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RECAP~A figure appeared out of no where, displaying a dark blue cloak, quickly making it's way over to the three teens. Kevin and Ben automatically readied themselves for another attack. But the intruder stopped, and quickly removed the large hood from the top of it's head, taking a good look around the now, half destroyed ware house. Quietly letting out a small snicker of amusement, and offering a gentle hand to the young anodite.
"Gwendolyn? Come here dear.... We have much to talk about."
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Kevin and Ben's brows furrowed in irritation. With how things went the first time they met the older anodite, they both feared Verdona was here to take Gwen, end of story.
The two boys looked to each other, both scared for the young girl. Kevin was first to stand infront of Gwen, Ben immediately followed.
"Your not takin' her Verdona. We've already played this game." The older teen hissed. Anger bestowing itself across his already cold features.
Verdona smiled. "Oh hush, Calvin." As she waved her hand whispely in the air, not caring of the boy's little threat in the slightest. "I'm strictly here for my Grandaughters well being. Nothing more."
Kevin hesitated on moving, and continued his heated glare towards the older woman, standing his ground, firmly.
"Your just going to have to trust me." Verdona said. As she tried to pass around the two boys. Ben on the other hand, believed that Verdona was speaking the truth, and spoke up. "Kevin." The hero sighed. "Let her through."
"What?!" Kevin said in astonishment. He couldn't believe his own ears. "Are you sayin' you trust her?! The old hag can't even get my own name right! And you wanna let her get close to Gwen? She'll take her Ben, and then what? We just let her walk out of here? On her merry way? It's not happenin'!"
Ben was trying to reason with his friend. "This is the best option we have of helping Gwen, Kevin. If we don't let her help, then we may lose her forever..... I trust she's here on good intentions." The hero sighs. "What else do we have?"
"See? The boy speaks the truth deary." Verdona pats the older boy on the shoulder. "Now, let me help. I can fix this."
The older boy takes in a deep breath, moving out of the woman's way. "Fine.... But the first sign of a double cross-"
"You will be the first to know, I assure you." Verdona said sweetly as she passed the two boys, towards her grandaughter. The teen's could only stand their and watch the old woman pass. Ben was right. They were running out of options to save Gwen. So far, Verdona was their only chance.
"Gwendolyn?" Verdona softly spoke, grabbing the young girl's wrist with one hand, while placing the other one on Gwen's rosed glowing cheek. "We'll have you better in no time sweety. I promise."
Gwen still looked confused. The older anodite sensed this, and continued. "Do you even remember who I am?"
The once beautiful red head hung her face down in shame. Almost afraid to answer, but did so all the same. "Sort of.... Your familiar, but, I just can't place you."
"It's alright, Gwendolyn... Now, think real hard. Look at my face, and dig down deep sweety. You will remember. Just calm yourself, and channel your energy to me."
Gwen did as told, and in a small meditative state, she started to channel her energy through Verdona. It played out as though it was a small elegant dance the two were sharing. Memories of the young girls life, playing like a song on a record between them, as if the two of them became one. Pink hues of light beaming throughout the walls of the dimly lit ware house, cascading in all different directions. The light was so intence, that Kevin and Ben had to sheild their own eyes.
Only minutes had passed, and the two levitated back to the hard cement surface. Kevin and Ben couldn't register at what they had seen. During their meditative state, Gwen had returned back to normal, and her bright green eyes had shot open in rememberance. "Grandma!"
"That's right!" Verdona chuckled. "And this is only the beginning... Now, I'm going to get right to the point here." The woman leans in closer to her grandaughter. "Have you been forgetting to meditate?"
The young girl hesitated, stuttering, and began stammering. "Well... Ya see, the thing is..."
"Gwendolyn." Verdona said in warning. "It's important that you meditate often. If you don't. The chances of you losing control of your powers greatly increases."
