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OK so first off I have never Critique before and I also don't judge peoples art too much so yea. I am going to make a list of the things You should keep, change, and add.
Keep:
-Colors (defiantly keep the colors it just fits the character well )
-Hair Style (I love the ponytail it looks really nice)
-Outfit (I really like the outfit it looks great on Valentine with the hair style)
-Backstory (It was a pretty nice and detailed back story does work)
Change:
-Cuts and Scars (It all is similar looking, spice things up a bit like bruises and detailed scars. Make some super bloody and super clean etc.)
- Less Rips in Outfit (The rips are a cool addition but I feel like there are to many. Personal opinion though)
Adds/Suggestions:
-More detailed outfit(I love the outfit but it seems a little plain. Why not add blood or wrinkles in the mix. I realize there are rips but it still is a little plain)
-Hair Detail ( Why not add random hair strands to make seem she just got of a crazy fight or woke up lols)
-Accessories (Cool accessories would just make things a little cooler but just personal opinion)
Well there is my review
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First off, great character overall! It seems like you put a lot of effort into them.
I feel like I'm being a bit nitpicky with this specific thing, but it's the small things that count, right? When it came to your character's abilities, one of them is stealth. If it's mostly referring to slipping the letter into a future victims locker, house, etc., then it's fine. Chasing and taunting a victim, however, isn't really the best example of stealth. Perhaps a better way to describe it would be Stalking and taunting? I don't know, I was a bit confused on that.
The rest of your character's information on the ref sheet is excellent! Good job!
Your anatomy is very good. Props to you on that. It looks amazing.
The outfit seems a bit plain. I feel like if you added some highlight and shadow and some extra details, it would really pop. Especially the red stains (which I assume are blood). It'd also be very good to do some shading around where the tears in the clothing are. I bet it'd give a great effect.
The skin, although not much is showing, is pretty good. Lighter skins are very hard to work with when highlighting and shading, but a little bit of it here and there would really help accentuate some of your character's features. /Especially/ around the wounds/scars. You could work with the clothing that's already town and do some really good effects!
The hair looks very nice. I see that you made the tips of the bangs darker in the front, but not in the back. Although going hardcore on the hair's shading would probably look a bit strange, doing a sort of light to dark gradient from the roots to the tips would work very well.
Overall, this is a fantastic character! Very unique and well done. Good job!
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The tips of her hair in her bangs is suppose to be blood from the missing eye and it's dried up but I wasn't entirely sure on how to execute it. Also, her abilities and such seem a bit vague at the moment but it'll all come together once her story is out. I'm glad you like her and thanks for your feedback!
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Ah, alright. I thought it was shading, since it looked like a darker shade of the original hair colour. Perhaps with the hair you could make the bloodied tips look a bit more bloody by blending in a darkish-red into it. If you use Sai, I'd recommend Β the watercolour tool over the base colouring of the hair. Then once you blend in the darkish red you could blend in a darker red. When I did it, it looked like this:Β i66.tinypic.com/dgt8nr.png . If you want the blood to be darker, you could choose darker reds.
Still, good job!Β
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Alright, here we go:
Your anatomy, by far, is outstanding. Some look a bit off, but they are nicely done!
The cuts look fantastic, but could use some more depth.
The colors you used are also fantastic. I love the feel it gives you when looking at the character. I love that you didn't go out of the way to make her, either. (What I mean by that is she doesn't have LOADS of things on her-- she's very balanced and simple. It's nice!)
Her hair could use more texture into it, but that would look odd with your style. I think just a few texture lines on the bangs and the back pony tail would help it!
As for the clothing-- I think you should study just a bit more. They look a tad bit stiff with no detail. Adding some wrinkles in the sweater and more ruffles on her skirt would have pulled her together a bit more.
Also-- I would personally work on that-- but it wasn't a bad choice. Just colors to make her stand out and not make it look so neutral.
Great work and a gorgeous character!
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I think you critiques was really good and thought out well! π
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Arghhh, I didn't read through it before submitting! It has a limit to what I can say! ;-;
Here-- Lemme fix this.
Scarmmetry
EDITS:
-Your anatomy, by far, is outstanding. Some of the hands look a bit off, but they are nicely done!
