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Published: 2011-07-22 20:15:30 +0000 UTC; Views: 360; Favourites: 7; Downloads: 0
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Description She had stared into the abyss so much it infected her.
Left her soul drained so well you could see it
In her mascara stained eyes; not many could tell,
Hell the guys used her well. Dried up to rot her end she plots,
Looking at the insects that climb over her lips
She wondered if she'd ever be seen as beautiful again

She didn't know the prices
That came with her many vices
Trapped deep in her soul she cries
While on the outside
She tries to lie

Many want to ask
How it felt when her soul was taken to task
If the boys knew what she couldn't ask

But what they don't know
Is she tried to scream no
Yet the word wouldn't go
For the rope
Dug into her throat

Now she sits as ghost
Waiting to see the boys souls
She knows the plan
she has them in her hand

The insects the climb
From the dirt to solve the crime
Only a short time

"Til the boys souls are mine"
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Comments: 10

cyranosdemet [2011-07-25 14:29:15 +0000 UTC]

This is both a good work and indeed a dark work. I can see where you'd have quite a diverse range of possible homes for it. In a way this could even play in religeous context, answering the question: just where DOES the devil get his best demons?

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shadowsofthought In reply to cyranosdemet [2011-07-25 15:31:49 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for being able to read beyond just the words on the screen.

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cyranosdemet In reply to shadowsofthought [2011-07-25 15:57:02 +0000 UTC]

Most welcome. Indulge the thought, for a little while, but don't let it take your life. In the end the demons are just as miserable as everyone else in hell

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shadowsofthought In reply to cyranosdemet [2011-07-25 16:07:34 +0000 UTC]

Oh the demons have already taken my mind sadly, but it gives me such good writing at times that it doesn't bother me

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darkmoonproductions [2011-07-25 11:51:34 +0000 UTC]

nice work. good piece. would make a very interesting script as well.

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shadowsofthought In reply to darkmoonproductions [2011-07-25 15:29:24 +0000 UTC]

Aye it would, I think something like this or very close to it has made it to the screen with the Korean "Shutter" though the ghost had quiet a different revenge

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moonmusing [2011-07-23 02:24:47 +0000 UTC]

how very wrenching, the imagery is well done...wonderful job

even though the subject matter is volatile it gives a snapshot of something needed to be seen

you deserve a hug for that

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shadowsofthought In reply to moonmusing [2011-07-23 02:29:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks musey

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GlowingTurtle444 [2011-07-22 21:04:26 +0000 UTC]

I must say this is a very good piece, well done =]

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shadowsofthought In reply to GlowingTurtle444 [2011-07-22 21:29:30 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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