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Fire and ice are two completely different elements of life. One cannot survive without the other. It’s like the light and the dark, the day and the night, the love and the hate. They are vital to each other in the way of life.I don’t know if it’s like you and I right now, but I can most certainly say that we’re kind of the opposites of one another.
One of us is ice. We have an immensely cold heart, unwilling to listen to what the other person says. There are moments in which we wish we could hear the other person speak, but we recognize it will not happen for a long time. The ice is thick, unbreakable to shatter to what another person has to say.
One of us is fire. We have such a warm heart, wanting to come back to the way it was before. Yet we recognize that it might not be how it really was in the past. We wish to try and make those days perhaps go behind us, but we realize that that effort will take some time. The fire is passionate in what they do, untamed yet under control
Fire and ice- perfect harmony, performing a dance for the world to see that is much unlike any other.
But then a problem arises.
What do you do when you take one away from another?
There is no balance. It is so one-sided that things begin to happen. You try to live without the other and you realize sometimes that it isn’t possible. How can you bring back together two things, which are so very unique, that have been apart for perhaps the longest time they have not seen each other? One begins to miss the other, and the other begins to do the same thing.
How long must it take?
The fire begins to recede. The ice begins to melt.
What will happen when they both finally disappear?
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Comments: 31
Piezelle [2012-02-15 23:56:26 +0000 UTC]
I can't really put a critique on this, so I'll just praise you A LOT
I'm a writer (a fanfiction writer -.-) and I feel so amazed at how short this is and yet it holds a deep meaning to it.
I just love you
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MysticalMysticism [2011-06-09 22:49:44 +0000 UTC]
Id say im defiantly fire, I have two characters who are both female, Eyeda and Ukaquane. Eyeda's an ice cat and Ukaquanes a fire cat and they have human forms aswell, Ukaquane is like ice to begin with, shes closed her heart to everyone but Eyeda is like fire although shes ice. She is passionated and hyper to a point, anyway Ukaquane and Eyeda are worst enemys but Ukaquane starts to fall in love with Eyeda. It takes a while for Eyeda to love her back but eventually they become a couple. But I dont know if Ukaquane should find happiness herself or if it'd be more romantic if Eyeda gave her the happiness when they fall in love together.
What is your opinion? and thanks for sharing this inspiring piece!
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VMenFangirl [2008-12-05 02:33:26 +0000 UTC]
IS EPIC! IS SUPREME! IS BEAUTIFUL!....gosh....is one of the most MAGNIFIC things i´ve ever read.....is deep.....it really touched me ....yoú´re right....we have a bit of both.....
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to VMenFangirl [2008-12-05 03:28:34 +0000 UTC]
W-worship?! I am not worthy of such praise!
But thanks. I love this piece to death.
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VMenFangirl In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-12-06 05:12:17 +0000 UTC]
Yep ...you deserve da
...cuz is really supreme!
8D .....i love it too!!!
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to VMenFangirl [2008-12-06 06:17:14 +0000 UTC]
...a DD?
I wouldn't go THAT far.
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VMenFangirl In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-12-07 23:01:53 +0000 UTC]
Awww....why not? You´re an amazing writter
:3
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Moonlight-Umbreon [2008-11-22 12:10:58 +0000 UTC]
That was beautiful, Shine! I'm not sure who is who, but the way you've put this is devastatingly beautiful.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to Moonlight-Umbreon [2008-11-22 16:53:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Moon. This was one of my faves to write, to be honest. I love it so much.
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Moonlight-Umbreon In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-11-28 11:19:17 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I'm not surprised it was a fav. It was great...
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moonlightwaterdragon [2008-11-19 02:46:34 +0000 UTC]
<3 I have no words but this one: beautiful.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to moonlightwaterdragon [2008-11-19 02:48:22 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much.
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AeroMaster [2008-11-17 02:06:13 +0000 UTC]
Think piece causes me to think quite a bit. I'm not sure what you are referring to, if you ARE referring to something. But it makes me think of views on the world as well as personally. I do not have time to explain such trivia, but this piece has thoroughly made me want to write more of my MGS one shot, Trivia, which is about Liquid (inner fangirl squeal moment)
Oh but back to the writing. I believe that poem writing and writing your views on the world is a good way to set your soul free, metaphorically speaking. Absolutely compelling Shiny. Very good job. :B
Now that I am done talking.......*waddles off to write Zelda fanfiction*
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to AeroMaster [2008-11-17 02:17:14 +0000 UTC]
More MGS?! *does a dance* Dude, yay!
I'm so glad I wrote this. It made me feel really alive and free about life and such. I've never done this kind of thing before, you know. Except with the ones I did before, this one was kind of different... Glad you liked it, Aero.
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AeroMaster In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-11-17 02:21:20 +0000 UTC]
Well of course I liked it!
Yes, more MGS.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to BlackRosaAngel [2008-11-15 19:56:54 +0000 UTC]
Thanks, Rosa. This feels so different to me, doing stuff like this. But it's so easy and it makes me feel free and everything... you know what I mean?
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BlackRosaAngel In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-11-16 18:04:10 +0000 UTC]
I know what ya mean.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to mutantlover09 [2008-11-15 19:53:56 +0000 UTC]
Thanks.
Guess what I updated? Yes, Damnation. And I'm working on Archangel right now... O_o
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mutantlover09 In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-11-15 19:56:56 +0000 UTC]
Really! You updated. Dude, I'm gonna put that on alert right now. Seriously, I'm doin' it.
And Archangel. Cool. Though, to be honest, I can't remember a lick of what happened in it. I'll probably need to reread that.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to SolidSake [2008-11-15 18:10:04 +0000 UTC]
Man, I am so happy I wrote this. I feel so... cleansed. You know what I mean?
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DreamhazeMaster [2008-11-15 17:38:28 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Shine.... THis is just Wow! It takes the simple This vs that Poem and makes beautiful imagry. It's just so pretty!
I, of course, understand the meaning behind this one.
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Shining-Zephyr In reply to DreamhazeMaster [2008-11-15 17:40:09 +0000 UTC]
*smiles* Indeed you do know. I tried to find resemblances between the two, and I ended up coming up with this. I'm so very happy you enjoyed it, my friend.
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DreamhazeMaster In reply to Shining-Zephyr [2008-11-15 17:44:48 +0000 UTC]
I enjoy anything you produce buddy!
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