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  Deep, black eyes scan the horizon calmly in search of movement. A figure, somewhat human in structure but built more for the pursuit of fleet-footed animals, crouches behind a patch of tall grass. The figure, who appears to be a woman with canine features, stares hungrily at a man- a poacher. Slowly, she begins to creep upon him, her frame so low to the ground that she cannot be spotted. Her limbs are sprawled out to keep her naked front barely an inch above the ground, and yet she moves as quickly and as agilely as a wild cat. Behind her, a long, slender tail swishes silently. The bone sharp protruding from its end stands out vividly against the grass, but the brown and green skin of her slim body blends in well with the surrounding area. Without so much as a sound, she crawls to hide directly behind the poacher, and she rises off of the ground a bit to look at him. Her black eyes narrow as her tongue darts out to lick the lips of her slightly raised face, revealing her canine teeth for a few brief seconds before sealing them away again. Slowly, her slender- almost rat-like tail- curls around her body so that the six inch bone spike is pointed at the man. She raises further off of the ground so that she can stand up, and her back is hunched due to the odd shape of her body- it is unaccustomed to being held up on nothing but her legs. Her body is slim, but not body. Her face mostly human with a muzzle similar to that of a shih tzu, and small dog-like ears.

  Even though her body is hunched over, she is nearly six feet tall from head to toe- should she force herself to stand full height she would be nearly seven feet high. Her limbs are thin, but show well built muscles. She lifts her hands and twitches her fingers in anticipation, revealing her oddly shaped hands. Her hands are larger than one would expect for a female, and all of her fingers end in the same, bony, spikes as her tail. She has no nail- the tips of her fingers, for about an inch, are nothing but sharpened bone. The middle finger of her right hand is not a finger at all. It is an inch thick, round, sharp, bony spike that grows directly from her wrist. That middle spike is also a good two inches longer than the fingers surrounding it. Her left hand holds no such spike, most likely for the sake of allowing her to grasp objects- because the bony growth on her right hand cannot move, which renders it useless for anything but hunting. Slowly, she takes a step forward to enter the short grass, revealing her oddly shaped legs. She has dog legs from the knee down- paw, pads, and everything. There are long, black, claws growing from each toe. Despite her canine features, she is virtually hairless. She has eyebrows and eyelashes, and short, frail hair on her head. Aside from that, her body is without hair. Her skin is dust brown, and there are a few green patches that vary in shade. So in the end, she can only be mistaken for a human woman from a distance- because up close, she obviously wasn't.

  Slowly, she takes another step towards the poacher, followed by another- her footsteps are deathly silent, revealing just how apt a hunter she is. She turns slightly so that her left hip faces the man, and her tail begins to sway dangerously in preparation for her strike. Suddenly, the poacher lurches as he sneezes, and she falls dead still for a moment as if expecting him to turn around and spot her. She makes no movement until he's returned to his initial position, and her eyes lock on the center of his back. Without any further hesitation, she strikes. Her movement is to fast to see, but come the stop of her attack it become apparent what she's done. Her tail is embedded in his back, the six inch spike on her tail as pierced his flesh and gone directly through his spine. When she removes her tail it comes as no surprise that the man falls to the ground unable to move his legs- she'd just broken his spine and severed his spinal cord, he'd never be able to walk again. Not that it mattered, he wasn't going to live long enough to wholeheartedly suffer from his crippling- she was going to see to that. Once he was down, she casually walks around to stand at his side, and she uses one of her legs to roll the poacher onto his back so that she could look him in the face. She wasn't surprised to see him staring up at her completely dumbstruck, nor was she surprised to find that there was blood dripping out of his mouth. The wound she'd given him was precise- the bone in her tail had punctured one of his major organs, the most likely candidates being his stomach and his liver.

  Not that it mattered which organ she damaged. Food was food, it was all a matter of deciding what part of him she was in the mood for. With that in mind, she crouches down in next to him and gives him a look over. He is a strong, healthy male- had to be considering his line of business. Short beard on his face and long, dark, hair. Growling quietly, she flexes the fingers of her left hand for a moment before reaching out and tearing his shirt off of him. Her claws, if that's what one would call them, scratch his skin and leave him bleeding. As soon as his upper body was bare she began her decision on how to go about killing him. Swift deaths proved to be less effort and quieter, but starting her meal while she was alive would keep him warm longer- and the longer he was warm, the more she'd be able to eat. Needless to say, the man was going to suffer for a while before he died. She began as she tended too with her prey, by taking the spike on her right hand and using it to cut him right down the middle. She digs the giant claw into his chest, and drags it down to his abdomen to cut him open. Then she reaches for his severed flesh with both hands and tears it outward to reveal his innards- naturally she struggles a bit with her right hand, considering that she cannot physically grab his skin. Every movement she makes is precise- none of his organs are damaged when she slices him open. Next she goes for his ribcage- she's been unable to rip it open along with his flesh because it was made of bone. She had to physically climb on top of him to work her fingers under his ribs, and once she's found her grip she uses her inhuman strength to pull his chest apart like a pair of doors.

