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Introduction of Character
Name: (First/Last)
Nickname: (If none, leave blank)
Age:
Gender:
Race: (Human, Faunus, Other)
Symbol: (This is the characters Emblem, for example, Weiss is a snowflake glyph, Ruby's is a rose, etc. Tell us what the symbol is for your character, and define it's meaning and connection to your character)
Affiliation(s): (Signal Academy, Beacon Academy, White Fang, Other)
The Character’s Appearance
Height:
Weight:
Eye Colour:
Hair: (Colour and Length)
Complexion:
About The Character
Status: (Active, Retired, Dead)
Occupation: (Hunter/Huntress, Student, Teacher)
Handedness:
Clothing:
Outfit Colours:
Physical Characteristics: (What do they look like?)
Accessories: (Key Items the character possesses)
Personality:
[Be as detailed as you can with your character’s personality. DO NOT JUST PUT DOWN WORDS! Go into depth with your character.]
Fear(s):
Likes:
Dislikes:
Habit(s):
Fatal Flaw(s):
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Weapon
Weapon Name:
Weapon Description:
Relationship With Others
Reputation:
(How people view your Character in General)
Friends:
Team:
Enemy(ies):
The Character’s Abilities
Agility: /10
Swordsmanship: /10
Long Range Accuracy: /10
Defense: /10
Offense: /10
Aura: /10
People Skills: /10
Special Skill(s)/ Semblance: (For example, a Faunus has Night Vision (skill), Pyrrha controls Polarity(semblance), etc)
Brief History: (Must be at least 200 words / 2 paragraphs)
Trivia:
Related content
Comments: 303
OnionFairy99 In reply to ??? [2016-01-24 19:04:14 +0000 UTC]
Used, and put on quotev (gonna post on here soon) And don't worry, I linked back and gave credit
www.quotev.com/TheOnionFairy99…
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SoloZerker In reply to OnionFairy99 [2016-01-25 06:24:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for linking back and giving credit.
I also read it. It seems pretty well built. There were a few confusing parts in the backstory. Perhaps rewriting "She wanted it to be fake, she wanted this to be a dream! She fell asleep! Yeah, this was just a nightmare!" to be something along the lines of "She wanted it to be fake, she wanted this to be a dream! She fell asleep! Yeah, this was just a nightmare! she kept saying/thinking to herself over and over again." might reduce confusion.
When I read it, the group of sentences made me think that it truly was just a dream she had, instead of her wanting it to be a dream/nightmare.
Another thing to consider may be where exactly the family is living, since inside any city dwelling, grimm are not able to access it due to walls and barricades surrounding the large cities and country borders. Places such as ruins, wastelands and forests away from civilization are more likely to have grimm.
I was also surprised by the weight of the character, but after reading further into it, I find it to be more believable. 5 foot 8 and a half inches is pretty short, so for a young woman to be 153 pounds... it's a little much, but I haven't seen an image of her. Perhaps her build is more stocky than athletic, making her (as you wrote) more of an endurance character instead of a raw speed and power character. More of a heavy hitter but with a long build up to her attacks due to their stronger and heavier nature.
(Forgive the smash brothers reference, but instead of her being like a Fox/Marth Style character, she's more of a Bowser/Ike Style character. That's what I'm understanding, at least.)
The weapon could use a bit more fleshing out and understanding as well, but I feel a drawing/design would clear up a few misconceptions that my mind may have created. Drawings alongside Bio sheets like these can work in tandem a lot better than just one or the other.
good luck with your endeavors and I hope any other reviewers are able to assist with anything they may find that needs tweaking. Good job nonetheless. An interesting character and I respect your choice to refrain from using Canon OC's to build your backstory, character and life of you OC. I find OC's and their creators that do this to be not only more reasonable, but also more creative.
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OnionFairy99 In reply to SoloZerker [2016-01-25 23:36:11 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so so much for your input!! I will work on this character, thank you yet again!
