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Published: 2008-08-18 03:18:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 3357; Favourites: 105; Downloads: 424
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"stick with me kid and you'll go places"Zidane gives Vivi lessons on picking up chicks outside the blackmage village.
Crit plz, I suck at perspective. Zidane's leg looks funny.
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THAT IS AMAZING!! I think it's almost perfect. You're right, zidane's leg is a LITTLE wonky, but that's okay.... practice makes perfect!
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It could be one of two things. Either the perspective of the wall is off from what you wanted, or it looks like Zidane's leg is "falling into" the wall.
Id probably just move the leg out. It looks more or less like a straight on shot.
Great scene pick btw. Zidane is my hero.
FFIX fanarts ftw
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lol thanks, I think that's it.
FFIX ftw c:
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Yeaaah! FFIX art! :'D
Seriously. I never see any new stuff now. I love how Vivi looks! He's hard to draw. Zidane's face seems a little wide to me, but that could just be the somewhat chibi style you used. The only other thing I can pinpoint is that his legs seem to narrow when they get to his boots, and it seems off somehow...
I love it, though! Please please finish!
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Yeah, the only problem I believe I have is with the perspective. I'll fix it up later, I think I got it.
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cool, although it's rough it looks really cool ^^ and perspective is HARD lol ^^
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Zidane and Vivi are who i think of when it comes to "who a final fantasy character is" Though maybe thats the whole "First final fantasy i played" speaking.
They're just awesome :V
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His leg only looks funny cause of the perspective. Not too bad. I like it =3
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Yeah, the perspective is the problem. The top of the wall looks a tad flat while the rest of the characters have a straight forward view.
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You probably might be better off making it so that you can't see the top of the wall. I'm not sure if you were intending to go for a top-down view or not, though.
If you decide to run with my suggestion, though, I'd suggest bringing the top edge of the wall up a bit, as well as Zidane's knee.
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Well I'd actually bring up Zidane's knee if I elimiated the view of the top of the wall. His butt is supposed to be firmly planted on the top while his leg lazily dangles down.
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Right leg is a little funny by the thigh/knee. Try swinging it more towards Vivi.
But it still looks pretty damn sweet~
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Haha guy with his legs spread wide.
Meh, they're all guys there. I'm actually thinking of keeping it where it is, but bring it up a a bit so the knee is pointing more forward to where the thigh will be foreshortened so it doesn't look so uncomfortable on the wall. What'dya think?
Thanks you c:
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