  Bones snap and tissue tears, but still, her exact movements see to it that no organs would be damaged- save for the ones she'd punctured with her tail. Once she has him completely torn open, she climbs off of him to decide what parts of him look the best. She will naturally eat his heart and liver, but those are a pair of organs she will not eat until she's neared the end of her meal. She flexes her fingers again before reaching for the blood pooling inside his damaged abdominal area, and she lifts a palm-full of it out so that she can drink it. She moves her hand to her face and parts her lips to sip the red liquid that slowly drips out of her hand. Once her hand is empty she decides that she'll state her thirst, so she leans over enough to press her lips into the blood pooling inside the mans body, and she drinks her fill of it before pulling back and looking up at his face. He's already passed out, but she doesn't seem to care. A sleeping victim is a quiet one- and she preferred to eat in silence. With her thirst satisfied she reaches inside of him and pulls out whatever organ she deems best for consumption. Which organ it is doesn't matter- in the end it was just a fresh hunk of food that she fully intended on eating while warm. She quickly downs what she's selected then picks another organ, followed by another, and another. Her meal reaches its end when she rips his still beating heart out of his open chest, and she downs the moving ball of muscle before it has a chance to stop dripping blood. With that, her hunger is satisfied, and the man is dead. She quickly stands back up and abandons the half eaten carcass, and she makes her way back to the surrounding forest to seek out her mate.



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Comments: 55

Springfallendeer In reply to ??? [2014-04-05 03:19:43 +0000 UTC]

Good~ I'm glad you liked it ^^

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BeyondBitch In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-07 00:08:54 +0000 UTC]

It was real good you should make another one like this!X}

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeyondBitch [2014-04-07 00:11:47 +0000 UTC]

I am. The one I'm working on now has her slowly killing someone.

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BeyondBitch In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-09 23:36:36 +0000 UTC]

O_O wow! Can't wait to read it.

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeyondBitch [2014-04-09 23:39:56 +0000 UTC]

Its done~

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BeyondBitch In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-11 03:40:53 +0000 UTC]

Yay I'm going to read it!<3

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeyondBitch [2014-04-11 03:52:18 +0000 UTC]

K~

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JasdeviGirl [2014-04-03 19:54:13 +0000 UTC]

Disturbing yet so awesome I COULDN'T RESIST 2 READ IT!!!!! Wicked job YoungGuardian!!!!!    

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Springfallendeer In reply to JasdeviGirl [2014-04-03 20:03:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks~ I had fun writing this ^^

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JasdeviGirl In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 20:45:00 +0000 UTC]

Hehe ur welcome... r u doin a picture of Grave?!?!

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Springfallendeer In reply to JasdeviGirl [2014-04-03 20:56:37 +0000 UTC]

I want to, but I SUCK at people or anything humanoid. I can do her eyes, but I can't get a human face T~T 
That's more or less why I'm doing so many daMuro arts so suddenly- getting some practice~
I want to draw Grave and Ferra (In all of her forms)

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JasdeviGirl In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 21:52:52 +0000 UTC]

Oooo makes sense! I would do 1 4 u but I dont know the whole DA posting thing works (or collabs 4 that matter...watever the hell they r) and my Paint SAI crashed and I havent been able 2 get it working soo I might hav 2 get a new 1!!! Sorry :c !!!

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Springfallendeer In reply to JasdeviGirl [2014-04-03 22:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Its alright.

