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Published: 2010-07-23 05:58:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 758; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 16
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TIMMY IS NOT STUCK IN A WELL! D< Bad dog!Anyway, yep. You do not know long. Bah, I hope it's not so long that it kills computers. May have to cut into bite sized pieces, but that'd ruin my whole layout of the page. Feh. Oh well.
With enough impatience I decided to finally post this. I have to admit, I'm a little scared with posting this. Maybe it's a bit of rushed start. I hope Zerrick is in character. I tried my best. Seeing as he doesn't like violence as it is, I thought he would be the type to go 'wut' when required to beat up a guy that was already crashing on the ground before they even began. Things haven't gotten dirty yet, but he has to take the gloves off some time. This is a tournament after all, and Seto's asking for it.
Seto, Snowy, and uh... the announcer girl I guess are mine.
But Zerrick belongs to please.
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Comments: 35
21cheesecakes [2010-08-02 08:19:40 +0000 UTC]
Poor trimmy D:
Left to die, in a well.... The boy is in another well Seto?
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Serokai In reply to 21cheesecakes [2010-08-02 16:22:32 +0000 UTC]
He's another well with a secret compartment nobody knows about. Yup.... Poor Trimmy.
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Ankherite [2010-07-27 19:48:43 +0000 UTC]
heyyyy keruha I am going around and commenting on every entry so
man where do I even begin with your comic! I loved every minute! you had everything--a good side story, an interesting intro, a SUPER-AWESOME FIGHT, flashbacks, a cliffhanger...man I don't even! why are you so good at everything!
your style of art also works really well for this comic and it's obvious you are TOP-NOTCH at fighting scenes, I think by far you have the most original FINAL TECHNIQUE NO JUTSU
seriously this was like a perfect story through and through I don't even know what else to say!~*~*~
pwshooo congrats on finishing and good luck!
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Serokai In reply to Ankherite [2010-07-28 17:26:31 +0000 UTC]
You know what Speck?
Your comment makes me so dang happy, I don't even... >w< I'm serious.
This is my first OCT. I've never seen an OCT before, aside from the one Spooki showed me during this one and I didn't really do much but glance over it. I just tackled this the way that came naturally. I'm not much of fan for most shounen and action, because most fight scenes make me go been there, done that. I prefer it when the fight is clever and turns in unexpected ways. I'm more of fan for drama and humor so that also become interlaced in my story. ^^
Don't kid yourself though. You have a pretty good thing going yourself. Can't wait to see more of it.
Anyway, thank you so much. I'm really nervous because I have so many ideas for this, and it'd be heartbreaking if I don't get that chance to do them. XD Your comment really helps.
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Ankherite In reply to Serokai [2010-07-29 07:18:56 +0000 UTC]
you did such a good job for your first time maannnn
it was all so awesome I just want to see more
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aznelf [2010-07-25 23:20:26 +0000 UTC]
- OMG LOLLLL wow this comic is amazing. your drawings are soo pretty *u* the anatomy and everything UGGHHH why are you so awesome.
&& your dialogue is fantastic too. I literally laughed out loud at the "Ima Wake" bubble and the panel with Seto lacking focus (lookit that awesome butterfly >:U )
hahaah I can't wait to see the rest <3
you're already off to a fantastic start QuQb
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Serokai In reply to aznelf [2010-07-28 17:02:13 +0000 UTC]
Bwaaaaaah! Thank you so much. ;w; Yours was pretty good too though, you know.
And it make you laugh out loud? For real? OMG! My life has been accomplished. XD
Anyway, thanks again. ^^
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athas [2010-07-24 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]
This is excellent. Your characters are drawn so well, and you let them do a lot of "acting" with their posture and expressions, particularly the eyes. Your dialogue is sharp, too. And the announcer is a hottie.
Can't wait to see the rest of this. Good luck!
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Serokai In reply to athas [2010-07-24 17:55:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. Durn time restraint, I wish I could color this and make it look better. However, I sacrificed the time to put more focus on the anatomy and poses and layout of the comics. Thank you though.
