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Description Snowballing

An MxM one-shot fan-fiction

Disclaimers: Just got the urge to write some Mello x Matt stuff.  Probably will just be a one-shot ‘cause I can’t think of a whole plot.

Sooo freaking out of season.

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“Matt… Matt!  Dammit, Matt, where are you?!” He had been calling for five minutes.  Or, rather, he had called once five minutes ago and gotten engrossed in his book again, his only movement coming from his eyes scanning the words, his fingertip flipping the pages, and his arm blindly locating his mug of hot chocolate to bring it to his lips.

Frowning to himself, Mello set his book, The Phantom of the Opera, down to glance peevishly around the apartment that he shared with the redhead.  Where the hell had he gone?  Okay, so he hadn’t really been paying that close of attention for the past half an hour, but this book was engrossing, even if reading French wasn’t exactly his favorite pastime.

Irritated, the blond got to his feet and decided he would have to locate Matt and… punish him appropriately.  It would warm them up, at least.  But Matt wasn’t in the bedroom, nor was he in the bathroom or the kitchen.  As he passed the front door, Mello noticed a piece of paper taped to the wood with the gamer’s familiar scrawl on it.  Irritated, Mello snatched the paper from the door and frowned at it.  German.  He had just gotten himself used to reading French, and the damn note was written in German.

‘Mello-

Just going down to the park for a little bit.  There’s more hot chocolate in the kitchen on the stove if you want it – just turn the heat back on to low if it’s cold or something.  I’ll be back later.

-Matt

P.S. – Hah, I do happen to do things without your express permission.  Got a problem with that?’

The whole thing was ended with one of those irritating little internet anime faces he used in conversations with his little on-line geek buddies.  Growling slightly in annoyance, Mello began to ball the note up in his hands but stopped, leaving it only slightly wrinkled.  Sighing, he tossed the paper onto the sideboard and flicked his gaze over to the window.  Snow was still coming down steadily, but it didn’t look like a storm.  In fact, it would look like perfect weather if Mello wasn’t aware of just how damn cold it was beyond that pane of glass.

He debated letting the stubborn bastard freeze his ass off out there and then refuse to warm him up or let him have any hot chocolate.  But it was the first day of February.  He couldn’t do that to Matt, not on his birthday.

Dammit.  This meant he was going to have to go fetch him.  Just because it was the gamer’s birthday didn’t mean he couldn’t punish him.

Pulling his boots on, Mello drug the zipper through its track and buckled the leather with a sour expression.  He pulled on his gloves before grabbing the heavy black feathered coat he had mostly forgone since his Mafia days.  He locked the door behind him and made his way down the hallway, pulling the coat on and zipping it up securely.  He’d just better not get sick over this.

As he exited the apartment complex, a brief gust of wind hit his face sharply.  He could practically feel his unscarred cheek and nose reddening and sighed in annoyance.  That was just what he needed.  Snow flecked his shoulders and hair as he made his way down the sidewalk.

He passed the occasional group of children who were just as stupid as Matt, but with the youth to excuse it.  There were patches of ice on the street, and as no sane person would be caught dead driving on a day like this, the kids had taken over the roads for a bit of impromptu ice skating, most of which ended up in faceplants and that ilk.  Mello ignored them for the most part, dodging a couple of them as they slid past, some of them toppling face-first into snow banks that had gathered on the grassy sides of the sidewalk.

At least the park wasn’t too far away.  Carefully making his way across the frozen street, Mello stepped into the park, snow and frozen grass crunching as his boot contacted.  Unsurprisingly, the park was pretty much deserted, but for a couple of areas with kids making snowmen and that sort of thing.  However, Mello didn’t spot the mop of red hair he was searching for, and that was annoying.

Walking further into the park, Mello turned his attention to the ground.  Other footprints that looked like they belonged to an adult male, who had apparently been wandering aimlessly.  He couldn’t see the pattern of the bottoms of the shoes, so it was obvious they hadn’t been made too terribly recently.  But that meant that Matt was probably somewhere in the area.

Mello’s musings were cut short when he felt a solid ‘THWAP’ on the back of his head, nearly causing him to lose his balance.  He stepped forward involuntarily to keep from falling, his hands outstretched, as snow sprayed past his head from behind him.  After the initial shock of the attack, the back of his head began to grow cold.  Raising his hand to investigate, he determined that, yes, that had been a snowball attack.

