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Scribblekin — R5 HC086 part6

Published: 2011-02-21 02:33:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 432; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 7
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Description Dawwww sleepy kitty is so koot :3

Story:
The comedic chase scene continues, all that’s missing is a hallway full of doors on both sides to run through Scooby-doo style, lol. As Maikia is right to point out, the chase really should’ve ended almost immediately since it features a somewhat chubby bipedal creature trying to outrun a lion ^^’ and eventually, the inevitable happens, Ryou manages to tackle Hamada (as in jump on him and pin him down, not the actual move) and he is about to lay down some electric vengeance, when suddenly! Yawn finally takes effect and he rolls off Hamada and into peaceful slumber. (the timing of all this makes me feel like I’ve been channeling the anime writers or something ^^’)
And that’s the end of my entry. I don’t really like the “kick ‘em while their down” aspect of putting your opponent to sleep, but It’s really the only realistic way I could see a win happening in this matchup, even so I’m not gonna be showing/highlighting that part. Also, I like to leave the ending at least a little open, so it is still entirely possible that Maika has a awakening with her, and we’d be right at square one (oh no!)

Artwise, OMGosh it’s over! I got dangerously close to burnout here, spending the entire weekend foregoing sleep and staring bleary eyed at a laptop screen with a deathgrip on a tablet pen has also caused those I live with to voice their concern ^^’ so, I really wanted to go back and do some bonus stuff with Dani and Maika before the battle, to sorta pay back for her awesomeness in her entry, but I just can’t do anymore with this right now.
But this round has been an amazing experience, I think both of us just really poured all of ourselves into it, I find myself rooting for my opponent just as much as I am for myself ^^’
HEY MAIKA! If you beat me you better win the whole thing then, promise! (you know, cause saying I lost to the champion has a better ring to it XD)

Oh, and thanks for the comments everyone who has been commenting! Now that I don’t have a looming deadline I should be able to start replying ^^ but first, sleep. *toddles off to bed*

Dani (me) [link] VS Maika [link]

Part 1 [link]
Part 2 [link]
Part 3 [link]
Part 4 [link]
Part 5 [link]
Part 6 is the end! phew!
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Comments: 11

Lupam [2011-02-22 00:38:49 +0000 UTC]

gotta say it was a really entertaining battle, the art, colors and the story d>w
I couldn’t help but imagine that if this was the real battle and Maika loses, it would be because Ryou would never wake up <.<;; and Maika would’ve had to give up orz. So if it makes Dani and Hamada feel better, they wouldn’t have to “kick Ryou while his down” as you wrote But yeah, I have to agree with you, I like this ending more than just seeing Hamada beat the crap out of Ryou while he's peacefully sleeping (and I'm not saying it because Ryou is my trainer's pkmn )

And OMG! Sleeping cute Ryou <3333

Maika: HA! but of course I'm winnig this tournament òwó9....somehow.........yeah ((ooc: lol, I'll be lucky if she manages to pass the next round...supposing I pass this one too)) But lets hypothetically suppose I don't win this battle, then is your job to win this tourney, got it?

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Scribblekin In reply to Lupam [2011-02-23 00:07:53 +0000 UTC]

yay! ^^
getting characters right and giving out something people find entertaining is what I care about most

seeing that there's gonna be one extra slot open, makes me hope we could somehow both make it, but I guess I shouldn't get my hopes up. I don't think I've ever anticipated a results journal this much before!

Dani: "b-but that would be a lot of pressure! heh, but I guess it's only fair if I expect that of you though ^^'... ok deal!
((ooc: if you win you get yourself a new cheerleader for sure ))

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Lupam In reply to Scribblekin [2011-02-23 00:53:57 +0000 UTC]

I agree, it would be great if one of us got that extra slot. I just hope that the judges are willing to accept that two opponents from the same battle pass….anyway if I don’t pass, I still have another OCT I’m planning to enter. Oh, that! Are you going to enter to the UBF 2011? owo

Maika: and expect a lot more of pressure (and pain) because I’ll make sure that if I loss this round, it would have been against the future champion. ((ooc: yeah, she’s threatening Dani…don’t worry, “barking dogs never bite” ))

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Scribblekin In reply to Lupam [2011-02-26 04:51:13 +0000 UTC]

late late reply ^^'

I can't decide about UBF, I wanna do it with Dani, cause It was my first OCT ever and my first OC, so returning with what I would hope to think is some improvement ^^' is something I'd love to do, but I'm already in multiple OCTs right now 0_0 and it's draining my sanity. still, maybe I'll do the app if I got time and then decide if I wanna actually do r1 or not...

lol, if I get through to the next round, I would pretty much have to include a bit with Maika putting Dani and her pokemon through really rigourous training, and being all "I will NOT allow you to lose the round after defeating me! *RAGE*" XD

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Lupam In reply to Scribblekin [2011-02-28 00:25:15 +0000 UTC]

But isn't ubf and hc running parallen (i don't, in the same time I mean)? You couldn't use Dani, at least not if she's still in hc, right? or did they told you it was okay? (lol, so many questions xD in one sentence) But yeah, you have plenty of motives to use dani in this new ubf.

Oh, 4 octs...and with ubf that would be 5, yup, quite a lot (at least for me x3). You can always enter as an npc tho.

LOL, yeah xDD

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Scribblekin In reply to Lupam [2011-02-28 01:38:52 +0000 UTC]

one of the admins said it would be fine, the trainer would just have to have a pokemon that knows teleport or some other way of getting back and forth really fast ^^

lol but I made up this whole story as kind of a joke, where a year from helios/ubf2011 Dani would be walking through a forest somewhere, and because she's her, be in the wrong place at the wrong time, and get (completely by accident) pulled through time by a random celebi to one year in the past and left there.
No one would believe her of course. XD most people would just think she's nuts and is secretly getting to both competitions with her alakazam from the first UBF

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Lupam In reply to Scribblekin [2011-03-01 00:32:42 +0000 UTC]

ohh teleport, I didn't thought about that owo. Well, then I'm glad we'll be seeing Dany in ubf (whether as a competitor or an npc).

LOL, random celebi xD But that's a great idea o.O It is believable but at the same time crazy, hahaha I like it

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Eledora [2011-02-21 10:12:08 +0000 UTC]

That was such a relaxed battle! They're just chasing each other playfully and sleeps when getting tired...
I like how you didn't portrayed last part where Hamada uses his finishing move too, it makes the ending looks so sweet in its own way!

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Scribblekin In reply to Eledora [2011-02-22 00:01:29 +0000 UTC]

lol, I'm rarely very serious when it comes to pokemon battles, and yeah showing hamada beat up sleepy kitty just didn't feel right, and wasn't how I wanted to leave things

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Cold-Creature [2011-02-21 07:21:10 +0000 UTC]

Ha! I love it when Ryou konks out! And how he has the content grin on his face when he's snoozing!

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Scribblekin In reply to Cold-Creature [2011-02-22 00:00:00 +0000 UTC]

he's such a cute kitty when he's sleeping ^^
glad I was able to entertain

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