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shadowsofthought — Poisoned Struggle
Published: 2012-08-24 19:42:19 +0000 UTC; Views: 207; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 3
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Description You watch her dance
The lace leaves you in a trance
Slowly you slide

Drifting slowly into darkness
Her voice harkens
You with deeply sensual promise

But as you awaken in her web
Your soul fills with dread
Her arms wrapped around your head

She whispers
"Please struggle, I want this to last longer"
You try not to furfil her wish
As your flesh begins to mesh

Her moans of extacy
Fill the air intertwined with your screams
Her legs are your worst and best dreams

As they drain your life
Her pleasure isn't breif
She twists the knife

Your life drains
But in your death
It gives her breath
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Comments: 9

Lovesick-Anorexic [2013-03-29 07:27:08 +0000 UTC]

fantasic

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Lovesick-Anorexic In reply to Lovesick-Anorexic [2013-03-29 07:27:30 +0000 UTC]

i mean fantastic

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GoryBlueCat [2012-08-25 19:38:35 +0000 UTC]

I love this one too!

Beautifully written. ^^

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shadowsofthought In reply to GoryBlueCat [2012-08-25 19:39:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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GoryBlueCat In reply to shadowsofthought [2012-08-25 19:41:18 +0000 UTC]

No problem! ^^

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shadowsofthought In reply to GoryBlueCat [2012-08-25 19:44:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks for adding them to your group as well. Feel free to check out my other writings if you'd like!

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GoryBlueCat In reply to shadowsofthought [2012-08-25 19:45:36 +0000 UTC]

No problem!

I will, and also give you a watch. ^^

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Stitchthebest36 [2012-08-25 16:35:56 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem. Albeit a disturbing one. Nice work! Well done!

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SepulchrumFlower [2012-08-24 19:50:10 +0000 UTC]

oh my. beautiful. I love your writings. Romantically disturbing.

Thank you

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