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Published: 2015-06-17 14:20:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 10611; Favourites: 56; Downloads: 64
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Description For the record I imagine the bushy haired fairy to speak with a strong east London 'cockney' accent Apologies for the missed page last week, I'll have a treat up some time this week to make up for it

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Comments: 34

pumpkinlord07 [2015-06-25 14:19:44 +0000 UTC]

With all the crap that tarryn puts up with the addition of possibly taking care of this tiny elf for who knows how long she should be labeled as a saint lol.

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SimonLorimer In reply to pumpkinlord07 [2015-07-01 23:15:51 +0000 UTC]

Haha she could be, but I think she'd spoil the atmosphere at the saint's club in heaven with her bitter ways!

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Karbo [2015-06-20 19:07:57 +0000 UTC]

Great page ! I really like how you manage to change the tone in a very natural and smooth manner. Here in just a few panel you switched to something more nostalgic and touching and it works very well. great job

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SimonLorimer In reply to Karbo [2015-06-25 00:24:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I was worried the transition would come across a bit forced so thank you for those words

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Asuroth [2015-06-19 18:11:45 +0000 UTC]

Ahh, those last three panels and lines are very strong with her thinking on that and deciding to take care of the little elf... It's actually quite interesting as it can be taken kind of two ways- one being the home she had to leave before being cursed, and now her new home which I suspect is what she means as significantly less welcoming too.  Still curious how things will go when her smaller elf wakes up with her...can't imagine her being worse company for Tarynn than bushy haired fairy anyway .

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SimonLorimer In reply to Asuroth [2015-06-25 00:24:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha well with her lucky nothing is guaranteed! Thank you so much for the comment!

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ChryoStrand [2015-06-19 13:20:15 +0000 UTC]

lmao , "when it gets to know you and dosen't want to be your friend anymore" damnit  bushy! why you gotta be such an ass! haha if i was Tarynn i would find a new home as far away from her as possible lol. hehe and what a tender Tarynn in those last panels =3, you dont see that very often .

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SimonLorimer In reply to ChryoStrand [2015-06-25 00:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Haha well if she wasn't she would be the bushy haired fairy after all! Don't know why Tarynn hasn't tried that yet, she must hate packing!

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PrinnyDood-Abides [2015-06-18 14:13:43 +0000 UTC]

I'm sure you're tired of hearing this, but: another great page!

Nice work on the panoramic landscape in the third panel especially, those can be quite challenging to pull of I understand.

The shift in tone to introspective and melancholy in the last panels was nicely done as well.

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SimonLorimer In reply to PrinnyDood-Abides [2015-06-25 00:22:43 +0000 UTC]

I'll never tire of your comments! Thank you very much, it was a lot of fun to give it a bash

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BlazingBarrager [2015-06-18 13:21:46 +0000 UTC]

Geez fairies can be total asses. :/

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SimonLorimer In reply to BlazingBarrager [2015-06-25 00:22:05 +0000 UTC]

Haha well the bushy haired fairy is the slightly darker possible outcome of a culture built entirely on hedonism after all

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BlazingBarrager In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-06-25 15:35:10 +0000 UTC]

That...sounds terrifying to be honest. O.o

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FS-the-voresmith [2015-06-18 07:13:02 +0000 UTC]

This is a fairly new side to Tarynn (last line of the page): seeing her look after someone else, a small life nestled in her hands. Given the difficulties that she faces herself, she deserves a bit of recognition there!

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SimonLorimer In reply to FS-the-voresmith [2015-06-25 00:21:26 +0000 UTC]

Haha yeah it's certainly not something that comes naturally to her Thank you for the comment!

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luvidicus [2015-06-17 22:28:10 +0000 UTC]

With Tayrn's luck, the elf will end up not wanting to be her friend XD

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SimonLorimer In reply to luvidicus [2015-06-25 00:20:53 +0000 UTC]

And that she also wants to hang out with the bushy haired fairy too! XD

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luvidicus In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-06-25 00:24:56 +0000 UTC]

Even worse...she could be just as annoying as the fairy and they could both torment her!

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SimonLorimer In reply to luvidicus [2015-07-01 23:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Haha good eye! It's possible!

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luvidicus In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-07-02 00:42:38 +0000 UTC]

Imagine an even more evil duo! It's the stuff of Tayrn's nightmares lol.

She'd hate me for even thinking of that possibility and giving you more ideas to torture her with XD

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SithLordNergal [2015-06-17 20:38:48 +0000 UTC]

poor Tarynn, she needs some better friends. =< 

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SimonLorimer In reply to SithLordNergal [2015-06-25 00:19:32 +0000 UTC]

Or even just one friend, full stop!

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SithLordNergal In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-06-25 08:37:55 +0000 UTC]

D=> She doesn't even have a friend? Gah, give that Elf a friend. X3

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SimonLorimer In reply to SithLordNergal [2015-07-01 23:12:25 +0000 UTC]

She's her own best friend, it's all good!

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SithLordNergal In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-07-02 04:57:21 +0000 UTC]

She needs more friends! =U

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Prof-Nekko [2015-06-17 19:12:38 +0000 UTC]

cue wavy flashback introduction effect

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SimonLorimer In reply to Prof-Nekko [2015-06-25 00:17:20 +0000 UTC]

Haha not exactly, but it does seem that way in the context!

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JiroKatsu [2015-06-17 15:44:23 +0000 UTC]

The bushy-sama is so kind and considaret! Wonder is Tarryn will ever have such bad luck, it just becomes good luck at some point. >x>

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SimonLorimer In reply to JiroKatsu [2015-06-25 00:17:01 +0000 UTC]

What a charitable service she does giving Tarynn someone to talk to! Haha like a counter getting so high it flips back over to 0?

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JiroKatsu In reply to SimonLorimer [2015-06-25 00:32:15 +0000 UTC]

Indeed. >o> Or maybe just a glitch in the system, like Gandhi in Civilization! OwO

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WarNob123 [2015-06-17 15:10:33 +0000 UTC]

Flashback time!?

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SimonLorimer In reply to WarNob123 [2015-06-25 00:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Not quite, but I now see how it could look like that!

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DarkHourglass [2015-06-17 14:39:33 +0000 UTC]

I didn't know that! thats pretty cool XD hahaha

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SimonLorimer In reply to DarkHourglass [2015-06-25 00:16:03 +0000 UTC]

I'm all about the headcanons!

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