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aww therre faces when their mom dies are so sadD8> this si great I love it^^<3
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Thank you! ^^
Yes, sad story...
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This page is so sad 
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Thank you! ^_^
Yes. Sad story...
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This looks really great! Can't wait for the next one and poor Oto-chan. TTwTT
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Thank you!
Yes. She is poor...
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Your very welcome and yeah.
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Awesome! Only thing, you've put "he felt very pity me," which doesn't make much sense sorry 
Other than that, this is awesome, you have a lovely art style <3
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Thank you very much!
I will correct it! ^^
(But dA happens a system error(?) and I can't change a new file... So I will do it later...)
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No problem ^^
That happens to me all the time >.> okay ^^
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It looks very good!
BlueEyesKitten has written down all the right corrections, except one I think would be better said like this;
He felt very pity me, in my opinion, should be He pitied me.
But, your English is getting better! It's getting easier and easier to see what your're trying to say!
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Thank you very much!
I will correct it! ^^
(But dA happens a system error(?) and I can't change a new file... So I will do it later...)
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You're welcome
[and, you spelled error correctly! ^^]
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Can't wait for the next one!!!!
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I will make it at once. Please wait.
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i'LL WAIT!! jUST TAKE YOUR TIME!!!
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Again... I LOVE this comic so much!!!
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I almost cried at the scene of her mother and brother. This comic is so cool!
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Thank you very much! ^^
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Oh! Yay, we get to learn more! *hoping the brother will reappear... and be nice*
Haha, Takeru is such a good guy.
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His picture when he was young looks like he would grow up handsome.
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Thank you! ^_^
Yes. He will reappear. He is one of the key character in Spiritual Stones.
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Wow, this page looks perfect! Quite a nice descriptive argument time! Now I'm left wondering why he wasn't satisfied by her explanation
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Really? Thank you very much!
Hehe. Please wait a next page!
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Thats really sad.. poor Oto
Love this page alot! great job
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Right. She's poor.
Thank you!
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Awww poor Oto 
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Thanks!
Yes. She is poor...
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ohh this one is so awesome!
OtoΒ΄s brother is so cute (and of course Oto herself too 8DD )
I love your backgrounds!
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Woah really love this page 
I'll help you with the english on this page, but you dont have to pay attention to it. Since when ever I find a mistake in my work I'm always too lazy to fix it
~
'originally my family *were* wanderers'
*of* the Foxes
My brother and *I* between a Wolves father (i guess that would be a good way to put it)
to become to live in the foxes' society and rejected from there with us...
Since then we had
*trouble *stress
*He felt much pity for me
*the promise (would probably sound better)
*But I'm a bit unsatsified
~
Sorry if you dont wish for corrections x3 I just thought I should put them out there
Oh and loving the plot so far~ 8D
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Thank you very much!
Are there mistakes in this page?
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I thought i just said them all? xD π: 0 β©: 0
'originally my family *were* wanderers'
*of* the Foxes
My brother and *I* between a Wolves father (i guess that would be a good way to put it)
to become to live in the foxes' society and rejected from there with us...
Since then we had
*trouble *stress
*He felt much pity for me
*the promise (would probably sound better)
*But I'm a bit unsatsified
~
C: it does look a little confusing since everyone of them mostly has an * in front of it 
and your welcome
oops didnt mean to bold everything
sorry bout that
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nice as always, im digging the snow storm frame.
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Poor puppies,T.T.Good work as always
I'm translating it!
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Wow! Your translation is very fast!
Thank you very much for your translation as usual!
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Aww so sad when they lost their mother
But itΒ΄s beautiful as always dear. Always a pleasure to read your comic
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Yes. Sad story...
Thank you very much!
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YouΒ΄re welcome dear ^^
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