that is part of fiction. It is just a creation I made out of my love for the Sonic Fandom I grew up with and still enjoy to this day. Your disdain will not change the fact that this was created and exists in my gallery. I would recommend trying to be a little more open to ideas and try to be a little more friendly to those you interact with.

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AwalNarwhal In reply to SaturnGrl [2018-08-06 22:57:01 +0000 UTC]

I mean if you wanna become better you gotta take criticism, But other than that whatever

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SaturnGrl In reply to AwalNarwhal [2018-08-07 00:50:54 +0000 UTC]

I am more than happy to take constructive criticism, but your approach has been nothing but revile with words of calumny. Constructive criticism is supposed to be helpful and tactful, by saying things like; "This is an interesting , but maybe if you work a little more on , it could ," or "This part is too . Perhaps if you tried a different , it might make it more ."

Instead you come onto my artwork page, not with one thread of berating comments, but two threads to provide nothing but statements and declarations that what I created is either a completely bad concept, or something I made to copy some popular anime character. None of your comment threads showed any constructive criticism at all. It is obvious that you only came here to start a fight or to try and get under my skin. And judging by your comment history on DeviantART, and empty artwork gallery, that was your sole purpose for joining this community. You did not come here to share artwork and be a part of this community as an actual contributor. You simply came here to get your kicks by trolling others and trying to either start conflict and drama, or make yourself feel better by hurting someone else.

Unfortunately, your actions here will only lead to you ending up banned from the community, unless you can grow up and learn how to actually be a contributor and a friend. And to that extent, I shall hence forth end our conversations from this point on. Any further attempts to attack me or my artwork in the manner that you have been showing through your "current" account, I will not hesitate to submit a report on your behavior.
Thank you, and farewell.

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323starlight In reply to ??? [2011-04-16 02:08:11 +0000 UTC]

Cool but just be glad you didn't make him a falcon, Star has a dislike to falcons
Reason: one killed his father

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Ilovesonicandfriend In reply to ??? [2011-02-14 09:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Cool character.

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SaturnGrl In reply to Ilovesonicandfriend [2011-02-14 22:12:14 +0000 UTC]

thank you

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Ilovesonicandfriend In reply to SaturnGrl [2011-02-15 12:19:37 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. Friend

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Xanthawind In reply to ??? [2010-12-13 23:44:20 +0000 UTC]

amazing board i know little about the sonic rider games i only played the first but this would be a great character

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SaturnGrl In reply to Xanthawind [2010-12-15 20:32:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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rockyroad040 In reply to ??? [2010-12-08 04:02:05 +0000 UTC]

He's so cute!!

and adorable!!

OH MY GOD!

i love this design

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SaturnGrl In reply to rockyroad040 [2010-12-09 20:34:09 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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RougetheBeautiful In reply to ??? [2010-11-06 18:50:40 +0000 UTC]

He is awesome! What is the name of the fan-fiction he's in? Thank you!~~

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SaturnGrl In reply to RougetheBeautiful [2010-11-06 19:34:31 +0000 UTC]

His fan fiction I am working on is going to be in a comic form. It is called
Sonic Riders: The Heir of Babylon.


Thanks for the comment ^_^

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RougetheBeautiful In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-11-07 12:37:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! :3 I can't wait to read it!
lol sorry for asking, but can you link when your done with the first chapter

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SaturnGrl In reply to RougetheBeautiful [2010-11-08 01:44:52 +0000 UTC]

I will be submitting it here as the pages are completed. ^_^

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RougetheBeautiful In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-11-09 23:20:14 +0000 UTC]

Ah, thank you

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FoxSummoner In reply to ??? [2010-10-05 17:00:13 +0000 UTC]

would u mind takinga look at my sonic oc may coul u draw him if not to mutch trouble

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FoxSummoner In reply to ??? [2010-10-05 16:57:53 +0000 UTC]

very talented

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sonamy-666 In reply to ??? [2010-08-13 16:43:08 +0000 UTC]

Hello, would you like to enter your OC in my free competition? terms and condition are described in the link [link]

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SaturnGrl In reply to sonamy-666 [2010-08-14 08:22:01 +0000 UTC]

No, thanks.

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sonamy-666 In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-08-14 19:52:20 +0000 UTC]

Darn it. Then could you help me out by showing this advert to your friends who also have Sonic OCs?

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SaturnGrl In reply to sonamy-666 [2010-08-14 20:57:29 +0000 UTC]

Because I am not a billboard. If people take interest in your contest, then that's based on their own interest.
Personally, I don't enter these things, nor do I give permission for my images to be used in other's video projects. It always leads to YouTube, and I hate YouTubers.

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sonamy-666 In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-08-15 11:07:48 +0000 UTC]

I don't have a Youtube account, and my aurdiance is VERY restricted, trust me, the porject will never see Youtube

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CFZProductions In reply to ??? [2010-08-11 06:20:59 +0000 UTC]

Are you takin requests this is amazing

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SaturnGrl In reply to CFZProductions [2010-08-11 13:24:59 +0000 UTC]

Requests are closed, and reserved for friends primarilly. But if you'd like to commission, I'll look into opening up to the public soon.

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CFZProductions In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-08-11 19:24:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks anyway

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CFZProductions In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-08-11 19:18:22 +0000 UTC]

what's commission

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SaturnGrl In reply to CFZProductions [2010-08-12 05:31:23 +0000 UTC]

A Commission is where you pay for the artwork and services. My prices are listed on my profile page.

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CFZProductions In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-08-13 03:35:38 +0000 UTC]

well thanks anyway

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Chowder995 In reply to ??? [2010-06-26 15:37:02 +0000 UTC]

I love it!!!

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SaturnGrl In reply to Chowder995 [2010-06-26 19:20:24 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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HorrorViewed [2010-03-27 04:19:01 +0000 UTC]

Cool love to Sonic Rider OC stuff nice work XD

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SaturnGrl In reply to HorrorViewed [2010-03-27 20:17:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Magnus is my best character. ^_^

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HorrorViewed In reply to SaturnGrl [2010-03-27 22:54:35 +0000 UTC]

I bet he is

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pikminsonicfan888 [2010-02-14 09:45:47 +0000 UTC]

cool character, great job ^^

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SaturnGrl In reply to pikminsonicfan888 [2010-02-14 18:56:28 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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