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#equator #fall #hemispherical #palette #season #spring #summer #transition #winter #hemisphere #seasons
Published: 2015-09-23 17:32:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1867; Favourites: 11; Downloads: 0
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In hemispherical opposition,
Winter and summer re-position.
Palettes swapped - fresh for faded,
Earth's transition is paraded.



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Comments: 24

danny-mechanist [2016-01-13 05:39:03 +0000 UTC]

This is amazingly worded. Short and lovely.

PuzzledHeartBox BATTLEFAIRIES ModernHermit you'd like this (and yes I'm a pimpin again )

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InsomniaDoodles In reply to danny-mechanist [2016-01-18 02:40:17 +0000 UTC]

Nice find!

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danny-mechanist In reply to InsomniaDoodles [2016-01-18 02:48:35 +0000 UTC]

Yep

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to danny-mechanist [2016-01-13 19:36:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Danny, I appreciate it.

Thanks for pimpin' too!

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danny-mechanist In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2016-01-14 02:28:34 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I just really loved how concise it was for all the meaning it has.

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BATTLEFAIRIES In reply to danny-mechanist [2016-01-13 11:02:58 +0000 UTC]

Weird, I thought I commented on this one, since I recognise it and I remember I liked it.

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danny-mechanist In reply to BATTLEFAIRIES [2016-01-13 11:30:10 +0000 UTC]

I didn't notice

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BATTLEFAIRIES In reply to danny-mechanist [2016-01-13 11:53:44 +0000 UTC]

Regardless, thank you for linking; much appreciated that you'd think of me.

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danny-mechanist In reply to BATTLEFAIRIES [2016-01-13 12:10:29 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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TheKerwinator [2016-01-12 16:12:25 +0000 UTC]

What I'd give for spring...

Though, at least there's no snow here in NY yet.

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to TheKerwinator [2016-01-15 23:46:49 +0000 UTC]

I agree...Β 

We have four days of sub-zero F in store right now. I'm not a winter person any more. I need to move.Β 

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FridgePoetProject [2015-10-05 06:02:27 +0000 UTC]

This is simply brilliant. Β I love the energetic, whimsical rhythm of it, as well as the refreshing way you presented the evolution of the seasons. Β Fantastic piece, and I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work! Β 

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to FridgePoetProject [2015-10-05 20:10:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I owe a debt of gratitude to copper9lives that I will toil for all eternity to repay!

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copper9lives In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2015-10-07 19:45:30 +0000 UTC]

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itsbumblebee [2015-10-05 04:07:52 +0000 UTC]

Lovely!

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to itsbumblebee [2015-10-05 19:59:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!Β 

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Astrikos [2015-10-05 00:23:05 +0000 UTC]

I love the rhyme and the short,vivid images. Great work!

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to Astrikos [2015-10-05 00:41:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!

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Zorbonaut [2015-09-28 14:23:22 +0000 UTC]

Very neat.

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to Zorbonaut [2015-09-28 17:18:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I am appreciative of your attention to my work. Β Β 

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Zorbonaut In reply to ShadowWorldRed [2015-09-28 19:18:03 +0000 UTC]

Found it via recommendation from RattledFawn.

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cerealnovels [2015-09-24 18:03:30 +0000 UTC]

Favorite line: Palettes swapped - fresh for faded,

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ShadowWorldRed In reply to cerealnovels [2015-09-24 19:23:10 +0000 UTC]

It's mine as well! It was the first line I've thought up in years that I felt was true poetry.

Thank you! Β 

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copper9lives [2015-09-24 06:01:03 +0000 UTC]

I love playing poet-tag with you, Red…

(If anyone is interested, here's the link to Burlesque)...

BurlesqueRattling the dry cornstalks
Sliding toward the equinox
Autumn's fan dance with the weather
Bondage freed from Summer's tether
Windy whispering come hither
Leaf-fall sequins slink and slither
Azure promise on the wing
Harvest passion's offering
Fox-eyed torch song coquetry Β 
Chanteuse of inconstancy
Joie de vivre to smoky grey
Fickle fall will ever stray

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