"I know." The red head said in disappointment. "But lately, we've been so busy with alien invasions, and school. Not to mention karate, and-"
Verdona puts a hand up in order to stop Gwen's rambling. "There's no excuse when it comes to this. You must make the time." She turns to the boy's behind her pointing her finger sternly at them. "And you Clarence, and Ben, make sure she takes the time to meditate."
"Sure will Grandma." Ben says as he smiles. Greatful knowing Gwen was going to be alright.
Kevin elbows Ben in the ribs. "Yeah, Benji. Why didn't you make sure Gwen meditated or whatever."
"OW!" Ben cringes on Kevin's sharp blow. "What?! She's your girlfriend! Why should I have to?!"
"Just cuz." Was all Kevin said before he walked up to Verdona, while plastering a huge moronic grin upon his lips. "Look... Uh... I just wanted to thank-"
"No need." The older woman said, as she held up her hand to stop the boy. "Gwendoylyn is my grandaughter after all. I would've done anything for her. You should know that by now.... Kevin." Verdona winked at the boy, and in a flash of light disappeared into the night.
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Prolouge coming if you want me to continue!!!
I ownz NADDA... You know the rest! XD
Thanks for viewing!
The Spoon.
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Comments: 51
HungryPaperweight [2010-10-04 18:53:23 +0000 UTC]
Very nice! Verdona is on our side and we find out why Gwen lost control, not to mention everything's okay now
By the way: I don't remember the details of Verdona's episode very well, but did she really have trouble remembering Devi- Err, Kevin's name? Or is that something you just added in for fun. Either way, I liked it!
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to HungryPaperweight [2010-10-04 19:00:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Umm... In "What Little Girls are Made of" Verdona called Kevin 'Curtis' towards the end of the episode. LOL! So, I just continued on with it in this little short story of mine is all.
But thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
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KagamiYoshida [2010-10-04 00:02:08 +0000 UTC]
i loved this!
i loved all the emotion and the drama? haha i forgot the word
this was filled with awesomsace
Prolouge plz
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to KagamiYoshida [2010-10-04 14:40:24 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! Me 2!!!
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to DivineROAR [2010-10-04 14:40:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh,thank you SO much for your review! I absolutely LOVE all your art... Your amazing!
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DivineROAR In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 16:27:04 +0000 UTC]
I did a project like it for a comic company only it was for Reboot.
It was never published properly.
Seeing you do the same thing brought back memories, mostly stressed out ones
but it was still a nice learning experience.
[link]
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to DivineROAR [2010-10-04 19:14:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow... Reboot? Just... Wow... Can I be a bit forward, and ask you why it was so stressful? Was it because of the fact that it wasn't published right? Or the deadlines you have to achieve?? I'm asking because, even though, I'm no where NEAR as good as most or even ALL comic book artists, I find the industry VERY facinating. I'm such a geek actually, LOL, and I do enjoy Marvel Comics and the characters, etc. I may be too old for my love of Ben 10, Generator Rex,and X-men, oh my list can be endless if I continue. XD But I can't help it. I've always been into the cartoon franchise for as long as I can remember, in hopes that one day I myself, maybe a comic book artist... Although, I'm thinking now, it may be too late for me... And in all honesty, from seeing your work, I'm just not at the point of what companies want in an artist, to be good enough. Sorry, for my rambling... My love of this stuff, tends to run away from me most times.
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DivineROAR In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 23:52:49 +0000 UTC]
Deadlines are the worst thing. They want to see you meet them.
And I was working in some cases 12 hours a day to get the pencils
finished and that included doing layouts for approval before doing
the finish. You have to follow the script as well.
This project became too much for me because I had another job
at the time. They finally released me from doing the color but that
was a mistake. If they had given me more time, they would exist in
the proper state.
This is what ended up being posted and I felt bad because they
didn't give the writer credit or even any money.
[link]
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1w1w [2010-10-03 03:59:22 +0000 UTC]
Good Old Verdona is there to help Gwen!*sighs in relief*
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-04 14:39:12 +0000 UTC]
Woooooo! Glad to see you have the relief...LOL!! I couldn't do that to Kevin, and have Verdona steal Gwen away... That's just cruel! XD!!!
