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snore23 — Magic Within-Chapter 5-A Warning is Given
Published: 2013-07-25 03:41:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 2654; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 88
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The 5th chapter of Magic Within. I had an urge to finish it and post what I have. I'm still not satisfied after...what is it now...six rewrites of just this scene? Well, I will post it as is and get some feedback on it. I might change it in the future, specifically the interaction between Sylvie and her parents. We'll see.Anyway, I hope everyone appreciates it, and likes the next chapter in Sylvie and Taryn's adventure!
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Good chapter,but it made me think that you are no way done writing this story! Keep up the great work.
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This turned out pretty good, and you did a great job reminding us how big a scumbucket Nightshade is. Having read chapter 6 first, I have a clear understanding about Sylvie's
state of mind. Thanks for posting this.
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Glad you liked it. Like I said, I re-wrote I don't know how many times and wasn't satisfied. Still aren't, to tell you the truth, but I'm willing to give up and let it slide. Thanks for reading this, and hopefully I can post the next chapter soon.
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You're welcome. I appreciate the time and effort you put into your stories. There is question I need to ask, but I'll note you.
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