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A laughing clown of monochrome-
his laughter fills the air.
Children flock and gather near-
they come to meet him there.
There inside the carnival-
there besides the stands.
They gather round and cheer for him-
knowing nothing of his plans.
They watch delighted as he sings-
accept his offered treats.
Unaware that doom impends-
whilst they eat their deadly sweets.
Deadly not from poison no-
deadly not from that.
Deadly cause of trickery-
his friendliness is but a trap.
He lures them in with sweets and smiles-
puts on a magic show.
Keeps them entertained whilst he-
plans on how to make them "Go".
Come his ideas of how to end them-
he calls them one by one.
He lures them to a hidden place-
with promises of sweets and fun.
Lies, his words all lies in the end-
they follow to their gruesome death.
They watch as monochrome stains red-
whilst they pass with screams upon their breath.
Faces shredded, bowls removed-
they scream and plead for mercy.
Yet all their cries fall upon deaf ears-
he continues with his killing spree.
One by one he cuts them down-
their corpses littered round his home.
They all die in fear whilst they look upon-
the laughing clown of monochrome.
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Comments: 99
Springfallendeer In reply to ??? [2017-10-12 02:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Go for it. Just send me a link or a means of listening in on what you do
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Cosmicmoonshine In reply to Springfallendeer [2017-10-12 20:21:23 +0000 UTC]
Done.Β youtu.be/-U-Upy41lls
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Valerie-Red [2014-08-05 21:10:23 +0000 UTC]
this is absolutely genius! I love it so much! it's cute and it's creepy and it's beautiful! great job! it's a shame you didn't go for the initial story though, it sounds interesting. anyway, you're awesome!
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Springfallendeer In reply to Valerie-Red [2014-08-05 21:52:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~
And the story I intended wasn't going in the right direction- everything about it was forced so it seemed sloppy :/
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Valerie-Red In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-06 17:08:50 +0000 UTC]
really? could you note it to me? or what you wrote so far? it sounds like a really good concept.
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Springfallendeer In reply to Valerie-Red [2014-08-06 21:06:35 +0000 UTC]
Ah, no I can't. In the end I just deleted all the text and changed the title to write the poem on the same document :/
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x-Red-Seduction-x [2014-08-03 00:43:05 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome!!!!!
One of the best poems I've ever read.
It completely explains LJ's dark, deceptive and twisted personality.
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Springfallendeer In reply to x-Red-Seduction-x [2014-08-03 01:39:47 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it so much~
Poetry is probably my strongest writing ability. Did this one in maybe 15 minutes.
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x-Red-Seduction-x In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-08 12:28:40 +0000 UTC]
Wow that's awesome
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Springfallendeer In reply to x-Red-Seduction-x [2014-08-08 21:18:55 +0000 UTC]
Poetry is something natural for me.
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x-Red-Seduction-x In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-09 01:07:01 +0000 UTC]
I see b/c you're one of the best writers I know of on here
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Springfallendeer In reply to x-Red-Seduction-x [2014-08-09 01:14:27 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you~ ^//^
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x-Red-Seduction-x In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-09 01:15:44 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome :3
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hrhowling In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-03 01:04:16 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome ^_^
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Springfallendeer In reply to TheCursedDagger [2014-08-02 07:36:01 +0000 UTC]
Glad chu like it~
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Springfallendeer In reply to dcheng886 [2014-08-02 05:09:28 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad you like it~
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-02 05:32:43 +0000 UTC]
welcome~ ^_^,so how are your stories coming along~ ^_^?
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-02 06:22:27 +0000 UTC]
Stories are coming along at a slower pace than I'd like, but I'm getting em done.
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-02 06:55:48 +0000 UTC]
it's better then having writer's block ^_^
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-02 07:14:26 +0000 UTC]
still have your naughty thoughts about ice-cream and cake~? =3=
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-04 04:07:01 +0000 UTC]
i so can't wait to read it ^///^,are there gonna be more food puns~? =3=
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-04 06:27:39 +0000 UTC]
Of course~ XD
I almost called Masky's butt a chocolate doughnut XD
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-04 06:29:05 +0000 UTC]
oh god~!,i would have dies while reading sweet licks if you had done that! XD
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-04 06:30:06 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, but I thought it would creep people out, so I didn't :/
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-04 08:18:49 +0000 UTC]
it was still good though ^_^
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-04 11:29:54 +0000 UTC]
I am now prepared to never look at cake and ice cream the same ever again XD
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-04 21:09:09 +0000 UTC]
Good~ XD
I will ruin every food item I can! XD
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-05 21:39:04 +0000 UTC]
nuuu!,I'll never eat again! XD
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-05 21:45:38 +0000 UTC]
Yep. You'll starve XD
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Springfallendeer In reply to hintaboco [2014-08-06 01:06:57 +0000 UTC]
I am evil and proud~
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-10 06:49:19 +0000 UTC]
you have something evil planed! XD
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hintaboco In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-08-10 08:45:59 +0000 UTC]
i can only imagine what you have planned XD
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