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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 18:51:34 +0000 UTC]
I know! after watching that episode, I realized with Bne and Gwen's grandma being an Antodyte,that would mean Ben was part alien all along!
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-04 19:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Very true! Ben has some alien blood line! But will it come to the surface??? Mmmmmmm... I highly doubt it. I would be SHOCKED if Ben's anodyte heritage came into play... I think that would take away from Gwen's character, and unqiue abilities... EH.. My opinion. LOL!
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1w1w In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 19:27:31 +0000 UTC]
Remember in the Ultimate Alien episode "Fame",if you pay every close attention to the scene where Ben turns back into his human form after defeating Bivlan,his eyes shine a little bit like an Antodytes for a little bit if you look close enough.
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to 1w1w [2010-10-04 21:44:43 +0000 UTC]
I do remember seeing that. I'm just wondering if it was because of the ultimatrix, and him actually returning to his human form from being ultiamte... Hmmmmmmmmmmm. Or, it could be in fact something more... Who knows???? LOL!
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AncientWonder [2010-10-02 21:20:48 +0000 UTC]
very nice end i guess verdona was just there to help gwen after all
ya Clarence she is your girlfriend
verdona actually got kev name right now that is a shock
very cute that kev thanked her
verdona may be a pain but she love gwen
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-04 14:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Yes. That was my intentions for her all along. I didn't like it when she tried to take Gwen away the first time. So, I improvised, and made her helpful.
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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 22:04:00 +0000 UTC]
great plan i like it better when she is helpful too i like verdona she is cool but she can get in the way some time so it was nice that you did that and you had me wondering for a bit there what you where going to do
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-05 13:50:59 +0000 UTC]
I thought it was. Ya know, I can actually see her doing this in an episode. Rather than try and 'take' Gwen away, Verdona actually 'helping' the girl instead. I mean, Verdona has a heart there... Her race is just a bit more carefree, than most, so she tends to forget about other's feelings and such.
Sorry I scared ya!! Not my intentions.... Ok... maybe it was... LOL!!!!!!
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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-06 02:10:42 +0000 UTC]
it was
me too if it was for gwen i could see her doing it she love gwen and i think she like ben at lest
why rath
yes she dose your right about her she is like that and her race is carefree so she just a little forgetful of other feeling it be nice if they brought her back for an ep and had her help for once i think most gwevin fan thing she is not all bad
its ok a little worry is np
fyi your new benlie comic is awesome
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-07 01:55:43 +0000 UTC]
Awwwwe! Thanks Kevs on the Benlie comment! I'm thrilled you enjoy it!! Yaaaaaaaaaaayz!!
I think it would be neat if they brought back Verdona. But, in a more positive way, instead of just trying to take Gwen away. That would be nice to see!
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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-08 01:28:14 +0000 UTC]
i loved it cant wait for more
i know soo cool if she came back in a more positive way like she did say she was going to visit so its about time she came to visit dont you think
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crystalwell [2010-10-02 19:19:54 +0000 UTC]
lol cute, I knew Verdona was getting his name wrong on purpose X3
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to crystalwell [2010-10-04 14:37:34 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, now you know! LOL!!! Naw, I just thought it would be cute if she said his name right at the end... LOL! Thank you very much!
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to ben-gwen-kevin [2010-10-02 15:38:59 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! LOLZ! Thanks!
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ben-gwen-kevin In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 15:51:48 +0000 UTC]
XD LOL my brother is dressed up as Watson from Sherlock Holmes XD
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to ben-gwen-kevin [2010-10-02 19:41:10 +0000 UTC]
Say WHAT??? ROFL!!
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to nurul-hannah [2010-10-02 15:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it!
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nurul-hannah In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-03 11:55:42 +0000 UTC]
I don't like it .I love it
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to nurul-hannah [2010-10-04 14:52:12 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOO!!! I'm so glad. !! Makes it more worth while for me! It really does.
