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Published: 2013-09-13 02:30:49 +0000 UTC; Views: 445; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 3
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This was our assignment in Animation History, and also my first full-fledged(?) animation. XD
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chivemanfan123 [2013-09-13 02:42:42 +0000 UTC]

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This is really amazing!! Imean, I would make it a bit faster, but the flow is really good. Your artwork is amazing, I am truly impressed. It is good that the character looks at the screen and kind of connects your eyes, and the concept of he disappearing is RAD!! (Sorry, I sound like a total dork right now e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="395" title=" (Lick)"/>) If you make any more I will try to view them. Is this for an art class? (MAN, I'm getting off topic here, sorry this is a critique) What program did you use? Also, consider, when moving limbs, to make th skin dirctly underneath and the body slightly move too. Just a suggestion, don't want to soiund like a hater. Well, anyway, nice work!!

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stardazzle In reply to chivemanfan123 [2013-09-13 09:35:23 +0000 UTC]

Aww thank you so much! *7*


Hahaha you have a good point about the limbs, it's my first animation so it's kinda hard for me to grasp anatomy and whatnot when you try to move them. XD


I used Paint Tool SAI and Photoshop.


Thank you again!! >w<

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chivemanfan123 In reply to stardazzle [2013-09-13 22:50:11 +0000 UTC]

It's your first animation?!?! O_O You good, girl!! 

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Colorful-Kaiya [2013-09-13 10:54:11 +0000 UTC]

WOW!! AMAZING ! <3

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WilliamRumley [2013-09-13 07:50:52 +0000 UTC]


How long did this take you?

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stardazzle In reply to WilliamRumley [2013-09-13 09:28:43 +0000 UTC]

It took me about less than a week (with only 4-6 hours of sleep XD)

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WilliamRumley In reply to stardazzle [2013-09-13 10:05:55 +0000 UTC]

Sounds like me when my commission slots are full 
Well done  ^_^

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Isabaeart [2013-09-13 02:32:18 +0000 UTC]

i would make it a bit faster but not too much. The arms are a bit too stiff...like Clock stiff....but other than that...i really like this simple animation! Good job

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stardazzle In reply to Isabaeart [2013-09-13 02:34:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for the critique!


My professor thinks so too, and I honestly didn't get it until I shifted the time sequence, which yeah I realized that it DOES look stiff. XD

But thank you so much for pointing it out!

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Isabaeart In reply to stardazzle [2013-09-13 02:36:13 +0000 UTC]

no problem sorry for not giving a full critique....i  usually suck at those 

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stardazzle In reply to Isabaeart [2013-09-13 02:37:53 +0000 UTC]

Haha it's okay, it still helps though

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