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Starrulet — 2p!HetaOni - Chapter 1 Part 1
Published: 2012-09-01 08:49:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 12697; Favourites: 204; Downloads: 55
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As you can see, I'm sorting making a weird mish-mash form of story-telling. I hope you like this "special" style! It's the one I'll be using for all HetaOni parts (not pages, since this isn't made in the format of a proper comic).Prologue
Chapter 1 | Chapter 2 | Chapter 3 | Chapter 4
Chapter 5 | Chapter 6 | Chapter 7 | Chapter 8
Chapter 9 | Chapter 10 | Chapter 11 | Chapter 12
Chapter 13 | Chapter 14 | Chapter 15 | Chapter 16
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Eeeeh, he's known they were jinxed from the start.
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I remember reading this a while ago...I had no idea what Hetaoni was but I read it...and didn't really understand it so now i'm back to read it again
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''Oh please, after all the trouble we went into, just to find this place? Lets just go in for a little while.''
''Its not like we'll all die."
Oh how wrong you were Mr.Luciano.
(Even if he know what will happen .3.)
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my friend had to read through the part for where the oni chases them to know where the ended up...
I already knew where they ended up .w.
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so i forgot where l left off so i am going to go all over again until i get there^^
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Goddamn, Italy. That's NOT what people are supposed to say when going to abandoned house!
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I was going to respond with my general reaction to this (because others have commented similar)- then I remembered that you don't have a clue what's going on, since you're not familiar with HetaOni's plot. This makes this all very, very entertaining to me.
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...I think I should be scared... very scared...
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.....Germany's face at the end..... LOLS
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its not like we'll die!!
The look on Germany's face!!
(And I thought 2p!Prussia has blonde hair?)
Its already giving me excitement!!
Even though I found it verrryyy late!!
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Thank you.
As 2p!Prussia doesn't have an official design, it's kinda something you can interpret, I guess. I've never seen a blonde 2p!Prussia, so that's why he isn't blonde. I based most of the 2p!cast on pre-existing designs.
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OH~ Well, I happen to pass by a character card (similar actually) of 2p!Prussia, well, anyone can do what they please
The only thing i'm certain is that I Fruking love your story!!!
I look forward to its continuation!!!
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No problem dude!!
I hope I would see the whole version!! (Before my school days, that is)
And people to see it and appreciate it!!
And deary, your story is making my head spin:
1. by excitement and thrill
2. certainly confused
3. a story that was made-up in a few seconds
Sorry, my brain racks out inspiration from others awesome art!!
(Didn't that sound offensive? Dunno. I'm not asking. Your debating with yourself again)
Well, keep up the go- perfect work!!
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Heh, I wouldn't count on me finishing this before your school days start... Or end? I get myself in tangles over the plot. I imagine it'll speed up once I've written everything, but, heh, major hiccups are everywhere right now...
Um... point three? If you're suggesting I made this up in a few seconds... :S Th-that's not entirely true. 
Heh, sorry I didn't quite catch everything you said.
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Oh, you must have found three a bit offensive but im actually talking about myself so don't be bothered about it!!
Don't be bothered about the update also, true, everyone has their reasons for such
The only problem is other people expecting a comeback (update I mean)
Good story it is!!
My school days actually start in June so blech, that would be -ish!!
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Haha, I wasn't offended, don't worry! 
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It's not like we're going to die.
Yes. Because that never happens to anybody after you say it.
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2p Italy Its not like we're going to die
um yeah 2p Italy I think u jinked everyone and if 2p Germay dies I'm blaming u I love 2p Germany hes just so sexy
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"its not like we'll die."
*LATER*
"spoke to soon."
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OH. I GET IT. GOT IT. *WINKS LIKE CRAZY*
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Love 2P!Germany at the end there, he's just like "...we're screwed."
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He seems to be at the perfect mid-point between genre savvy and hopelessly cowardly... I love it!
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I haven't actually thought of it that way... I think I like that description. I need to rewrite 2p!HetaOni.
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But... but it's already so good! And that was my consensus AFTER reading what you've posted so far... XD
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