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spud133 — TDC2: Round 2 page 7
Published: 2012-06-13 11:08:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 569; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 20
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Zeke and Pepsa (C)
Tori and Shayumon (C)
Digimon (C) Bandai
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Spud, this was an awesome round! I really enjoyed it!
Congratulations on making so many pages, even if they're not fully rendered and polished they're still very clear and easy to read/follow. And speaking of easy to follow, I really like how the plot itself is like that and the coloured text makes it very easy to understand which character is saying what.
I like how the data from destroyed digimon doesn't revert to egg form, but rather goes to the tree, that is a very nice plot twist.
It would be nice if next time you would be able to fully render the pages or at least do lineart for all of them, even if I know I'd choose a good story over polished art any day, I'd rather see sketches with a full plot (not having to cut things out) than polished art but with a chopped story.
So overall, great job, can't wait to see more!
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Thank you, I hope to be able to do better in the next round XP
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Ah I really enjoyed this! (And not just because of the horse digimon. >>) It was a simple but fun to read round.
The story itself was fairly slow moving. The early progression was simple and at a good pace, and then coupled with a very long battle to a fairly quick resolution. The battle was really nice to watch, though perhaps a tad slow since you showed every moment in it. Still really nice to read however. your entry feels very story-board like in the way it's presented.
Hmm... There was a bit of character interaction in this, fairly standard feeling. I liked how you represented Shayumon a lot, he stood out a lot what with being a bit mroe sarcastic and a loner. Pepsa and Tori were very much held in their worry of the battle, so their reactions made sense. While Zeke was incapacitated to sort of get the digi-egg working. Hmm.. I'm not sure how I feel about the interaction. It was just enough to be interesting and fit the story. I would've liked to see more of them interacting, but it fit the situation.
Though it struck me a bit odd that Tori was so willing to join up with Zeke and Pepsa. i know she's normally optimistic, but I feel it wasn't shown too well or soemthing. It threw me for a loop the first time I read the entry, but mgith just be me.
I really like how you did Waspmon and the village. The village itself was obviously very busy and couldn't see things, and that made sense. I like how you managed to get some expressions to waspmon depending on how that digimon holds itself and its antennae. It really shows a lot of skill and effort to do something like that, when a digimon lacks the facial features we are so used to.
The battle and actions were very clear. And I liked the varying angles you tried in it as well. again, you find nice ways to plot out and represent your entry, even in the slower moments. The only thing I'd have to say is the very large storyboard feel to the panels makes the entry feel slower than it really is sometimes. It got better though as the entry went on and varied the shapes and sizes of he panels more.
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CLIFFHANGER.
I liked you entry, it was easy to follow and the idea for activating the digimental. The battle was also nice, I liked how you evolved both digimon, it's sad how shayumon was deleted in the end D: but I hope he will return!! Good luck!!
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Ooh, Data being auto-absorbed by the tree o3o
Thats a pretty clever plot point!
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Hmm, I wonder where his data went.... Awesome round Spuddy ^^ I really enjoyed reading it! And I love how you drew their armor evolutions.
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Ooh, perfect Valkyrie for a horse armor! Nice job! I envy your quadruped anatomy.
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Thank you ^^
I'm not that good, Horses are hard to draw.
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Your entry was really cool! 8D I liked the story and the way your sketches looked so polished! I especially liked your evolution sequences!
And such an ominous end~ 83
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Dun dun dun!!!
Very nice entry, I thought the sketches showed even more life than the linearts.
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Oh the tree can absorb deleted data... hmmmm... Anyways, this was a sweet round!...and also I have a BAD hunch on who this is...
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