Slowly turning around, Mello found himself facing his prey.  The redhead had a cocky smirk on his face, barely visible over the fake fur of his high-collared vest.  He had a black coat thrown over it, unzipped, as his striped shirt wasn’t exactly the best protection against the freezing weather.  Snow flecked the redhead’s hair and shoulders, caking the soles of his boots, and he had another snowball in his hand, tossing it up and down confidently.

“Hey, Mell,” he greeted, his smirk turning into a cheeky grin.  “Your defenses go down that bad in the snow or something?”

“What the fuck are you thinking?!” Mello yelled as he dusted his hair off.  His tone startled the grin off Matt’s face, stilling the snowball in his hand.  “Dammit, Matt, it’s too fucking cold out here to be doing this!  Next time you want to go contract hypothermia, let me know before hand so I can try to talk some sense into you, all right?!  Now, drop the damn snowball and just go home!”

“…all right, all right, geez,” Matt muttered, a bit hurt, as he let the snowball fall to the ground, creating a nice crater in the snow in front of him.  He turned and started to walk back, a bit dejected, but suddenly found himself propelled forward as another snowball connected with his back right between his shoulder blades.  He had been totally unprepared for the attack and it sent him careening into the snow, his landing creating a powdery explosion.

Forcing himself up to his knees and spluttering from the snow that had made its way into his mouth and nose, Matt pushed his now snow-encrusted goggles up to his forehead, turning to look at Mello.  The blond was nearly doubled over in laughter, the heel of his hand pressed against his forehead.

“Your balance sucks, Matt,” the blond said through his amusement.  After a moment, he straightened, his smile being replaced by a devious smirk playing at the corners of his mouth.  He held up his index finger, tilting his head back to look at Matt down his nose arrogantly.  “First rule of warfare – get the enemy off-guard.”

“I did that already, or have you forgotten the splat on the back of your head?” Matt asked with an evil smirk as he got up, brushing himself off.  “Fine, fine, you wanna play that way?  We’ll play that way.”

An all-out battle was sparked at those words, sending snowballs slinging through the air at a rate that would make any on-lookers afraid to get any closer.  The snow in the area was trampled by boots as the two ran around trying to get a good shot at the other.  They fell to the ground more than once, sometimes because of loss of balance and sometimes due to a desperate attempt to avoid getting plastered by the other’s snowball.

So many feelings of familiarity.  When he had been a kid, Matt had been loath to go outside and do anything that resembled exercise – but when snow had been involved, all bets had been off.  He still remembered using a snowball to knock Watari’s hat off on a dare, and he, Mello, and Near recruiting L to help them make a snowman, back when Mello and Near hadn’t hated each others guts.

With an evil smirk, Matt reared back and tackled Mello around the waist, sending both of them sailing into a heap of snow that had been mostly undisturbed by their game, but for a few stray snowballs.  This started a sort of wrestling match, both of them doing their damndest to get the better of the other as they pushed and pulled at each other.

After about five solid minutes of this, they both fell back into the snow, arms outstretched, and lay panting and laughing breathlessly, staring up at the sky.  Matt retrieved his goggles, which had fallen off during the brawl, and slung them around his neck carelessly.

“See?” Matt panted as he turned his head to face his lover.  “I knew coming out here was a good idea.  Got you to cheer up.”

“Yeah, yeah, whatever,” Mello smirked as he reached over and smacked the redhead with his gloved hand.  “Come on, let’s go-”

He was interrupted by Matt grabbing his wrist and pulling him over so Mello was practically lying on top of him, their frozen lips meeting, warming each other with their contact.

Pulling back after a moment, Mello smirked a bit.  “Inside.  Not out here, you’d get frostbite on body parts you didn’t even know you had.”

“I know, what do I look like, some kinda pervert?” Matt asked defensively, quirking an eyebrow.  “I just wanted to thank you.”

Laughing a little, Mello nodded briefly.  “You’re welcome, Matty,” he said as he got to his feet and yanked the gamer up as well.  “Come on, let’s go back to the apartment and reheat that hot chocolate… it’s bound to be stone cold by now.”

“Sweet.”

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Comments: 37

SamiraAnima [2009-11-03 11:02:53 +0000 UTC]

This was such an adorable fic! I love when Matt and Mello get to just fool around and act like kids. <3

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regretsandromance12 [2009-04-06 23:10:16 +0000 UTC]

i like it very muchies :3

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Fujitsu01 [2008-09-18 01:21:39 +0000 UTC]

Out of season or not, it's still a great story!

