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Description

Name: Lucien Aequitas Marduk 'Minddistorter'

Race: Elf

Age: 37 years

Height: 192 cm/6"4

Hair color: Black with red highlights
Eye color: Emerald

Occupation: Discord Warden, servant of Xaos

 

History:

Born and raised as a member of a noble family in the hidden city of Twilight Abyss, which lies within the Labyrinth of Thorns located on Kartha, Lucien and his younger siblings grew up rather sheltered from the rest of the world, receiving education from their parents and the three courts that rule over the city. (More about the 3 courts can be found here: sta.sh/01ay41eltezt )

 

When he turned 21, Lucien chose to join the Court of Minddistorters, devotees of Xaos, the god of discord. By studying their teachings, fulfilling their tasks and succeeding in court internal tournaments, he eventually raised in rank and was raised in the state of Discord Warden - the second highest rank.

 

To honor the god of discord, every Warden forms a bond with a creature of chaos to become one with the great pandemonium of life and death.

Usually the bond is formed with rather mindless and weak willed creatures whose personality will be devoured and eliminated by the stronger Warden, but not all creatures are like that. And so it happened that Lucien forged a bond with a chaotic creature whose mind was as strong as his own.

 

In the beginning it almost drove him mad, constantly hearing the voice of the creature inside his head, demanding to gain control over Lucien's body and mind but the elf was not willing to give up. Eventually they came to a conclusion: Lucien would share his body with the creature named Marduk and they would switch positions every now and then when Lucien saw it fit. Marduk accepted the deal, knowing that they would not be able to agree on more favorable terms for him.

 

For 8 years now Lucien shares his body with the chaotic Marduk, mostly wearing an eye patch on either the left or the right eye to silence either himself or his inner demon.

Recently he tries to take the eye patch off every once in a while to become truly one with Marduk and his chaos.

 



Personality:

Lucien's personality is hard to describe since he's literally three persons in one body, resulting others to think of him having a huge mental disorder.

To keep his three personalities apart, he introduces himself either as Lucien (his original personality), Marduk (the chaos demon) or Aequitas (Lucien and Marduk at the same time).

 

Lucien:

Most court members would describe him as cold and aloof since he doesn't talk much and avoids social interactions. In truth Lucien is just very picky about the people he decides to trust and thus doesn't care much about others. His younger siblings though are the world to him and he'd do everything to keep them safe from harm.

 

Marduk:

The very reverse of Lucien. Marduk is outgoing, mischievous, flirtatious and talks with a silver tongue to get what he wants. He has no respect for anyone or anything and spreads havoc where ever he can. In contrary to Lucien, Marduk has no honor and cheats as soon as there's an opportunity to play unfair.

 

Aequitas:

The combined personality of Lucien and Marduk. Aequitas is the embodiment of all good and bad characteristics of the two beings that used to suppress each other. He's neutral towards everything and faces each situation with a calm and calculating mind but is ready to play dirty if necessary and can relish himself in the agony of his enemies like Marduk, yet he can be kind and gentle like Lucien.

 


Abilities:

 

Personality Switch:

Lucien is able to switch personalities back and forth but doing so doesn't come without a price. Each time he switches, the personality that takes over needs to adjust to the current situation first before any action can be made. This causes more trouble than it helps since the now active personality was in a state of utter blindness to the world, sleeping in complete isolation and unaware of everything that had happened.

Thus it is not wise for Lucien and Marduk to switch places in a fight or during important conversation - it would be the worst thing they could do.

Switching to Aequitas would be an exception since the former active personality would still remain, fusing with the second one but becoming Aequitas is still difficult and causes a terrible headache after only a few moments.

At the current time, Lucien and Marduk can keep their combined personality up to a few minutes before they need to switch to only one personality.

 

Since the personality switch doesn't just influence the behavior of the character, you'll clearly recognize during a fight if you face Lucien, the demon or both of them at the same time.

 

Lucien:

Lucien is a pure fighter - even though he is capable of using magic in theory, he never really trained to use it effectively during a fight and thus is unable to gain access to magical spells.

Lucien prefers to fight with his rapier, using fast attacks with average damage. He's trained to be able to hold himself up against more than one enemy and possesses an average level of strength and endurance.

 

Marduk:

In contrary to Lucien, Marduk cannot fight with any kind of weapon. He relies entirely on his magic and focuses on dirty tricks. His specialties are chaos spells that influence the visual perception of a being, effects reaching from a distorted field of view to hallucinations. 

However, he is also capable of disturbing the magical flow of other beings by using his own chaos to "manipulate" the core element of his opponents, switching it to the element of chaos. Depending on how strongly one is depending on magic or affected by it, Marduk's chaos "poisons" body and mind and can leave the person unable to use magic for a longer or shorter while, though the chaos itself doesn't cause any damage at all. It simply affects one's ability to access magic and use spells. How strong one is affected by Marduk's chaos and its effects depends on the person itself though and cannot be generalized.

Since Marduk is some kind of a coward, he mainly uses his spells to distract his opponents to escape.

