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Published: 2014-08-01 22:03:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1115; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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A laughing clown of monochrome-
his laughter fills the air.
Children flock and gather near-
they come to meet him there.
There inside the carnival-
there besides the stands.
They gather round and cheer for him-
knowing nothing of his plans.
They watch delighted as he sings-
accept his offered treats.
Unaware that doom impends-
whilst they eat their deadly sweets.
Deadly not from poison no-
deadly not from that.
Deadly cause of trickery-
his friendliness is but a trap.
He lures them in with sweets and smiles-
puts on a magic show.
Keeps them entertained whilst he-
plans on how to make them "Go".
Come his ideas of how to end them-
he calls them one by one.
He lures them to a hidden place-
with promises of sweets and fun.
Lies, his words all lies in the end-
they follow to their gruesome death.
They watch as monochrome stains red-
whilst they pass with screams upon their breath.
Faces shredded, bowls removed-
they scream and plead for mercy.
Yet all their cries fall upon deaf ears-
he continues with his killing spree.
One by one he cuts them down-
their corpses littered round his home.
They all die in fear whilst they look upon-
the laughing clown of monochrome.
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Comments: 99
i love how you rhyme, and your dark poetry reminds be much of my twisted mind and the ones i write. You are really good! You should get some of your poems published!
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I hope to make a living off of my writings in the future~!
Glad you like them so much ^^
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my sis and I aren't good at rhyming and my sis don't write much poems no more, she's really good though. Now she sticks to stories. I still do both but most of them are dark but beautiful, and some are lighter and friendlier.
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You don't need to rhyme though~
Most of my stories- I mean stories with my own characters and whatnot- are dark and make you feel for the character.
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Dude I do the same thing! I try to make my characters relatable to those who we're hurt. I make you feel for the characters and not feel alone. And for those who have great lives compared to others but say otherwise, make them understand it could be worse.
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Exactly! That's how you make the best stories that people love to read!
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Yea, though my sister can't really do that, she's really optimistic and usually there is only a little bit of sad back ground. she is really good at making cute scenes though.
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Everyone has their own style~
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Yeup, and she likes her and so do I.
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Same~ I love my style.
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I love it too! Soo.....demonic
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(evil smirk) I feel that you would like some of my own poetry just that fact most of mine are twisted. XD
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Oh, I probably will then~
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THough not all of my poetry is dark some are very uplifting. My school had this magazine for art and writings and I put in a poem titles "legacy" it was just a nice poem stating I am who I am and no one will change me.
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I do poetry like that too~ And I like to do them from time to time.
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I got the urge to write it after I wrote and finished a story for the magazine that I never got the chance to put it in.
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Yesh, though it was really weird being complimented. My enemy saw it and said it was nice...I was like U suck bro..................I REALLY hate that guy.
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You don't need to like someone to compliment their work though~ ^^
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I don't but I really despise this guy. We have been enemies since first/seconde grade, I'm now in high school. To me it just wasn't natural bc of how long we hated each other. So my first instinct was that he was mocking me since I originally told him not to read it.
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Oh, I see. Ah well, old grudges die hard.
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Yes, I have a problem. I forget nothing (at least most of the time XD) so I can hold a grudge till I die. Not always a good thing XD I'm not a very nice person
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It takes a lot to make me hold a grudge :/
I'm nice but scare people when I get mean.
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I'm have multiple personalities and traits and some that even clash and don't make no sense. I'm nice to those I care about and will defend them no matter what, but if you get on my bad side just once. I'm the biggest bitch in town. Well, that depends on the person.
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Oh wow~
Remind me to bring you to the next war XD
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That thing weirds me out -.-
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*Tries not to laugh*
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Yes, L.J~
And I know he is XD
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oohh my goood this was awesome 8DDD
I didn't even know it was Snuff's birthday xD
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Thanks~
And yeah, his birthday is tomorrow.
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