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She was conceived on the edge of a mirror,lined with pretty white lace,
that burned the inside of her parents' nostrils.
She was born with a hole in her heart,
that the doctor's never noticed,
and no one bothered to fill.
She met Death on the playground,
when kindergarten was bending her bones.
Enticed by the glinting of his scythe,
as it preyed on a malformed baby rabbit.
She made a pinky promise with him,
swearing that she'd never forget his face.
He came and went,
swayed by corpse breaths
and east-coast winds,
but always leaving her alone.
He showed her how to hurt,
in the worst kind of way.
And each time,
he paid her a visit,
he'd take someone back with him.
She often asked where he would go,
when his curled claws would drag her mother,
her father,
her sister,
and every love she'd ever fallen for,
into the darkness that he crawled from.
All he'd say,
was that she'd find them again someday,
and that he would take her to them, personally.
But as February,
of her fourteenth year,
threatened to consume her whole,
burying her in the snowdrifts and icy winds
of its cavernous belly,
she saw him for the last time.
Without a second glance at her,
he swept her ink colored rabbit
into the crook of his scythe,
and turned his back on her.
For six years,
she waited,
for the promise he'd made.
To see all the ones she'd lost
to his bony grasp.
She had no friends,
no lovers,
no kin,
no pets,
only waiting,
alone,
for the day that he'd take her home.
As she withered into her twenties,
back breaking,
and hair graying,
not from age,
but from the weight of the world,
she began to lose hope.
He was all she'd ever known,
and now,
even he had left her alone.
She wept for him to take her,
as she slept in alleyways,
stained with his fingerprints.
She begged for him to find her,
as she fell on the steps of a church,
whose doors she couldn't approach.
She whimpered for him to save her,
as she stumbled,
heart cold,
and stomach hot,
to the edge of her iron-wrought balcony.
As the ice,
and the concrete,
gathered her into their embrace,
finally,
he came for her.
A twisted smile,
on torn and rotted lips,
and his scythe lined with frost,
and her blood.
He gathered her into his arms,
whispering that all was well,
as his cloak pulled darkness down to close her eyes.
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Comments: 285
Fluffy-Emo-Chan In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 05:50:43 +0000 UTC]
Amazing...absolutely amazing. And beautiful, so very beautiful in it's own, sad way.
Love it!
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to Fluffy-Emo-Chan [2010-10-25 05:53:13 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much.
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Crystal-Moon-Beam In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 05:02:39 +0000 UTC]
really good justin!! Keep it up!!
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Crystal-Moon-Beam In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-26 04:51:00 +0000 UTC]
sorry he has a very similar name to yours and he also writes literature. sorry again
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to Crystal-Moon-Beam [2010-10-26 13:08:56 +0000 UTC]
Oh, s'no problem!
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Crystal-Moon-Beam In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-27 12:46:51 +0000 UTC]
ahah lol thank you !
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Crystal-Moon-Beam In reply to Crystal-Moon-Beam [2010-10-25 05:03:18 +0000 UTC]
sorry soryy wrong person! But this is still really good!! sorry again
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FoxyPheonix In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 04:42:01 +0000 UTC]
This would make a great story, to be honest. It is a great story, but I mean with more detail to it and such. Like a novel, y'know?
I'd love to take a crack at it when I have time, and if it was okay with you for me to use the idea.
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to FoxyPheonix [2010-10-25 04:55:36 +0000 UTC]
Of course. As long as you gave credit to me. Let me know if you do.
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FoxyPheonix In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-25 04:57:08 +0000 UTC]
Sure thing. ^_^ I shall contact you if I can get around to it.
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ParadeOfJoy In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 03:17:54 +0000 UTC]
actually it makes a lot of sense to me (depending on if my guess is correct haha) and i really love this poem a lot, its really pretty
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to ParadeOfJoy [2010-10-25 03:32:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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Irraelon In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 03:13:35 +0000 UTC]
kinda made me all emotional at the end
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Irraelon In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-25 03:16:41 +0000 UTC]
no, no. In the good way!
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to scarletcamellia [2010-10-25 03:15:40 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. A lot.
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Nehimar In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 02:54:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh, this is really nice!! Well done!
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magic6jewls In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-25 22:13:58 +0000 UTC]
Eh? Why apologize? It was good!
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magic6jewls In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-26 23:06:17 +0000 UTC]
What was it inspired by anyways?
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to magic6jewls [2010-10-26 23:50:15 +0000 UTC]
Actually, just a random one that popped into my head It started out, just as the girl being born from reckless, addicted parents, and blossomed into something I didn't expect.
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magic6jewls In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-29 01:38:06 +0000 UTC]
I've done stuff like that before, but it was inspired from a dream. (girl born from uncaring, suisidal parents).
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to magic6jewls [2010-10-29 02:11:45 +0000 UTC]
Well I'm sure they were great.
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MrsPasswordEnna In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 02:33:38 +0000 UTC]
I love it!!! But so much that I can not express myself ! Add fav! ^^ I loved the story ^^
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to MrsPasswordEnna [2010-10-25 03:17:00 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it
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VincentsFallenAngel In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 02:27:19 +0000 UTC]
Morbin, though beautiful. This was a lovely read
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to VincentsFallenAngel [2010-10-25 03:16:45 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much.
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VincentsFallenAngel In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-26 03:41:16 +0000 UTC]
you're welcome
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jessica499499 In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 01:29:14 +0000 UTC]
Very touching in a morbid kind of way. Awesome work.
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ms-Bennington In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 01:01:29 +0000 UTC]
hmmm...so beautiful. I enjoy to read it
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to ms-Bennington [2010-10-25 01:20:25 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much
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Valinta In reply to ??? [2010-10-25 00:56:25 +0000 UTC]
This is terribly sad and absolutely horrifying. I love it, and it makes me feel less depressed.
It's frikkin' amazing.
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to Valinta [2010-10-25 03:18:13 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you liked it. Thank you.
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Valinta In reply to SoImStillUnsure [2010-10-25 22:54:22 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome.
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to IneloquentPrincess [2010-10-25 03:17:20 +0000 UTC]
Thank you.
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peacoc-feathers In reply to ??? [2010-10-24 23:48:10 +0000 UTC]
waaahhh this is so awesome!!!
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SoImStillUnsure In reply to peacoc-feathers [2010-10-25 00:32:06 +0000 UTC]
Thanks so much!
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