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StephHalley — Orange's Nuzlocke: Red Version, Ch. 4, Part 1
Published: 2013-11-02 01:06:58 +0000 UTC; Views: 3971; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 5
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Dang it Lancelot, you broke the all-female chain! Ah well. I think you guys will like him; he's quite the gentleman! He also speaks with a British accent.
Orange's Team: (As of the end of this page in-game)
Marina - Squirtle - Lvl 9
Anna - Rattata - Lvl 4
Tina - Pidgey - Lvl 4
Lancelot - Kakuna (male) - Lvl 5
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Comments: 33
"Oh, wait. I don't have those anymore."
Best line.
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tina: OOH! A BUG! CAN I EAT IT?!
Orange: NO
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what a gentleman. Also: yay, sunglasses XD
You've done great with the forest atmosphere ^^
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Wahh that artwork O.O Soo good! Amazing detail in the backgrounds and trees and stuff 
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Pretty sure Weedles don't have hands either. I wonder what completed that phrase then?
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But how can we tell he has an accent? It's a comic, no one can hear you. O3 O
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I guess just pretend? I don't know how to show an English accent if it's already written in English! XD If he had a German accent, I could add a bunch of 'v's in place of 'w's, but I got nothing for English.
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Lancelot, on to the next city of CAMELOT!!!! My Kanto geography is rubbish. And my everywhere else except Kalos.
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I know Johto like the back on my hand. (I am pretty good in Kalos, expect for some of the places)
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love your kakuna here!! you did a great job in expressing emotions on a pokemon most people dont bother with.
i do have a question. since this is a red version run, how did you decide what gender the pokemon were?? was it based on random chance depending on what you named them?? or was there some method??
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Aw, thanks! It's the eyes that do it. So much character can found in the eyes.
I flipped a coin whenever I caught a new Pokemon. Heads for girls, Tails for boys. With the exception, of course, for Pokemon like the Hitmons and Magnemites, who only have one gender or are genderless.
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agreed. the eyes are so expressive!!
that seems like a good system. our doublelocke is firerred/leafgreen so we did not have to worry about that. would have made it interestin though.... i love games of chance
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Lancelot is so cute! I love your comic so much!
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awww nice page
really love the background XD
and the colors are just amazing!
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Viridian Forest is the first nightmare of any Nuzlocke in Kanto.
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Okay, so before you escape get lancelot to level 10 for a beedrill, good idea. Marina level 10, tina and Anna level 10. PROTECT ANNA AND TINA TILL THEY ARE ABLE TO KILL EASILY! And yes, I will comment on every chapter from here on IF I have a suggestion or random common sense =3
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Well, I've already written the whole story out and I already know who lives and dies. But your comments are always welcome, and maybe you'll point out some stuff that I should have done the first time.
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Yeah, kinda. But I'm not spoiling the story. Maybe stuff happens, maybe not. 
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It can be really tricky to get a Kakuna to look cute, but the trick is its eyes. You have to have all the expression in the eyes.
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