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SoloZerker In reply to OnionFairy99 [2016-01-26 00:30:30 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
I'm glad to help, anytime.
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SoloZerker In reply to superjulian0000 [2015-11-19 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]
the natural color, texture, and appearance of a person's skin, especially of the face.
"an attractive girl with a pale complexion"
synonyms: skin, skin color, skin tone; pigmentation
"a pale complexion"
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Zen-Aku-The-Wolf In reply to SoloZerker [2015-12-16 21:55:51 +0000 UTC]
I don't know if anyone else noticed, but you forgot the oc's symbol.
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SoloZerker In reply to Zen-Aku-The-Wolf [2015-12-17 06:40:05 +0000 UTC]
I'll find a place to add that in. Thank you.
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superjulian0000 In reply to SoloZerker [2015-11-20 00:09:14 +0000 UTC]
OOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH okay, thx =3
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RazellRainbow In reply to ??? [2015-11-04 23:16:34 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the sheet, definitely using it!
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Karyu-no-Kiba In reply to ??? [2015-11-01 03:22:34 +0000 UTC]
Er, I hate to be the one to point this out, but... you forgot Semblance.
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SoloZerker In reply to Karyu-no-Kiba [2015-11-01 20:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Special Skill(s): (For example, a Faunus has Night Vision, Pyrrha controls Polarity, etc)
I phrased it incorrectly. My bad. I'll be sure to fix that right away.
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Kaiatheshapeshifter In reply to ??? [2015-10-18 05:36:49 +0000 UTC]
I saw this before I watched RWBY I watched RWBY and I'm glad I watched it. It is really great and I love it. Though I can't decide if I'll make a white fang or hunts person. I'm edging towards white fang, I love makeing villains.
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SoloZerker In reply to Kaiatheshapeshifter [2015-10-18 21:17:28 +0000 UTC]
Currently, I feel as though the white fang are all just... being used. They're not necessarily the villains, they're just working with the villains because of promises made by the true bad guys to help them with their own causes. It kind of hints towards this with how Roman Torchwhick doesn't like being around the Fauness people, showing a reluctant acceptance of them when around them, and mumbling racist things about having to work with them when more in private.
Currently, yes, I'd agree that the White Fang are bad guys... but not necessarily the true villains. Just... misunderstood and going about their wishes for equality the wrong way and with the wrong sort of people to "help" them.
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Kaiatheshapeshifter In reply to SoloZerker [2015-10-19 19:33:57 +0000 UTC]
Well I know all that, I know the White fang aren't necessarily villains but also for me no villain is. They all have a back story for why and what they did. Like for Bane, famous for breaking Batman's back and breaking both of Killer croc's arms HE was raised in a prison and was tested with VENOM and it worked though he faked his death to escape. And with the injection of VENOM he gets stronger. Though he needs it once every hour or else there is a chance he might die.
I adore the back stories of villains and the back story of the White fang is quite reasonable.
And with killer croc, he was born with a deformity that killed his mother. He was teased at school for his reptilian appearance. When he couldn't take it any one He attempted to kill one of them and spent a while in reform school. When he got out he was a bit more reptilian in appearance, he joined the circus an took a job to wrestling crocodiles to death. Under the name of Killer croc. But he isn't just all monster. If you see Gotham academy he can be quite kind and silly to. With food as his weakness. That's why Croc is one of my fav villains next to Harley Quin and Shredder.
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Firestar-Kelman In reply to ??? [2015-10-15 18:32:43 +0000 UTC]
I've been looking for an OC profile for RWBY. XD this one is nice and detailed. I'll send you the link once i finish off my OC.