I already have the rest done for the most part. Only one more page and some touching up, but I don't believe I'm going to upload anything until the deadline.
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Regeneration01 [2010-07-23 22:55:41 +0000 UTC]
Should be an interesting victory, seeing as how dissoriented Seto is
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Serokai In reply to Regeneration01 [2010-07-24 13:49:50 +0000 UTC]
That's what I'm going for. :3
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Angymoo [2010-07-23 18:44:58 +0000 UTC]
wow!! 8D This came out so nice! BAD DOGGY BAD!
I feel kinda bad for Seto XD GO SLEEP!!
Anyway, you have a nice comic style 8D I'm in love with it <3
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Serokai In reply to Angymoo [2010-07-23 19:18:30 +0000 UTC]
But if he sleeps now, Zerrick will kick his buutttt. D: ........ Well, actually, he'd probably go 'phew' and walk off the battle field but-
And thank you. My style is based of manga where each panel size and shape really makes a difference.
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Angymoo In reply to Serokai [2010-07-23 19:28:27 +0000 UTC]
Siria: He will? THEN SLEEP!! >D
I see 8D that's interesting!
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MikiXMayhem [2010-07-23 18:23:12 +0000 UTC]
You did such a great job on this. I love it! Lexi thinks Zerrick looks like a total babe in the last panel
Lexi: !!!! >////<
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Serokai In reply to MikiXMayhem [2010-07-23 19:21:29 +0000 UTC]
Hah hah! When I drew that panel I seriously asked myself who's side am I on. XD Seto is all twitching and sleep deprived in my comic while I'm drawing Zerrick like a BA. WTH Keruha, do you even know the rules of this tournament?
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Anime-Tenshi22 [2010-07-23 17:54:04 +0000 UTC]
Awesome!
Everything about it I love!
This is going to be amazing!
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Serokai In reply to Anime-Tenshi22 [2010-07-23 19:21:55 +0000 UTC]
Heh heh. But I can't wait to see your contribution either. ;D
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Drakedragon [2010-07-23 17:48:38 +0000 UTC]
Very well done! I look forward to seeing more and yes, you did a good job keeping Zerrick his same, good self. ^^
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Serokai In reply to Drakedragon [2010-07-23 19:24:06 +0000 UTC]
Phew. Good. It's a little hard, trying to go IC in a tournament battle when the opponent doesn't like to battle. XD
Man, Zerrick and Seto must have had some amazing persuaders. D: Neither of them truly want to be there.
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Drakedragon In reply to Serokai [2010-07-23 19:43:37 +0000 UTC]
^^
I know right? I just hope I do as good a job keeping Seto in character.
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Drakedragon In reply to Serokai [2010-07-23 20:15:37 +0000 UTC]
No, not yet... I might actually have to go back and redo some panels... because I'm not happy with some of them. @_@
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Serokai In reply to Drakedragon [2010-07-23 20:35:45 +0000 UTC]
Aww... Get done soon okay? :3
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Nincada [2010-07-23 17:46:31 +0000 UTC]
GOSH, SETO. YOU DIDN'T CHECK FOR THAT SECRET WALL. THAT'S WHERE THE PERSON IS. UNGH.
The distraction panel pretty much made my day. One sheep, two sheep, red sheep, blue sheep.
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Serokai In reply to Nincada [2010-07-23 19:25:42 +0000 UTC]
He should be smited. u.u Now poor Timmy is going to be stuck in that well forever.
And I'm glad it did.
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Nincada In reply to Serokai [2010-07-23 19:59:59 +0000 UTC]
While Snowy sits outside and barks forever. D;
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NinjaKitty--x [2010-07-23 17:14:51 +0000 UTC]
O8 this is awesome so far. I can't wait for the next page~
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Serokai In reply to NinjaKitty--x [2010-07-23 19:27:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I'm glad you like it. ^^
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Lutroxical [2010-07-23 14:32:23 +0000 UTC]
8'D Omg I loooove it~
Everything looks so great. >w<
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Serokai In reply to Lutroxical [2010-07-23 19:26:34 +0000 UTC]
Thanks. XD I hope for it to get better as I go.
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