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Fujitsu01 [2008-09-18 03:56:36 +0000 UTC]

Aww, thanks~ I have a thing for cute little snowy scenes ._.

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Fujitsu01 In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-18 16:00:12 +0000 UTC]

Me too.

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Kaana-Chan [2008-09-17 00:33:28 +0000 UTC]

That was a really good story. I liked it a lot.
And uhm... to agree with the other commenters, it was cute

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-17 05:25:17 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

I was in a fluff mood... but then, there isn't much Mello/Matt fluff out there, mostly because DN is so serious >>;;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-17 23:21:48 +0000 UTC]

Of course

And you're right. I've only read... what, two fluffy MxM fics besides this one?
Silly serious Death Note...

BB isn't all that serious for a Death Note character, though xD

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-18 00:20:08 +0000 UTC]

Most MxM is serious, semi-violent, and that ilk... which, don't get me wrong, I don't mind, but it's nice to see a lighter side of them xD

B is great xD He was the only humorous element in Another Note. It's amazing that the body-breaking blood-lusting psychopath is the least serious character in the entire series or its spinoffs.

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-18 00:40:41 +0000 UTC]

Totally agree there xD
I always liked fluff the best out of all kinds of stories. Reading a fluffy fic right now...
Fluff is epic win, but my friends don't agree.



I know... it's so weird... he's a bizarre, insane, corpse-monger, but he's freaking hilarious! He even practices his evil laugh! Normally that's like... a stereotypical villain thing to do, but so few do it in a series such as Death Note that it makes it awesome xD
He makes me giggle 8D
Which is why I hate it when people make him all dark and devious and serious in fanfiction...
Blah.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-18 04:08:31 +0000 UTC]



How can fluff -not- be epic!win?! Well, okay, not in -all- situations... I do like the occasional srsfic. Lawl, total oxymoron >>; *Digresses* But fluff is usually great xD Especially when it's a half-fluff, half-smut yaoi fic. Then I'm one happy fangirl 8D

Well, B is dark and devious... just not serious Oo; I mean, come on, most of his evil laughs were giggles. I can't take an evil villain who giggles seriously... it just isn't possible. But I usually hate fanfiction with him in it for just that reason - very few authors seem to be able to really grasp his character and just make him... just... I don't know how to describe it beyond 'wrong'. L's kind of the same way >>;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-18 22:45:58 +0000 UTC]

I mean, they are cool with fluff... but they like the smutfics.
I agree with you... fluff+smut in one fic is amazing, but so few people can do that xD
Mostly it's either them doing it for some reason or just being all fluff. I love all of them, but the more fluff the better


Well, yes, he is... but they make him dark and devious in a stupid, immature way instead of dark and devious in a humorous, unpractical way. Like this one fic where BB is marking L with knives. I don't see that happening ever. I've never come across a fic with B in it where his character was correctly written. I agree. There's a certain aura of 'right' that you really have to understand about B to write his character correctly. I mean... the Ryuzaki we meet in [link] is Beyond Birthday. That is who he is, that's how he acts. But people only pull on the BB that is behind the scenes, like how he acts after he attacks Misora.
Who writes him giggling? No one
Another thing I don't like about B in fics... is having him interact with Light. I mean... it said at the very end of the book that he 'died of a mysterious heart attack in 2004'. Very sadly, it means he's dead. Therefor, it's impossible to have him interacting with Light.

And I actually know a couple author's who are actually very good at L's character

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-19 04:01:21 +0000 UTC]

Yes... fluff+smut is very, very rare And usually when people try to do it they fail at one, or the other, or both parts. But I'm very picky about my fan-fiction - I won't just read anything... mostly because I am, sadly, a Grammar Nazi at heart, and most fan-fiction authors write at a third grade level. *Sad sigh* It's quite pitiful, really.

Marking L with knives? I could see it, provided he were... conducting some kind of experiment or had some purpose behind it. But for no reason? Everything he did had a reason - the first paragraph of Another Note goes into -why- he did what he did... I think that kind of signifies it as important. And people say that B, as Rue Ryuuzaki, was only trying to be exactly like L, but that makes no sense for multiple reasons - one, there's no telling how long it had been since he was expelled from Wammy's House and seen L, and two, he thought Naomi had met L - therefore, he would know she would see through that disguise in an instant. I definitely agree that he was just being himself. Of course, he never should have helped her with all the clues. I doubt she would have figured it out without his help. I mean, come on, she figured out, what, the Wara Ningyo thing and, consequently, who he was? Yeah. Big deal. Never would have gotten that far without B's help.