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JasdeviGirl In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 22:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Hehe cx

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BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 14:10:14 +0000 UTC]

This
Is
Amazing

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 14:38:38 +0000 UTC]

Thank
You
Kindly
~

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BeautyIsWithinYou In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 14:40:35 +0000 UTC]

I
Was
So
Bored
Until
I
Found
This

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 14:49:23 +0000 UTC]

Glad
To
Help
Relieve
Your
Boredom
~

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BeautyIsWithinYou In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 15:02:38 +0000 UTC]

Yay
For
No
Boredom

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 15:04:22 +0000 UTC]

^^

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BeautyIsWithinYou In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 15:09:06 +0000 UTC]

I actually went to a house, for my Irish History. (I'm Irish. )

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 15:12:25 +0000 UTC]

Cool~
I've got Italian in me somewhere XD

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BeautyIsWithinYou In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 15:17:41 +0000 UTC]

Itaillyy!~
I have a little Canadian in me. XD

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Springfallendeer In reply to BeautyIsWithinYou [2014-04-03 15:39:18 +0000 UTC]

I've got French in me to~

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BeautyIsWithinYou In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 15:49:31 +0000 UTC]

Honhonhon~

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TheCursedDagger [2014-04-02 22:49:47 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing I can clearly see her in my minds eye you truly are a fabulous artist

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Springfallendeer In reply to TheCursedDagger [2014-04-02 23:05:58 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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TheCursedDagger In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 00:16:29 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome but you deserve it

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-02 22:36:13 +0000 UTC]

My dear, you have out done yourself, I am going to be having nightmares tonight~   Yay~ I'm NEVER pissing you off, btw~  

Love her description, enough to give you a general idea, but not too much as to make her a little too unbelievable~ I'm guessing her middle, right 'finger' is more like a talon? Like with Velociraptors? And her tail kinda sounds like a scorpion's tail, but without the poison.  

Also, the camouflage coloring is a very ingenious idea, every hunter needs to keep themselves from their prey until just the right moment~ >BD 

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-02 22:47:13 +0000 UTC]

Yep.
She'll curl up in a ball out in the grass to make herself look like a patch of dirt- and when animals/people get to close- SLASH! She'll bolt up and either slash em with her "Claw", or stab em with her tail.

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-02 22:53:34 +0000 UTC]

LOL Holy crap, I imagined the whole thing, like a snake about to strike!! ...And now I have another reason for nightmares. xD Thanks a lot, Wolf-lady~!!

Jk, but seriously, you put a lot of thought into her and something I've noticed is that you tend to have your creatures, Ferra and now Grave, go after organs. Why is that? Really, I'm honestly dying to know!!

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-02 23:00:22 +0000 UTC]

I chose organs because they happen to be the most nutritious part of the body- and when your a creature that can probably go more than a week between meals, you want what will give you the most nutrients.
Ferra I had eat organs for that purpose, and while I haven't made it known yet, Grave is also her daughter.
So, Rake and Grave have Ferra as their mother, but because they were born after being devoured as humans, they actually share no blood. (Felt the need to point that out so you wouldn't go "Ug! Incest!!!")
So, I deemed it natural that Ferra's offspring would have a taste for organs- but I also haven't pointed out that they are omnivores. They do eat plants and fruit between hunts, because meat can't provide them with everything they need.

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-02 23:09:22 +0000 UTC]

Oooo, that makes a whole lotta sense, actually, and I kinda figured she was Ferra's child, too~ Don't worry about pointing that stuff out, hun, I'm not gonna start wailing on you for silly things.

And it makes sense, too, I mean, if Ferra basically gives the human souls she eats a new body, then the creatures are bound to be different from one another. Also, technically, they're animals, right? In a sense? So something like blood relation might not be that important to them, or it might make them more appealing to each other for the whole "keeping the bloodline pure" and stuff?

LOL Sorry, had a Voldemort moment there~ XD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-02 23:21:15 +0000 UTC]

XD
Nah, you were right- in the end animals just don't give a shit about who they breed with.

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-02 23:24:51 +0000 UTC]

LMAO Love your eloquent use of words, my dear~ XD

I love theorizing with you, though, this is fun and it gives my brain a nice workout~ w @ Especially with college frying my brain cells on a daily basis, it's nice to now my mind is still somewhat intact~ xD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-02 23:52:34 +0000 UTC]

XD
Yeah, that is good. Wouldn't want any of my jokes to fly over your head~ (I had one fly over mine yesterday)

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-02 23:58:57 +0000 UTC]

LMAO Yes, that does tend to happen after a Marketing or Finance exam xD

I love what I'm studying... but my brain does not agree~ XD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 00:13:08 +0000 UTC]

I know the feeling, as for the joke I had fly over my head you'll think its hilarious.
I was sitting in class when a girl suddenly said "You don't look like a Sarah to me"
Naturally I was all "Then what do I look like to you?"
She said "I don't know" then she wouldn't stop focusing on it!
Eventually I just said that all my friends tended to call me "Squirt".
The guy next to me said "Now I wonder why they called you that~"
Like the idiot I am I said "Cause I'm shorter than them" because I was paying to much attention to the lemon I was working on. Then it clicked what he'd just said. I looked up at him and said "You just made a sex joke didn't you?"
He was all "Yep" and I was all "How the hell did I miss that when I've been spending the past month writing porn!?!" XD
It just flew right over my head ^^