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QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-02 04:47:18 +0000 UTC]
Oh wow, Verdona helped! I'm so glad! ^^ LOL Clarence... I love that! OMG, she reminds me of Endora from Bewitched, never getting the name right. XD
Anika smiled to see that Verdona has helped. She couldn't help laughing though. "Clarence..."
"Shut up! Wait...did she just get my name right?" Kevin blinked in astonishment.
"Guess so." Ben chuckled.
Gwen blinked. "I can take care of myself, but it's good to know I have others to look out for me." She gave Kevin a tight hug.
The moronic grin returned to Kevin's face as he picked Gwen up and spun her around. "Don't you EVER scare me like that again!"
"I'm sorry, I didn't mean to... I...I didn't hurt you... Did I?" She touched his chest where the blast had hit.
"Nah, I can handle it." Kevin grinned.
"Yet you can't handle it when I hit you?" Anika put her hands on his hips, a slight smirk playing on her lips.
"I can, I just don't want to." Kevin glared at her.
"Yea, sure, that's why you cheat all the time, right?" The blonde rolled her eyes.
Ben snickered. "Let 'em have their moment, Ani." The Danafayan nodded in response.
Gwen put her hand on Kevin's cheek. "You're sure you're alright?"
"I'm fine, Gwen, really. I'm more worried about you."
"I'm alright...now..."
"I dunno... Prove it." Kevin smirked a little.
Gwen leaned in. "And how pray-tell do you want me to do that?"
Like this..." The raven-haired boy pulled his precious red-head into a deep kiss.
"Well... How does that saying go again? It all ends well in the end?" Anika looked at Ben.
"I think you mean 'All's well that ends well'." Ben chuckled.
"Yea, that." Anika blushed a little at her mistake. "Say...you want to take a cue from them..." She smirked.
Now it was Ben's turned to blush. "Sure..." Soon enough the blonde alien and brunette here had followed suit and here we leave our two couples, kissing sweetly after their misadventure in the warehouse.
You have to have a kiss...or two...at the end! XD Oh Anika has what I like to call "Starfire moments" where she gets a saying wrong or gets confused about human terminology. She's not quite as bad as Starfire, but yea, like I said, she has her moments. XD
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AncientWonder In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-02 21:25:25 +0000 UTC]
ok i really like you add on to this story there should always be a little kissing at the end
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-02 15:38:01 +0000 UTC]
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWE!! Such a cute drabble! XD!!
Yaaaaaaaayz! Verdona I think earned some brownie points from Kevin!XD
Clarence seemed funny enough of a name to call Kevin. XD!!!! I liked it too! Hahaha!
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QueenofKaibasHeart In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-03 02:47:22 +0000 UTC]
Aww thanks, Kevs! I'm glad you like it! ^^ Thanks, Spoon, dear! ^^ Yea, she totally did! XD It is, really! Clarence... I love it! XD
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-04 14:56:28 +0000 UTC]
Hehehhee! Clarence rocks! You better love it!! LOL! KIDDING!!! I'm glad you do. I was having a difficult time at first coming up with funny c's or k names that would sound even remotely close to Kevin's name. Clarence just stuck... LOL!
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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-02 21:26:36 +0000 UTC]
where the kissing at the end you forgot to put kissing at the end of this or is there one more page you should make one more page with kissing
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-04 14:54:55 +0000 UTC]
KISSSSSSINNNNNNNNNNNNNG!!!!! Panel 7 is UP!!! XD
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AncientWonder In reply to SpoonfulofLead [2010-10-04 22:01:09 +0000 UTC]
ayayayy kissing
at the end
i read it perfect
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SpoonfulofLead In reply to AncientWonder [2010-10-04 22:02:10 +0000 UTC]
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! LOL! XD
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QueenofKaibasHeart In reply to QueenofKaibasHeart [2010-10-02 04:49:16 +0000 UTC]
*on her
Stupid typos. lol
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