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Her employer cooed quietly, seeming unfazed by Mia's obvious lack of expertise as she slinked silently backwards. Mia's ears pricked and she darted her head around as the heavy bulkhead behind squeeled and hissed suddenly.Related content
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fgasser [2021-05-20 19:58:42 +0000 UTC]
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OldDog77 [2015-11-19 19:47:38 +0000 UTC]
A continuation from the last one. Again, the lighting and background art really really help here. It's kinda like in my stories how I try to add little details and story even though it's often just about sex.
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Solone In reply to OldDog77 [2015-12-02 14:36:31 +0000 UTC]
It's the little details that matter I feel, that's what I love about your writing. There's a load of detail, characterization and context that I just can't skip because it's all relevant. It's what lifts your work above and makes you one of the best TF artists I'm aware of.
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OldDog77 In reply to Solone [2015-12-02 17:31:37 +0000 UTC]
Psssh this isn't about me, it's about your work! But, the same - good details and background work really sets the scene and lifts it up. It's like, if you're writing something and you break character or write something that is just off a bit, it really pulls the reader out of the story. And all of these details you put into it just really help to create the mood and keep the viewer in the scene. It really adds to it.
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