-Also-- I would personally work on studying background and colors-- but what you chose wasn't a bad choice. Just colors to make her stand out and not make it look so neutral.
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I hate doing outlines like this for the hair I'm use to doing individual strokes and it looks a lot better but I wanted to give flat colors so people could get the colors from the character itself instead of me having to do the color bubbles to the side. Thank you for your thoughts and support! ;v;
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You're very welcome! I'm glad you have reason to it and see it!
(Your work is fantastic, I honestly love it! I saw you on YouTube and watched you right after!)
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Aww I'm so glad you like my art ;v; It's honoring!
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;U; <3Β
I found you by the drawing you did of Yandere-Chan!
And I cannot wait to see more. >U< Eii!
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Oh! I'm drawing another Yandere picture right now to thank my subscribers for 900+ Subs! I hope they'll like it because most people just find me because of my Yandere speedpaint ;v; Which tbh I don't even like anymore
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Oh, lovely! I'm so excited to see!
I quite love it. ;u; You did so well, imo!
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omg, another albino baby~
I only have one myself ;;v;;;
Can I draw her?
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Go ahead! It's weird that there are not many albino creepypastas it's fun to create an interesting concept!
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XD I know!
I recently made my own little albino proxy if you are interested in seeing him! Maybe Val and him can be enemies or frenemies?
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Either is fine with me!
{ I ship everything I touch so be warned } I'd love to see him though
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XD
here's his gallery folder:Β invaderika.deviantart.com/gallβ¦
And here's his official reference:
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He sounds interesting! I like him ;v; This may sound weird but I would like to do a roleplay of the two so I could see how they'd interact with each other! If you're not comfortable with that I'm completely okay with that if you are I'd love to! I love his concept and I think Valen would get on his nerves a lot since she's so peppy
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I would love too! Via notes or chat? ;v;
And thank you ;v; He's my first albino babu so he was a challenge!
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I prefer notes I like privacy ;u; and Albinos are really hard to work with since you want to make sure that they aren't too washed out but you want them to look like an albino at the same time
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Well, send the note whenever you're ready ;v;Β
and omg the palettes are hard to color!
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It is! Most the time it's like "where tf she go?" When she's on a white background
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XD
I tend to use slight golden colors on the hair so Connor's skin doesn't blend in too much:
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Even though they're suppose to be creepy characters I'm not a huge fan of drawing majorly gory stuff because my stomach is weak to those types of things. { I can't even listen to the cupcakes story } so my characters always have some sort of cute factor to them so I don't feel dreaded to draw them.
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Same here though, I can go a little more gory than i'm use to. But then I get so much shit for doing some cute factor to the character. Like for my character Slender Doll Ally for example.
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Yeah I've heard of her! I just didn't know who created her. I'm surprised that you like Valen more than you like Lila since everyone just falls in love with Lila idk why though. I mean of course I love her I love all of my OCs but people just like her so much more
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Oh! Yea >///< Ally's mine ;v;
Well, I tend to love the oddities XD
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Ok I like the story and character design,
But this is the only thing that concerns me,
The table leg!, well in the description it clearly says her weapon is a 'metal table leg', and that in her story it says that she ripped apart the table leg...but like metal is hard,so it could mean that when she was thrown on the table...she completely broke it? And that's how she easily broke the Metal table leg?
(Sorry if this sounds rude,I just wanna know how)
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She was in a school that wasn't very funded so the tables are very old and worn out and been through a lot and her being thrown across the table just weakened it even more so the screws and such were old and rusty so it wasn't majorly difficult for her to rip it off
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I have given you a critique! ;U;
(I forgot to add about shading and details-- but merh.)
This character is so lovely! >U< You did a GREAT job! <3
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Thank you! I don't like to do shading or a bunch of details with reference sheets because I want people to see the character which is why I didn't add shading and such
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You're very welcome!
(Yeah-- I hate shading, tbh. Lol. Details are also the death of me, I feel your pain.)
OHH! I getcha! Yeah, that's quite a lovely idea. ;u;
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Her backstory is riddled with cliches, but she seems decent otherwise.
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welc
im remaking my pridesona uwu
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thank
you should make a pridesona kid
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