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 00:24:57 +0000 UTC]

LMAO Oh gawd... xD

No no, it's ok, it happens~ With me it's the other way around, usually some one will say a regular, innocent joke and I, being the horrible pervert I am, will twist it around and leave people either gaping in stunned horror at me or fist bumping me and calling me a genius~ XD

You... you didn't really tell them you were writing porn, did you? xD Because you gotta have boobs of steel for that!! XD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 00:43:01 +0000 UTC]

XD I sit there writing it IN CLASS! They know XD
When I was working on 7mih Jeff, they took my laptop from me to read it- but they didn't know what it was when they grabbed it.
Their reactions to my story were PRICELESS! Now they make sure not to read over my shoulder as I type~

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 00:49:45 +0000 UTC]

OMFZ LMFAO!!! You really DO have boobs of steel!!! XD I would've died if someone had read over my shoulder while I was writing that EJxBEN lemon~ ^///^

Was it one of your class mates or the professor? o.o  Tell me about their reactions, please~ >BD I'm a sadistic bitch when it comes to other people's embarrassing moments~

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 00:58:21 +0000 UTC]

No, the teacher never read it- but she is aware that I'm writing it~
Anyways, the first girl kept looking at my screen with her mouth wide open  
The other girl couldn't look me in the eye and now she refuses to come anywhere near my computer.
The guy that was there just kept saying "What?! Your writing about a killer!?! A deformed killer!! WTF!?!?!"

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 01:39:50 +0000 UTC]

PFFFFFFT HAHAHAHAHA!! He obviously hasn't read any of the yaoi, huh~?

I'm pretty sure his reaction woulda been better then~ *cackles evilly/maniacally*

Yo, can you keep it down, some of us are tryin' to sleep over here!!

...Sorry~ xD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 01:45:00 +0000 UTC]

XD Ikr?
Ah~
Working on another part to Fearless Sorrow because it should be dark enough to help me vent.

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 01:51:51 +0000 UTC]

Yus~!!! Is it gonna be from Jeff's POV this time? I'm sure the guy's got plenty of twisted things going on in that messed up head of his, so I'm pretty sure you'll have some fun venting with him~ >BD

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 02:01:34 +0000 UTC]

Yep. Jeff's POV~
He's a sneak peak~

I sighed and looked up at the sky to glare at the clouds- stupid fucking fluffs of air. I felt like they were mocking me, making fun of the fact that I hadn't shed anyone's blood in nearly two weeks. The only thing that kept me from growling at the sky was the fact that I knew Ferra was nearby, and I didn't want that stupid bitch showing up thinking that my snarl was a mating call. Honestly, sometimes I wondered whether or not that, whatever the fuck she is, had an off switch. All she seemed to do was kill, eat, sleep, have sex, and pop out mutant babies. I sighed and reached into the pocket of my hoody to grab my knife- I ran the tip of my thumb across the blade. I didn't cut myself though.

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 02:12:49 +0000 UTC]

Pfffft, hahahahaha!! You made Jeff angry at the weather, too, I see~ XD It just seems so ridiculous, yet exactly like something the crazy bastard would do~ Cussing out the clouds, I can't even xD

Mating call~ >BD And how would you know that, Jeffy-boy~?

Poor Ferra, the way he talks about her, he makes her sound like one of those dogs that loves to hump things all the time xD And mutant babies? Really?

That's not very nice, Jeff!! T^T

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 02:41:46 +0000 UTC]

XD
I know, its cheering me up writing this~
If I ever saw someone cussing at the sky I'd think they were crazy~!

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KyotoLovesLambosX3 In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-04-03 02:50:08 +0000 UTC]

....Uh yeah... >.>; Crazy...

O.O I don't cuss at the sky, I swear!!

Pffft, no one said anything about that, dip-shit~ >BD You just gave yourself away~~

Jeff... I swear... on more word and I'm giving your knife to Smiles... y'know how he likes to bury thing~ >B]

 You wouldn't fuckin-

TRY ME, BITCH!! >8D

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Springfallendeer In reply to KyotoLovesLambosX3 [2014-04-03 03:16:50 +0000 UTC]

XD
Don't worry Jeff, if she has Smiles bury your knife, I'll give you a better one and a knife sharpener~

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