Yeah. I think B would be out to get Light just as much as he's out to get L, provided he came back to life somehow or something like that. But it only makes sense that he died - I mean, come on, the guy was basically a burnt piece of toast, and though it didn't go into his appearance after the fire, he was probably a cripple. Not much he could do deviously in that regard.

L's character is -complicated-. I've only written for him once in an LxLight one-shot that I wrote for a contest >>;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-19 23:45:39 +0000 UTC]

Hot damn, I love you
I'm a Grammar Nazi myself...
I always read the first paragraph before I consider if the story is good. If half of it isn't spelled right and the grammar is as disgusting as my grandma's ass, then I refuse to read it. I do make a few exceptions, though, such as when it seems the author is a little amateur, but makes an honest effort. But spelling really gets on my nerves...
Hey, you know that thing called spell check? Use it, dumb asses.

Yeah, I know... He tried internal hemorrhaging as an experiment. But in this fic, he did it just because he could. In the book, B never did anything just because he could.
I mean... I realized something recently.
I think a lot like B.
I always get like that when I'm really trying to write something. I get in the characters heads and think, "What would [name] do?" and act on that.
But I had an idea for a small fic about what B did with Backyard Bottomslash's arm, and I thought naturally.
I mean, I kind of pulled off a common cliche where B is a cannibal, but otherwise quite naturally.
And I agree. The cases would've been left unsolved unless B had helped Naomi Misora with everything.
Mello said that he did it to prove he was better than L, and I think that's true.
But I also think it's true in another sense. I think what he meant to do with the cases was prove that even if all the pieces were laid out in front of him, even if L had all of the information, he could never really solve the puzzle. I think that was B's goal, and that's why he helped Misora.
I mean, it even says something along those terms when Naomi learned about the crossword puzzle. He made it so difficult to prove they were stupid. To prove he was mocking them.

And yeah, B probably would be out to get Light if he could move. I mean, Light is supposed to be an intellect that rivals L himself. If B wanted a real challenge, he'd take both of them on at the same time.

I seriously doubt my abilities to write L... I mean, I think he's awesome, but I don't think like him. I'd write him so it was almost in character enough to be believable, but out of character enough for it to be fiction.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-20 19:42:23 +0000 UTC]

I learned how to write fan-fiction by role playing. I started that when I was... about twelve or so - forum-based, writing paragraphs story-style. It's easier to get the hang of in-depth plot-based writing if you're just worrying about one or two characters. Then I moved onto fan-fiction, then novels... I still haven't finished my novel, though, which is a bit depressing...

B is fascinating. I find it hard to think like him, really, because he takes logic and turns it into violence so beautifully and, scarily enough, naturally. It's really fascinating from a psychological point of view. (How can people say Death Note isn't psychological?) I actually find L easier to write for, but I can't really personally relate to any of the Death Note characters except Matt. That might be why he's my favorite.

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-20 19:49:42 +0000 UTC]

I've never really quite tried paragraph story-style role playing. I used to role play all the time when I played WoW, but I kind of stopped because I got bored with the game... I mean, my character is unbelievably fleshed out, and I love him with all my heart(and could write a good story with him, probably), but I just got bored with the game. I try fanfiction every now and then but it always comes out kind of crappish... And don't worry! If you're writing a novel, take your time

I think the same way, which is so bizarre... I have like... this weird tri-personality thing. I think it developed from role playing like an addict xD
If I could describe the different ways I think by characters, I would say B, Demyx, and Zexion. I would love to interview B. I want to be a psychologist when I'm older(and I'm not sure how xD). I enjoy Matt's character because his video game thing... ^_^;

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-20 21:00:50 +0000 UTC]

I was never that crazy about WoW xD It's fun, yeah, but MMORPGs have never really been my thing. But I'm also really picky about who I roleplay with xD; Kind of like how I won't read fanfiction by just anyone, I won't roleplay with just anyone. It's a lot the same, really, since it's all story-writing.

Of the Organization, I definitely relate to Zexion the most. That's probably why he's my favorite. And Matt's my favorite character because he reminds me of me Video game obsessed, intelligent, and kind of quiet. But the way I typically write is by envisioning, say, a cutscene or an episode and just writing what happens. It tends to be more realistic to me, in that way.

