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I lost track of the time working on this page. It took FOREVER, that much I'm sure of.
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HAHAH YEA kakarrot got what he deserved 
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That's not very nice
Thanks... bro!
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Sooo cool!!
XD hahahahaha Wow, i love so much your doujinshi
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xD
He has his fridge with sodas, remember? xD
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good, then he can wash away the dry taste.
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Nice work on your first big fighting scene. Is hand to hand combat between characters more difficult to draw compared to firing ki blasts at a distance? 
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I'd say hand to hand is trickier to draw, but more interesting ^^
Ki blasts are also fun ^^
As for talking for 5 minutes during a fight, that's... not very interesting
You forgot to mention powering up for 20 pages xD
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Or making a monologue while the big bad transforms or prepares to kill you. Ahh I love shonen cliches!
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Diggin' how this is turning out... would love to see what Trunks thinks of the big hairy monkey. (doesn't that come up in this fight?)
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The big hairy monkey does come up in the canon fight, whether or not it'll come up in this fanmanga... Who knows? ^^
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lol, hey, Trunks did screw things up a bit. Maybe it won't be needed. lol
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Nooooo, don't wait! Just flick him with your finger and knock him out. When hes knocked out, he can talk to Goku and when he wakes up, they can fight again.
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Yeah, and then it'll be the end of the fanmanga
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Maybe. But it would still be funny.
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Trunks, you've already screwed this timeline royally. There's no going back now. Just end this fight, pop over to Namek and kill Frieza, and then set Vegeta and Bulma up on a blind date. Problems solved.
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Well he doesn't know that he's already changed things ^^
The blind date idea is great, though xD
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wow trunks qui sait plus quoi faire
pour moi il a déjà bien interféré dans la trame originel, je me demande si dans ta version le paradoxe temporelle est possible
exemple : trunks tue sont père donc continue t'il d'exister
sinon les dessins sont toujour aussi bon
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Non, si Trunks tue son père, bah son père sera mort dans cette dimention là, aucun répercussion sur son propre temps ^^
Merci!
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pas de problème
ah ok cela créera un autre univers parallèle alors
moi j’avais penser au retour de trunks mais pour la saga buu.
l'energie de trunks (apres un combat vs dabura)serait absorber en plus de l'energie de broly
ce qui aurai réveiller majin buu qui aurai détruit la terre, laissant juste le temps a trunks de retourner chez la z-team.
combat comme dans le manga defaite de revance de trunks face a dabura et defaite face a buu. entrainement de gohan et trunks avec kaioshin, la z sword...
defaite gohan vs buu gotenks, fusion trunks+gohan.
trunhan bat buu avec un burning kamekameha
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Et en dehors des combats, ce serait quoi l'histoire?
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ben comme dans dbz et la saga buu avec le facteur trunks en plus donc tournoi, babidi etc... goku apprend la fusion au petit. trunks etant avec gohan il les crois mort mais surprise goku les retrouvent au kaioshinkai.
après cela reste un vague idée 
j'ai fait 2 petit bd sur les fusions en utilisant le manga que j'ai scané.
goku+gohan : [link]
vegeta+gohan : [link]
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Well Trunks it looks like your going to have a long time.
The battle did take a while.
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It did ^^
Thanks for your comment!
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> w< Chhhuuuuuu~ Faburlous
Great job
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Pretty much, yes. There are a few things that could be changed, but I wrote the overall plot before I started drawing
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Thanks for your answer. So it will be rather long or short? Mind you, I'm not asking about spoilers or anythig plot-related, just about the length of the whole comic
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It will be of a medium length, I think? I can't be more precise than that
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I really like how you drew the fighting scenes, very dynamic.
Keep un the good work, this story promises well
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You're going to wait, Trunks?
...somehow, I don't see that happening.
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That's true, his plans up to now haven't been very successful ^^
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Yay you updated! I love this page! If I have to be super nitty picky the only thing I would say is to make Goku's mouth bigger when he got punched in the stomach.
Other than that, this is intense!
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NITPICKING IS NOT ALLOWED ON THE PREMISES!!!
xD
I guess you're right, but I didn't want him to look too much like a dork XD
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awesome page trunks should just get in vegetas face and say give us 5 minutes. nah that would piss vegeta off even more.
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Theoretically, Trunks, trying to explain your situation to Son Goku while your father is still an enemy bent on KILLING him and all his friends and family and hasn't even heard of Freeza or Super Sayajins could mess up the timeline even more. Kinda hard to focus on dealing with the current baddie trying to destroy the universe when you've been told that after this you have to deal with another one that makes the current guy look like strawberry shortcake.
Love the background detail and the facial expressions.
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Don't tell any of that to Trunks, you'll really confuse the poor guy
Thank you!
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