Aequitas:

Jack of all trades, master of none. Again Aequitas combines the two different abilities of Lucien and Marduk, enabling him to use a rapier as well as using spells but both only at a very basic level. He cannot defend himself well with his magic, neither can he attack as swift and precise as Lucien, but it is enough to not die immediately. In contrary to Marduk however, Aequitas uses his magic to attack and not to flee.

 

Acquaintanceships:

Lucien - Marduk - Aequitas

 

Alliances:
Sandro
Cherize

Neutral:
Cherize
Ahriman
Ishkay

Enemies:
Ishkay


Trivia:

- Lucien has more or less the sole responsibility for his two younger siblings since their parents died when they were little
- His foster father is Alka'desh, a rockhopper penguin who belongs to the court of shadowmakers
- He has a flying mount of the "Dark Wing" race (sketch will follow)
- He usually wears an eye patch
- He's capable of speaking several languages just like Tweep (avian language), English (common language) and Cydae (elfish language of the City of Twilight Abyss)


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New Haircut Since 2016:


Lucien - (c) me
AB - (c) Dx33x
References were used for the clothes

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Comments: 18

coldphoenix1 [2016-04-28 13:02:28 +0000 UTC]

Soo well thought out! How long did you spend on his back story? Anyway, I understand now why Lucien was wearing an eye patch in your other picture
So Marduk isn't a bad guy... I kind of feel sorry for him, he's kind of like a capturedslave O.o
Aequitas sounds pretty cool, like the best of both I can see how it's better for Lucien to not combine with Marduk all the time, but their combined form sounds like a more fun person to be around lol, but Marduk sounds kind of fun too I think I'm a Marduk fan

I'm a little surprised that Lucien is an elf though, I don't know why but when I saw that picture of him (Aequitas) with his brother, I thought he was a demon, I think just because I know your story features demons.

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-04-28 21:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Well, Lucien's one of my oldest characters. In fact he's about 15 years old now, haha.
But I had to revamp him and bend his backstory to make him fit to the current rp group
I think I've spent about 2-3 days to come up with a proper story for him this time after collecting a lot of ideas and sorting them out.

Well, Marduk really is a trapped creature but he doesn't really mind anymore by now. In the beginning he hated it but owning a new body came in handy for him, haha.
He could move more freely and do a lot of things that had been impossible for him before.
Marduk is a really fun person, always up for shenanigans and the like, though he's also someone you shouldn't keep around for too long.
He's a chaos creature after all and seeks destruction and havoc.

Aequitas is indeed a very cool person, combining the best (and worst) trates of both Lucien and Marduk, though I never rped him.

Haha, well, originally Lucien was half elf half demon so I think I kept some of his former demonic features and nature

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coldphoenix1 In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2016-04-28 21:49:09 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah, I guess he kind of looks like a demon... a nice one lol
How did you come up with the chaos creature idea anyway? I have a big imagination but I'm sure I could never think of that... now these days anyway ^_^' I think when I was younger I was a lot more creative.

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-05-03 17:01:07 +0000 UTC]

Well, he had been a half-demon in one of the previous RP-Groups I was in (Souls of Chaos). The idea for that occured to me after I revamped his character to make him more interesting.
(A shizophrenic character is more fun to rp, haha)
I don't know if you've taken a look at the current RP-Group Astral Breach or the description of the three courts I created for it.
But to sum it up: Every member of the court of minddistorters is allowed to form a bond between a chaos creature once they reached a certain rank.
And since I wanted to keep my original concept of Lucien being not only himself but another person the same time, I decided to fuse him with the chaos creature
And thus I expanded his character from 2 personalities (Lucien and Marduk) by another one (Aequitas). This way I have literally 3 persons in one and have a bigger character-repertoire even
when though it's in fact only one person/body.

I think he's the only character of this kind I ever created, but I'm proud of him

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coldphoenix1 In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2016-05-03 19:03:02 +0000 UTC]

Sounds cool I used to RP with a couple of friends years ago, I still do it with one of them but... life kind of gets in the way a lot lol, we're both busy and can only meet in the late evenings on certain days, and with the time difference she's an hour ahead of me so... it's not like it used to be lol

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-05-04 08:34:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm still rping with one or two people - mostly with a friend in the US but the different time zones only allow us to rp via note and due to my tight working schedule I'm barely able to reply to her at the moment :/

What do you usually rp btw?

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coldphoenix1 In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2016-05-04 08:50:44 +0000 UTC]

It's annoying, right? oh well. What do you do for work?

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-05-04 10:40:55 +0000 UTC]

I'm working 7 days a week parttime at a café in the late evening as a cleaner and 2 days a week from morning to early afternoon at a law company as legal assistant + I'm the main graphic artist for the german speaking Guild Wars 2 Community and responsible for almost all graphics. Right now I have a lot of orders from the community because the biggest game convention in Germany is in August and now they need a ton of graphics for flyers, banners etc.
And I also want to be active here on dA for Astral Breach and I have a youtube-channel which I don't want to neglect either.
So yeah - a lot of work, haha.