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-20 21:09:16 +0000 UTC]

Yeah. The role playing community was really tight knit there, but I only liked to RP with maybe... 2-4 different people. I'll read anyone's story, though, but only if it's good. Kinda just how I roll... go with the flow unless you absolutely just can't


I agree with you in that sense. I have to have a very good visual of what's going on in my head before I can even think about writing... I like Zexion, because... well... he reminds me of myself xD A schemer.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-20 21:50:05 +0000 UTC]

I usually end up making up the storylines for any RPs I end up in. That seems to be the case, anyway. Not like I really mind xD;

Most of the Organization is pretty easy to write for, mostly because they have basic personalities that you're kind of free to play with. That's one of the reasons I like Matt - there's enough information about him to know a little bit about him, but he's pretty open. The Org is the same way, because you see them around Sora, but not really around each other... except the rare scene when they interact.

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-21 01:35:00 +0000 UTC]

That's pretty cool xD I like using a base idea as something to work with, then make up the story as I go along.


Exactly, there's little enough where you can mold and shape them, tweak them a little, but enough where if you screw with them too much, you end up changing the character and making them act out of character.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-21 04:13:06 +0000 UTC]

It's really amazing how much a storyline can change from your original idea to what it ends up being. Half the time I don't even recognize it anymore xD Usually it's just, "This is our destination, and this is why we're going," and let it go from there.

When used humorously, OOC is funny... at least, when used humorously and done well. But if you're expecting to be taken seriously... no.

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-21 04:18:28 +0000 UTC]

Seriously xD the story I'm doing, Broken... the original idea was just 'vampire' and it kind of developed dramatically from there xD Good fun no matter what, though!


Indeed, that is so true! OOC is also okay when characters are drunk, lol

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-21 05:15:02 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely xD But drunk is nearly always funny. Which, half the time, leads into smut.

WOO-HOO SMUT!

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-23 01:11:09 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I wanted to write a smutty part during the time they were drunk, but my parents like to read it xD
Originally there was an implied kiss scene, but I took that out, too, just in case.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-23 14:27:52 +0000 UTC]

My mom typically doesn't read my fan-fiction, even if she likes the fandom - she's just not a fan-fiction kind of person xD; She reads my original stuff, though, so I have to keep smut out of that >>;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-23 23:19:54 +0000 UTC]

My parents are all over my work... if I'm writing a story, they -must- read it for God knows why.
"What are you typing?"
'A story.'
"Oh, lemme read it!"


and I can't say no because then they'll know I put something bad in it.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-24 04:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, there's no more certain way for a parent to know that you aren't supposed to be doing something than to refuse to let them see it. I know my mom... if she asked to read something of mine and I said no, she'd say, "Why? Is it porn?"

She's too freaking perceptive *Sigh*

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-24 22:55:33 +0000 UTC]

Oh Jesus, my mom is exactly the same way.
Especially because they figured out I'm into that kind of shit, too...
Gives me extrasensory abilities so I can sense them coming and open up something else to work on

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-24 23:09:07 +0000 UTC]

Those senses are useful. But my mom gets suspicious when she sees me randomly clicking on the taskbar when she comes up behind me Oo;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-24 23:12:40 +0000 UTC]

My parents get suspicious, too, but only when I'm on the internets. If it's a story, they tend to not care. I can sense them coming in from another room xD It's how I get away with being on y!gallery.

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-24 23:15:10 +0000 UTC]

That's the beauty of being 18 - my mom doesn't have to like it, and I'd be weirded out if she did, but she can't, like, take my computer away or something xD;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-24 23:23:20 +0000 UTC]

So true! Curse adolescence and suspicious, nosy parents!
Oh, how I envy you

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Kaana-Chan [2008-09-24 23:28:59 +0000 UTC]

I thought it would never come... but it did. And believe me, being an adult completely and totally sucks so far ._.;

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Kaana-Chan In reply to ShinyObject01 [2008-09-24 23:35:34 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I can imagine that...
It may suck, but it does have a few advantages.

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HyperTornado222 [2008-09-16 15:44:29 +0000 UTC]

So cute~

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Thorngor-argromack [2008-09-16 13:08:30 +0000 UTC]

Aaaaaaawww!! that was cute

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ShinyObject01 In reply to Thorngor-argromack [2008-09-16 21:06:50 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~

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