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Description I guess this has turned into a full fledge story... Sorry.... XD! You don't have to read it if you don't want too. It's alright. My drawings only matter. !! The story just enhances it.... Well... Maybe.. XD!!
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"GWEN?!"

Gwen had finally lost complete self control...

...and the older boy began to panic.

"Gwen, listen to me! You don't wanna do this!"

Kevin was desperately trying to reason with the girl. Keeping what he had only moments ago, alive.

Gwen, emotionless, just stares at the boy, for what seemed like endless minutes. Then, she began to slowly cock her head to the side. Still bestowing that demented wicked smile.

"Gwen no longer exists..." The anodite grins even wider. "...And why shouldn't I? I have all this tremendous power, and you don't even want me use it." The anodite gets closer to Kevin's face, their noses almost touching. "I'm so glad all of you were too helpless to save one silly, little simple girl. In all honesty? It's for the best this way."

The anodite moved slightly away from the distraught boy, and began filling the room with shrill like laughter, that would have for certain, make the devil himself cringe.

Gritting and barring his teeth, Kevin was still trying to reason, to bring the red head he loved, back to her senses...

Back, to reality.

"I did! I DID try to help you! But you wouldn't even let me in! Or even get close to you!!" Silence fell upon both ears of the two teens. Then Kevin's eyes suddenly widen, when he realizes that his own anger wasn't going to help bring Gwen back, and takes in a slow deep ragged breath, and continues. "Please, fight this." He looks to his feet, almost as though he had already lost. "I... I can't lose you to this again."

Before the girl could answer, Gwen hears a faint clicking sound coming from within the shadows... She automatically lifts her hands up in defence. "Who's there!"

The raven haired boy immediately turns around. "Stay back, Tennyson, I've got this!"

Ben hesitated at first, but quickly stood down, removing his hand from the ultimatrix. He knew Kevin needed to this, and it was more than likely Gwen would listen to the older boy more so than her own cousin. It was just the reality of the situation.

Ben looks back up from his watch, and sees that Gwen was in the ready to attack. The hero ran a bit closer, screaming to his comrade.
"KEVIN! LOOK OUT!"

Blasts of bright pink mana filled the dully lit ware house....

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Part 4! Woo hoo!

Don't own em. But I do love to draw them, OBSESSIVELY! Especially when I'm extremely bored.... LOL!

Thanks for viewing!

The Spoon.
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Comments: 44

HungryPaperweight [2010-10-01 18:57:12 +0000 UTC]

It's nice to know Ben was preparing for the worst, but backing down was also a good call.



Then again...

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to HungryPaperweight [2010-10-02 00:39:09 +0000 UTC]

LOLZ!! Yeah, I think Kevin would've went all out on him, if our little hero didn't listen. Then again.... LOL!!!

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GTeam [2010-10-01 14:09:24 +0000 UTC]

JUST AMAZING

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to GTeam [2010-10-01 17:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much!!!

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GTeam In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-01 18:03:33 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to GTeam [2010-10-01 18:17:37 +0000 UTC]

!

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IceCream55 [2010-10-01 07:05:26 +0000 UTC]

AWSOMEEEE!
DO SOME MAOR!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to IceCream55 [2010-10-01 13:32:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you SO much!!! More to come! I have 2 panels(sheets almost highlighted and colored, well black in white anyways XD!) Just the matter of posting them. SOON!

Thank you again!!

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IceCream55 In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-17 07:35:27 +0000 UTC]

np
happy to come

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1w1w [2010-10-01 03:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Uh oh!

On a side note, I was wondering if you could draw Ben in his newest alien form I came up with after watching a show I really like alot.Here's what his newest Alien form would be like: [link]

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-01 13:20:38 +0000 UTC]

I knowz! LOL! Well, I checked it out, and It's gonna take me a while. First, I have many requests yet to finish, 2nd. I have to practice at this new character. It's pretty complex actually, not saying I CAN'T do it, I just need a few tries to get the character down. Does that make sense?? I take it you wanted the ultimatrix symbol in the center as in all his aliens right??? I know, stupid question. But I'm covering all my grounds here. Color?? Black in white? If you want it in color. What colors were you thinking? Let me know the details hon!

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-01 18:49:13 +0000 UTC]

Okay,the colors could be green and black,like Ben's jacket and the Ultimatrix symbol in the center like the rest of his aliens.Okay, I can wait and maybe you can also post up the sketches so I can see them!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-02 00:50:51 +0000 UTC]

Ok! Sounds like a plan! Let me see if I can get this big guy down! I will do my best. !

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 01:39:03 +0000 UTC]

Cool! I can even try to find you a link to the first episode of the show so you can watch it!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-02 01:58:53 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I would LOVE to! Thank you very much!