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SoloZerker In reply to Firestar-Kelman [2015-10-15 19:56:03 +0000 UTC]
Sounds great. ^^ I'm interested in reading your details later on then
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DarkLight2489 In reply to ??? [2015-10-06 15:51:42 +0000 UTC]
Thanks for the blank bio, I will post a link to it when its done, again thanks
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SonicRulez21 In reply to ??? [2015-09-04 09:49:34 +0000 UTC]
Used ^^ please read it and tell me what you think.I personally felt very emotional sonicrulez21.deviantart.com/jo…
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SoloZerker In reply to SonicRulez21 [2015-09-07 22:14:12 +0000 UTC]
You can do what you want and stuff.... but that bio sheet was not for Hedgehog stuff. It was for RWBY. Completely different. I won't ask you to remove it or delete it... just... be sure to read what the sheet is actually for next time.
Thanks.
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SonicRulez21 In reply to SoloZerker [2015-09-08 03:57:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh my god.I'm so sorry .I didn't notice it AT all..
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Onisatsu18 In reply to ??? [2015-08-13 07:49:01 +0000 UTC]
Cool! Just what I need for my RWBY OCs!
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SoloZerker In reply to Onisatsu18 [2015-08-13 08:14:18 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome.
Glad I can help out a little bit with OC creating. ^^
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wolfofwierdness In reply to ??? [2015-06-07 16:05:31 +0000 UTC]
cool, I can imagine a roleplaying system being made for rwby with rules on character creation.
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SoloZerker In reply to wolfofwierdness [2015-06-07 16:24:59 +0000 UTC]
I believe there already is a few of such groups on deviantART already. You just need to look a little bit to find them hidden behind the web pages.
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TheHook1 In reply to ??? [2015-05-05 18:12:48 +0000 UTC]
Excuse me, how do I download/copy this template to use?
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SoloZerker In reply to TheHook1 [2015-05-07 04:04:16 +0000 UTC]
You copy and paste it to a word document. It's mainly meant to be for the description of a drawing of an OC. It's the "Written Portion" of a RWBY OC Template. You'd make a drawing of your OC, and then place this with the information required into the description of a picture of your OC.
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llamasrule2 In reply to ??? [2015-01-21 02:20:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! This will help me with a lot of RWBY OC stuff and my RP stuff~~~~
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krazzyman2207 In reply to ??? [2014-10-26 23:42:41 +0000 UTC]
is swordsmanship how well you can wield a weapon?
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SoloZerker In reply to krazzyman2207 [2014-10-27 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]
Yes. How well you can wield a weapon would fall under swordsmanship. The better they are at using their weapon, they higher their swordsmanship is. Of course though... there's always room for improvement, so a 10/10 would be unlikely for a student in training to become a Hunter or Huntress.
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krazzyman2207 In reply to SoloZerker [2014-10-27 11:34:30 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the confirmation.
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digitalmeister In reply to ??? [2014-06-03 06:47:38 +0000 UTC]
This is a fair bit of information, but I am looking to re-do the RWBY Character Sheets I had made on an older machine before it crashed on me. Would you mind me adapting this to a different format that would include images?
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SoloZerker In reply to digitalmeister [2014-06-03 18:46:07 +0000 UTC]
Not an issue.
Do as you please.
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digitalmeister In reply to SoloZerker [2014-06-05 03:00:30 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks for your permission!
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SoloZerker In reply to digitalmeister [2014-06-05 06:46:09 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, no problem. I'd very much like to see what you do for changes though. Perhaps I may even adopt the changes myself for my own OC. If it works for me.
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digitalmeister In reply to SoloZerker [2014-06-10 19:46:07 +0000 UTC]
I made two versions, so people can choose:
Digital Version (requires Photoshop)
And a Printable Version: Page 1 Page 2 Page 3
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SoloZerker In reply to digitalmeister [2014-06-11 14:29:26 +0000 UTC]
They all look very nice.
However it seems like the printable version has more information present than the digital version.
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digitalmeister In reply to SoloZerker [2014-10-19 18:37:03 +0000 UTC]
The digital version should have a PDF/archive as the file for download. The other ones are the individual pages.
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OToySoldierO In reply to ??? [2014-01-31 08:40:54 +0000 UTC]
YESS YOU BEAUTIFUL CHILD I'M FILLING THIS IN FOR VI PRONTO
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