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Published: 2010-04-12 04:34:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 485; Favourites: 12; Downloads: 10
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Description Totally original title, I know...

Stock
Horse - [link]
BG - [link]
Wings - [link]
Water - [link]

About
Working on - manes and tails, color change, wings, smudging, water.
Time period - lots of hours...
Program - Gimp 2.6
Layers - 40.
Other - I hand drew the mane and tail again...I think it looks better this time around. No tablet. *wishes she could afford one...*
Feedback - could you please critique? If you don't have time, that's fine. I'm getting better at manes and tails. ^_^

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Comments: 7

Starvinx [2010-04-12 12:06:19 +0000 UTC]

~ Hmm.. Now I think you've been doing Photo-manips longer than me. So it's feels awkward giving a critique on this. xD

~ Nice work on blending the wings, but be careful where you put them, if it were me, they would have been a little lower on the horse. But that's just me.

~ Lovely mane and tail, but you need to give it more.. freedom, I guess. Try to get it flowing since the horse is.. sliding to a stop ? So stray strands of hair about the place would help give it a more realistic touch.

~ Something's missing.. *Stares at picture for hours*

~ Got it ! You're missing a shadow/reflection under the horse. Try shading under the hooves to make it look like it's feet touch the bottom.

~ Hope I helped.

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SilverValleyRanch In reply to Starvinx [2010-04-12 14:26:19 +0000 UTC]

Haha, I've been doing them for awhile, but I'm experimenting so I want to know what everybody thinks. I'm trying to find my 'style' for manes and tails, like I have for everything else. lol. And actually, you give really great critiques.

I've always been a fan of higher wings, just like the wings on a bird are on the very top of its back. But then again, that's a personal preferance, everybody does theirs a little differently and in a different spot.

Yea, I know it needs a little more freedom...but I wanted to see if I could actually MAKE a mane before I tried adding freedom to it. lol.

^_^ Glad you caught that...I've been staring at it forever without knowing what was missing. lol.

Thank you SO much for the critique. *tries to find time to fix her mistakes* hmmmm...lol. Also, I'm sorry I haven't been commenting on yours...I have them all saved I swear, I just haven't had time to sort through them. *blames college professors and her father for having no spare time*

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Starvinx In reply to SilverValleyRanch [2010-04-12 17:49:17 +0000 UTC]

~ Always nice to experiment with new things. ^^

~ I suppose they do, just have to be careful I suppose. xD

~ Glad to help, and thanks.

~ I don'tif you do or you don't as long as whoever ordered it is satisfied, I am. ^^

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SilverValleyRanch In reply to Starvinx [2010-04-15 23:47:04 +0000 UTC]

haha, it isn't an order...just some random manip to practice with. ^_^

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Starvinx In reply to SilverValleyRanch [2010-04-16 11:01:40 +0000 UTC]

~ ^^ Nice avatar

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SilverValleyRanch In reply to Starvinx [2010-04-16 13:56:19 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! I love my baby boy. ^_^

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Starvinx In reply to SilverValleyRanch [2010-04-16 14:17:55 +0000 UTC]

~ ^^

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