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RasheruSuzie [2018-01-28 22:16:05 +0000 UTC]

Hello from ProjectComment !

The mood and ambiance I think are the strongest part of this painting ^^ You can really feel like you’re there, and you kept just the right amount of detail into the far-away cityscapes.

The main thing I’d recommend is to make the character stand out more. She’s pretty dark against the background, and when comparing with the photo I can see the photo had the person standing pretty much completely against the sky, which allowed better contrast.

Her placement might also not be ideal; she’s almost in the center, but not quite, and her head is vertically centered. Using the rule of thirds could give the image a more comfortable composition. Her upper body looks pretty great, however the legs might be a bit short, and her arms a bit skinny compared to the rest of the body.

The cloud added to the sky is a great idea to make it less empty, but perhaps having a few more smaller clouds would “fill” the sky better. Having just the one, centered cloud feels a little bit unnatural.

I do really like how you’ve handled the rocks, though. They have a great texture and feel to them. The detailing on the character is also really nice and believable, and the background is very well represented overall! Great work! ^^

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Xeversa [2018-01-28 16:22:15 +0000 UTC]

Beutiful lighting used in this illust! For improvements , i'd maybe make the sky a bit more detail (clouds,stars etc.) .If you want the main focus of the pic to be the character i recommend colouring her a bit more bright cuz its a bit too dark. 

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Drakepancake [2018-01-23 01:56:29 +0000 UTC]

Thats a pretty large scene to tackle! wow.
But if you had the time to really grind out drawing the details of the nearest city but can also take like days, Im pretty sure its gonna be super breath taking

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theJfluffy [2018-01-22 21:20:17 +0000 UTC]

It looks so beautiful

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ProtoTEnterprise [2018-01-22 17:33:37 +0000 UTC]

I´m from

At first I thought that the photo was a photo, but later on enlarging it I realized that it was a drawing and that in that drawing was also a man with hat.

What can I say about this work? A great blur in the spectacular lights, the complexity of the stars that contrast with the lower part that would become the city, a good game of shadows because, despite being dark mountains, at the same time the diffusion gives them an air of illusory detail that surprises when one looks at it carefully.

The character, although with his back, has a very opaque color tone that contrasts exquisitely with the lighting of the city and his design seems attractive, having style and a good taste to dress, unlike the "Suicide Squad Joker" "xD

If I want to end my comment, once again you showed me that you have talent for art. Keep it up that way even more, forever <)

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Chazing-Dreams [2018-01-22 04:29:27 +0000 UTC]

Wonderful job and really like the lighting here. Character is nicely drawn and I like how you painted milky way. Since the highlights are warm, you could push the shadows toward blue to bring bit more contrast and depth. Just a thought.

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