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Springfallendeer — Snakeman-Jack Prologue [NSFW]
Published: 2014-02-15 06:54:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 1028; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 0
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Description Snakeman-Jack

Once, there was a teenager named Leon- he was nineteen. He was an average height, black haired blue eyed teen, with a slim athletic build and pale skin. All and all, there wasn't anything in particular that stood out about him as far as his body went- but his personality was a different story.

Leon was a very kindhearted person- he never got into fights with anyone, and he was always the first to try and talk people- even random strangers, out of a brawl. Since he was so easy to get along with, he had a lot of friends- and all of his friends new one major thing about him. Leon loved to Role Play. Every night, from 5 pm to midnight, he'd be on his computer, Role Playing with people online. Some of these people were his close friends- others people he called friends despite never meeting them in person.

Well, Leon only ever used one Role Play character when he was online- a snakeman named Jack. The character was simple enough- a man with golden snake eyes, wearing a pair of metal gauntlets, with a tattoo on his left shoulder. The tattoo was that of a snake coiled around a pumpkin. What most people didn't know was that his character was actually named after his pet snake, Jack, an albino Burmese python.

Well, just before Halloween, Leon was told by his parents that he was going take his younger sister Sally out trick-or-treating. So, Leon this as the opportunity to give his Role Play character a real life test run. He went out and bought golden snake-eye contax- he made sure to get them through a doctor so that he wouldn't damage his eyes. He went online and bought a pair of metal gauntlets- real gauntlets, made of copper. He also went online and found a special sight that could be used to create your own temporary tattoos- naturally he had “Jack's” pumpkin tattoo made just for the occasion.

So, come Halloween night, he put on his costume and set out with his sister to go trick-or-treating. They returned hours later to find the lights off in their house, but their front door unlocked. Thinking nothing of it, Leon and his sister walked into the house and called for their parents- they weren't given any reply. Assuming that no one else was home, the pair flicked on the kitchen light and went about their business- Leon went and retrieved his pet snake Jack, and put him around his shoulders. Then he heard a scream.

Rushing in the direction of the scream- the living room, he found his sister being pinned to the ground by a buff looking man. Sadly, that wasn't all he saw. There, on the living-room floor, were his parents. His mother lay dead by the couch, her throat slit. His father, lay on the carpet disemboweled and headless- he screamed in terror. Before he could do anything else, two more men grabbed him by his shoulders and pinned him to the ground. His snake, Jack, lashed out at these men- biting one of them across the face. Leon was forced to watch in terror as the men pried his beloved snake away from him, and ripped in in half with their bare hands. Just like that, his pet was dead- but things were about to get much worse.

The men dragged Leon further into the living-room and pinned his face into the blood of his mothers corpse- then he was forced to watch as the largest of the three men raped his sister. He could only watch and cry as his sister's virginity was forcibly taken- forced to listen as she called out for help. People outside must have heard- but it was Halloween. Everyone mistook the pained cries for some childish Halloween prank. When the man finished with his sister, he slit her throat like the men had done to Leon's mother- then they turned their attention to Leon.

He was dragged to the center of the room- the men forcibly ripped Leon's clothes from his body, but the gauntlets were allowed to stay. For some reason, the men found the sound of Leon's gauntlets tearing away at the carpet beneath his frame erotic. All three of the men raped Leon at the same time. They tore his insides open with their rough behavior- they filled his bleeding hole with their semen to their hearts content. They put his mouth to use and nearly drowned him with their fluids. They beat him and tormented him- the images of his dead family members burned into his mind as they raped him. Then, when they tired of him, the cut his guts out and slit his throat- ending the suffering they had caused him.

Days later, after the bodies of Leon and his family were discovered, the police set out a search and quickly caught the men that had murdered them. All of these men were criminals- criminals released from jail the day before the murders took place. Just like that, the ones responsible for the deaths of four innocent people were put right back in jail- but the story doesn't end there. Shortly after the funerals of Leon and his family took place, the three murderers were found dead in their prison cells. All three of these men died the same way. They were brutally raped to the pint of fatal bleeding- large quantities of semen were found in their stomachs and in their anus's. Their throats had all been slit, and their guts had all been ripped out- ripped out by what as presumed to be human hands. They'd also all suffered from snake bites- their faces and hands were all bitten by what was determined to be a Burmese python. The same kind of snake Leon owned.

On the walls of these three prison cells, written in the blood of the dead criminals, were the words “Jack the Snakeman”- the name of Leon's Role Play character. After that, things continued to happen. All across the country, rapists and criminals were turning up dead. All of these people were found raped, harboring snakebites on their faces and hands, with their throats slit and their insides torn out. Just as with the first three rapists, the words “Jack the Snakeman” were written in blood on the walls surrounding the victims mangled bodies.

At first, everyone believed that the deaths were the result of someone out to make criminals pay for their misdeeds. The killer was deemed a darker version of batman if you will- but then, things took another turn. A turn in the worst direction. More people- normal people without criminal records were being found killed the same way. Only now, there was a difference- pairs of people were turning up dead in the same place. The deaths remained the same for the men- but the women, they were killed a different way. The women were only found raped and with their throats slit- no snakebites, no disemboweling. An investigation was started- the police tried desperately to find one major link between all of the recent killings, and they only found one. All of the people killed were killed in pairs- all of the people killed had all been sexually active couples. In other words, the killer was murdering these people just because they were having sex- because he found them while they were having sex.

Thats when it became apparent that their was a madman on the loose- a complete psychopath out to kill people just for fooling around. This criminal has remained on the loose for years, and has yet to be found- until today...
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Comments: 107

LorenTheDj In reply to ??? [2014-03-11 22:20:45 +0000 UTC]

Loren: he he he he he he he he he he 
CyberCode: Loren is off the hook today 

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Springfallendeer In reply to LorenTheDj [2014-03-11 22:34:15 +0000 UTC]

Snakeman-Jack: *Creeped out to the max, so he turns and runs away*

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LorenTheDj In reply to Springfallendeer [2014-03-12 20:50:41 +0000 UTC]

Loren: HaHaHaHaHa I mean *gag* ahem nothing... XD oh my gosh 

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SolarCannon In reply to ??? [2014-02-15 08:09:17 +0000 UTC]

damn, I got chill just at the middle of the story during the rape part. Totally brutal, and inputted with painstaking detail. Personally horror isn't really my thing, I can only go up to suspense, but I know a good story plot when I see one!

The story seems extremely promising, and while some scences could use a bit more explaination, it doues indeed well up a feeling of revulsion in me, which is what a real horror story should do, so awesome job!

Its not exactly my cup of tea, but its nothing to put away!

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Shawntheimmortal94 In reply to SolarCannon [2014-12-19 07:31:29 +0000 UTC]

This story is shit and treats rape like its nothing in the fucking prologue! How the fuck is this promising!? 

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Springfallendeer In reply to SolarCannon [2014-02-15 16:54:03 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for the feedback!

As for the issue with the detail thing- this is just a brief explanation of how "Snakeman-Jack" came to be. So, I kinda left out the excruciating details on purpose.

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