fares002 [2012-12-07 07:24:41 +0000 UTC]

I really like how there is a Father/Daughter connection in this chapter of the story. I also like how the nightmares of her past are hunting her but at the same time she is living in the present. Awesome job so far with this storyline/

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lasserine [2012-12-07 06:59:47 +0000 UTC]

Glad you are continuing with the girls.

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af-s772 [2012-12-07 05:54:47 +0000 UTC]

A nice contrast to the previous chapter, and a nice bit character development. I'm curious as to
what ghosts of the past her father and others might be afraid. Well done.

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