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Published: 2012-10-02 13:12:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 597; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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THIS is my most detailed sketch yetI can't say I;m proud of this; this is my first time to draw a setting, let alone a room, so experts out there would see many mistakes in here, like perspective.
These are my OCs Iriselle and Alveo. Supposedly it was just Iris, but I might as well add her "brother" in the scene too.
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Boah! You have a lot of patience to draw all details *_* And it looks very good
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Dude, this is ur first time drawing a legit setting? Its AMAZING!!
My setting and landscape abilities are sad, so i kno quality cuz i cant do it lol and YOU have quality setting skills my friend! and so much patience to do this! Kudos and great work!
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It's a great deal better than my cruddy drawings. XD
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This is stunning for a first attempt! Yes, I see several flaws but the overall composition is spot-on 
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Aww thank you so much!
Hahaha yes, there are a lot of flaws in here :< I just copied most of the setting from an IKEA catalog XD but it helped...sorta. :I
I guess after 4 months of art hiatus, it makes me want to draw something other than my comfort zone. Thanks for pointing it out!
sorry if I;m not that responsive lately, I'm still juggling studies and drawing D':
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Holy hell, this is so detailed!
I noticed one thing though, and it's nothing to do with perspective. The neck/head of Iris. The neck looks a little too long, and its craning forward too far. To sit like that would hurt like hell. ( I just tried it myself, and yeah, it hurt)
The only part of perspective I can see thats out it the back shelving by the stairs. This one is hard to explain though. If those three sets of shelves were on a flat wall, the last one (the set closest to the stairs) look like they're mounted on a wall thats at an angle to the rest of the wall. You've tried to keep the shelving in line with the with the first two, where really you should draw them at a slight angle going upwards because they're getting farther away. The top shelf of that set is angled up, going down from the right hand side to the left.
Does any of this make any kind of sense?
However, with that being said, it's better then anything I could do. Also, wow, I so jelly of you. 
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Waaaah hi big sis~!!
Hahah thanks for pointing it out! XD Yeah I just realized that...hmmm maybe because I was putting more consideration on the setting than the people in it, or I'm just that really ignorant and suck at anatomy.
To be honest, I can't understand. XD But I'll try to keep in mind with your words and see if I can make it useful. 
Hahah c'mon! I think you're a really awesome and talented person. It's nice talking with you again, big sis!
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I think that you were paying more attention to the setting rather then the people. I know from experience that you don't suck at anatomy.
Perspective is a hard thing to master. I have to do it at uni, but I find it hard to explain what I mean. If you like, I can take your wip and just show you what I mean and what you can do to correct it? I can upload it to photobucket and send you the link, or I could always email it to you?
Its up to you.
Basically, the shelves are drawn lower on the viewers left hand side. Really they should be higher on the left. At the moment they're like this / but they should be \ (No where near that steep, but I hope you understand what I mean)
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