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 02:00:43 +0000 UTC]

Here you go![link] I should let you know ahead of time that it has a little bit of language and a good deal of violence but its an awesome anime anyways!Its like a darker version of Ben Ten in a way.

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-02 02:10:46 +0000 UTC]

Coool! I LOVE animime! I used to watch it ALL the time. Many many kinds. Don't worry, language doesn't bother me. XD Thank you ever so much! I'll check out this episode.

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 02:12:36 +0000 UTC]

Oh cool! I got into anime after watching shows like Pokemon and Digimon. Okay cool I can't wait to see the sketckes!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-02 02:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Actually? I've watched animime for quite a few years! Loved the graphics of the stuff. The art on them, are just unique and AMAZING.

Honestly, I can't wait to see how I do this, and how it will turn out. I hope I won't disappoint! LOL!

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 02:16:45 +0000 UTC]

Hey don't worry! I'm always impressed by your art in more ways than one so I'm sure you'll do fine I'm totally with you on that note dudett!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-04 15:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Awwwe thanks so very much! That means a lot to me to hear you say that! It really does. Thank you!

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 18:43:12 +0000 UTC]

Hehe! Glad I can help!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-04 19:21:59 +0000 UTC]

I do appreciate it, thank you. !!

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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 19:27:57 +0000 UTC]

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QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-01 02:40:03 +0000 UTC]

Anika grabbed Ben's arm. "Let him go, Ben! It's up to him now..."

Ben hesitated at first, but stood down, glancing toward the Danafayan and nodded.

The laughter emitted from Anodite was earlier reminiscent of the laughter by Verdona when she'd attacked the four teenagers in her attempt to destroy Gwen's body. Ben and Anika exchanged a look, the same thought crossing their minds. Even though she didn't know it, Verdona had gotten what she wanted...

Suddenly Anika's head jerked up, her antennas twitching. "Oh no..."

Ben had started ahead of her toward the older boy, his green eyes widen. "KEVIN!! LOOK OUT!!"

Anika started forward after the brunette, her eyes wide and her hand raised. "KEVIN!!"

Pink light filled the warehouse... The battle had begun...

There we go. ^^ Very awesome, this is turning out so well! Keep going! ^^

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-01 13:17:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you ever so much Queen!! I'm glad you like it!

Awesome drabble! You should write more stories on your OC, and the trio. I'd read it! XD!

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QueenofKaibasHeart In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 03:14:42 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! ^^ Yea, I really need to... I'm going to see if I can't get going on a new fanfic! ^^ That or at least finish Guardian of the Omnitrix!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-04 15:00:03 +0000 UTC]

Wooo hooo!!!

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nurul-hannah [2010-09-30 23:53:04 +0000 UTC]

Awhsome.I feel a little spook.lolXD.Is Ben going to give Kevin the Ultimatrix?

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to nurul-hannah [2010-10-01 13:42:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!! Oh nooooooooooooez to the spookyness!! LOL!

No, Ben won't be handing down the ultimatrix. That's aaaallll his. XD!!

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nurul-hannah In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 11:12:12 +0000 UTC]

lol XD

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AncientWonder [2010-09-30 22:30:01 +0000 UTC]

ohhh now kevy

dont care if its a story love it you must keep going

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-01 13:38:54 +0000 UTC]

Poor Kevin!!

Thank you very much! More to come!

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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-01 16:37:32 +0000 UTC]

yes poor kevy what now

np ayyayy more

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-01 17:25:56 +0000 UTC]

Wooo hooo!!! XD!

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Estebanharold17 [2010-09-30 21:12:06 +0000 UTC]

spooky O_______________o

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to Estebanharold17 [2010-09-30 21:12:34 +0000 UTC]

You betcha! XD!

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ben-gwen-kevin [2010-09-30 21:09:49 +0000 UTC]

FIRST COMMENT! and wow....

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to ben-gwen-kevin [2010-09-30 21:10:50 +0000 UTC]

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! LOLZ! Wow in a good way? Or wow, like, wow... This is 'poo'. XD!

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ben-gwen-kevin In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-09-30 21:14:55 +0000 UTC]

wow in a FANTASTICALLY GREAT WAY!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to ben-gwen-kevin [2010-09-30 21:17:46 +0000 UTC]

Awwwe! Thanks SO much!!! Yaaaaaaaaaaayz!!! I was holding my breath in anticipation to your answer! LOLZ!

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ben-gwen-kevin In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-09-30 21:19:43 +0000 UTC]

XD well, at least you didnt pass out!

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SpoonfulofLead In reply to ben-gwen-kevin [2010-09-30 21:21:21 +0000 UTC]

Nope! Haha! Thank goodness for that! XD!

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ben-gwen-kevin In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-09-30 21:28:11 +0000 UTC]

XDDDD

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