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coldphoenix1 In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2016-05-04 12:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Wow... You do work a lot O.O good for you! I hope you enjoy it though, and good luck with the game convention! Have you done it before?

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-05-04 14:43:58 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Yeah, for last years convention I already prepared some things

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coldphoenix1 In reply to coldphoenix1 [2016-05-04 08:53:59 +0000 UTC]

Oh we just do dragonball z... I'm using one of my OCs, female Vegeta this time, and my friend is writing Beerus... Tbh it's quite complicated atm and because we don't get to meet very often I sometimes forget what's been happening lol! But right now everyone is trying to gather the dragonballs to wish away Beerus because he wants to destroy Planet Vegeta, which still exists in this timeline.

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Freiha [2015-09-20 08:12:51 +0000 UTC]

Huuuuuuh?! Lucien?!

Riku: Mr. Creepy?!

Na der hat sich ja verändert.

Super, dass du wieder was geschafft hast. Geht's denn einigermaßen mit deinem Arm?

Er sieht auf jeden Fall besser aus als jemals zuvor.
Und auch sein Kleidungsstil hat sich verbessert. Zwar immernoch sehr düster, aber kann man ja mit pinken Schleifen etwas aufpeppen, stimmts, Riku? (Riku: ) Auf jeden Fall ist das seine coolste Rüstung, die er bisher hatte.

Das Shading ist dir auch gut gelungen. Ich finde, darin hast du dich sehr verbessert *___* I like

Dieses Magiedingens in seiner linken Hand sieht auch irgendwie bissi aus wie Blut. Seeeehr unheimlich. :hide:

Und nach dem Lobpreisungen noch ein kleines bissi Kritik.
Ich weiß jetzt nicht, wie das bei Degen so ist, aber irgendwas sieht daran etwas verschoben aus. Ich denke, wenn das runde (zwischen Schneide und Griff) etwas mehr ovaler wäre, dann würde es besser passen. So sieht es aus, als würde man das runde eher von vorne betrachten, der Degen ist aber zur Seite geneigt.

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to Freiha [2015-09-20 22:29:51 +0000 UTC]

Hey!

Der Arm nervt immer noch und ich bin froh, dass ich ihn überhaupt fertig bekommen habe
Durch die Renovierung und die Arbeit ist der leider etwas überbelastet.

Danke für das viele Lob und die Kritik!
Ich mag dieses Design bislang auch am meisten von allen, er hat sich optisch wirklich gemacht
und den neuen Paint-Stil mag ich auch mehr als meinen früheren Stil^^

Zum Degen:
Ja, der Korb ist nicht ganz korrekt, das ist mir während des colorierens schon aufgefallen,
aber ich gestehe, dass ich einfach zu faul war, das ganze noch zu korrigieren x'D
Metall ist ohnehin so ein Hassobjekt von mir^^ Der Degen hat mich mehr Zeit gekostet als die ganze restliche Coloration xD
Beim nächsten Mal nehme ich mir hoffentlich mehr Zeit, ich wollte ihn nur bis zur Deadline (20.09.) fertig bekommen^^

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Freiha In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2015-09-23 06:56:54 +0000 UTC]

Ich hab letzte Woche meinen Arm irgendwie doof bewegt und dann tat mir die Schulte so weh, konnte die kaum bewegen. Das is wirklich super nervig. Man kann ich fast nich still halten. Vor allem beim Schlafen...voll furchtbar. Hoffentlich geht der Schmerz bei dir wenigstens etwas weg

Eyup, definitiv.

Das kenn ich *husthust* Sobald man anfängt zu colorieren is es meistens eh schon zu spät. Dann sin Änderungen so umständlich. Man merkt sichs lieber fürs nächste Mal

Metall is wirklich schwer. Ich weiß nie, wie man das schatttieren muss. Es is so glänzend und spiegelt die Farben in der Umgebung :/

Du auch? Wollte Dea nich au was bis zu ner Deadline fertig kriegen. Was is das für ne Deadline gewesen?

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to Freiha [2015-09-30 21:02:44 +0000 UTC]

Die Deadline, von der Dea und ich geschrieben haben, war der 20. September - bis dahin wollten wir unsere Charaktere für Astral Breach fertig haben, da die Gruppe an dem Datum offiziell eröffnet hatte

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Freiha In reply to ShadowmakerSerenity [2015-10-02 15:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Achsoooo Ok, ich hab ja das Rollenspielen jetzt komplett an den Nagel gehängt. Es tat mir schon so Leid, dass ich für SoC nur so wenig Zeit hatte.
Ich konzentriere mich da lieber auf meine eigenen Projekte

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Dx33x [2015-09-19 18:41:36 +0000 UTC]

He's looking awesome <3

Turned out great >v<)/ and good luck with the rest of the renovation xD

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ShadowmakerSerenity In reply to Dx33x [2015-09-20 22:25:12 +0000 UTC]

Thaaaaaanks! <333
I'll poke you again once I'm done with his description~

And yeah, thanks again xD We're 50% done right now xDD

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