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silentkitty — On the Beach
Published: 2009-05-11 03:11:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1318; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Not sure if I'm going to color this or not, probably not since it was just intended as inking practice. If anyone wants the full-size version to color, let me know and I'll upload it somewhere.
Critiques are turned on mainly for the inking since I probably will not be going back and fixing any anatomy or composition issues.
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This one is very cute, very alive! The expressions are amazing and I love the backgrounds. I also like your consistency with Cai, that she is never stick-thin. The sun umbrella's a nice touch, too.
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Man, seeing your art in black and white is almost as cool as seeing it in color! I love your line work, it's always amazed me...I still like to go over the tutorial you posted on DD on how you drawing and color a comic page. 
I'm sorely tempted to try coloring this one...I know I have other things to be finishing up--boy, do I ever know--but to pass up the chance of coloring in some line work by you?! Aww maaan...your lines look so crisp, I just want to eat them! *note to self: don't eat the line art. It's not quite as yummy when it's on the inside*
Well, if you want to upload it somewhere for download--or even email it to me at chameleon_kid@hotmail.com, go ahead! I might just see if I could squeeze in some extra time to color it. (Knowing me, I'd probably drop everything else I was supposed to be doing just to color it.)
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I'm glad to hear that tutorial helped, too!
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Thank you a thousand times over! 
I'll be sure and send you the finished version once I'm done. (I'll also take the time to finish up my late contest entry and send that along as fan art as well.)
Aye, that was one of the first tutorials I ever went through, and it has remained one of my favorites--along with the tutorial you did on rain effects...That's one effect I've wanted to try out for quite some time, but I've never drawn a scene that had rain.
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I think this is really good - you did a great job on determining distance through line thickness. Seeing as you're not really looking for anything but inking critique, I really don't have any.
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I love this piece. I can see the change in how you drew their facial features, so you defintely achieved what you set out to. I know this is a minor detail, but I love the designs on Cai's bra and saronge (?). I'm sure those were really meticulous to make.I also love the details on the trees. I admire that you're willing to put this much work into the inking.
That was a really long, drawn-out comment.
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That's a hella sweet lookin palm tree you got der. =]
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