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Page 4! It's fightin' time!
For the record, Komamura has seven shattered ribs, a concussion, and a broke jaw. And Jo now has a dislocated shoulder and wrist and four broken ribs! Injury counting yay!!
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aww thanks~ I want to re-do them actually
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Is this even a fair fight? Jo and Komamura are 3 days behind in power
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not really haha, and it just gets worse
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Oh man...this is not going to be pretty
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I do like the idea of a dark Yamamoto, though. Very intriguing.
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It's not done yet :'D It's sketched now though!
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haha yeah there's a bunch of pictures of her in my gallery
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She's very butch... pretty bad-ass though wonder how she and my OC Kaien would get along?
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haha I wouldn't say butch... Just not that feminine. And I dunno haha, she generally gets along with most people
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Yeah but her and Kaien seem to be complete oppisates... Jo seems to be the wildchild what with all the tatoo's and stuff and Kaien is Serious, indifferent and calm... they would probibly clash big-time
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Well Jo's tattoos weren't really a choice haha. She's actually pretty mellow, just competitive. Although she won't bother someone if they're cold to her
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I guess they would get along... but I think others might make fun of him (he looks about 14 and he's short) that'd piss him off real quick XD...
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Ah, yeah Jo has a short friend like that who's sensitive about his height, so she tries not to make jokes about it, although he looks his age.
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Besides... I don't think any of Shinji's Lieutnants are Captain level either...
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But your saying that 115 years pass.... thats a really long time. Training is pretty much all they did in the human world. It's not like they don't come with weaknesses, but I don't want them unrealistically powered down
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Look at the Shinji;s group... I don't think any of the Viziard Captains are near Captain level honestly... Maybe around the level of Renji and Ikkaku but still not Captain level... I don't want them too powerful though it;d make the G-13 pointless then... I say have at least 3 (Jo, Matt and Layla) Captain level and the rest VC level
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me again... sorry if I'm bothering you... so whats up?
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Just lots of studying haha
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Oh...so what do you think of my idea for Kaien?
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That could be interesting
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Yeah and i could have Jo and Yasuo both looking for blood... I think it should be the big-bad Vs Jo, Yasuo and Matsu in Bankai
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Yeah just need to make Yasuo and Matsu's Banakai (And Shikai in MAtsu's case XD) Hows the drawings? I might introduce Shin in chapter 5... but I'm having a hard time writing it...
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Yeah he's not really developed yet.. If you have questions about him let me know
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So how would he be like in a public High school?
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He would work really hard in class and kind of suck up to the teachers... And he would try to make friends but he's really awkward, he never knows what to say. And he makes rude comments sometimes on accident, then immediately tries to take them back
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Heh I doubt him and Matsu would be very good friends... maybe he could try and intervene when Kaien and Yasuo appears and is quickly defeated... how powerful would be be? VC level I guess
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Shin? Well I don't know how your timing your story, but mine goes-
-before Ichigo appears, Shin just joined first squad, Jo was third seat of 7, Layla was fifth seat of 5, Van was 6th seat of 10, Chris was previously 4th seat of 6 but was demoted down to unseated, Matt was 3rd seat of 10, Cory was unseated in 12, and Eliot was 3rd seat of the kido corps.
After Aizen's war Jo is above captain level in certain areas, as well as Layla and Matt. Van is at captain level, Chris is unknown because she hides it, Eliot is as good as Hachi at kido, Cory is vice-captain, and Shin is slightly less than vice-captain.
But if it's 115 years later they're all more powerful than that...
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I still think they should be the same power levels... Ithink Matt, Layla ad Jo and can Captain level while the rest could be around VC level (and I guess Shin could be around 4th seat level maybe...) I guess they were to lazy to train and get stronger... you did say they were all slobs...
Maybe Shin can try and ambush the two on their way to find Natsuki and he get's defeated by Yasuo before Matsu and Natsuki shows up... It'd be funny if Kaien didn't reconize Shin at first
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Now that's not what I meant... they're slobs when it comes to cleaning. Jo Layla and Matt would train extensively, so would Shin. They live to fight and get stronger, especially Jo. Eliot and Cory stay in Soul Society, and Eliot is good enough to take over the kido corps.
Shin isn't really one to pick fights, he wouldn't try
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None of the Viziard Lieutnants were Captain level either so I doubt they would be much stronger then the other group... And Maybe Shin thinks that the SS has found them and want to kill them? He could think his friends were in danger///
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My OCs are powered to fit into my story... but like I said, you're making your story 115 years after canon, and if my OCs were stuck on earth they would get really powerful.. It's really OOC for them to just sit around doing nothing, not to mention that Shinji and his group would be way more powerful than they were before... Plus their vizard status automatically puts most of them at captain level in the first place... But anyway, I can't really say how you want to write your story
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I*f all of them were Captain level (and having Masked doesn't make them automaticly Captain level...) it would break the story... Like I said I think only Jo, Matt and Layla should be Captain level... the others can be Vice-Captain level (kinda like Shinji's group...)
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It's not that they were more powerful than Shinji's group during the canon/ my storyline. But after 115 years... All I'm saying is that it's way out of character for my characters to sit around doing nothing for 115 years. The fact that you want to write them as lazy.. well it's not really staying true to my characters.
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Haven;t wrote the story yet... but I want to at least have the power levels balenced I say they have trained... but even with a mask not every Shinigami will reach the level to achieve Bankai it's really rare
hell if Kaien didn't have Angel blood I doubt he would have ever gotten Bankai... I say Shinji's group trained a lot to but I doubt Lisa, Hiyori or Machino could stand up against a Captain... I want them to be true but I don't they all of them should be Captain level...
I kinda want to limit Bankai's to under 20... and thats with the G-13 Matsu Yasuo and Jo, Matt, Layla...
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See, I think to fit into your story I would have to re-write all of my character's backstories, and I don't have time for that. Because Van and Chris were the first to get bankai out of all of them, Matt was last, and the rest achieved it when they were locked up by mayuri for ten years because there was literally nothing else to do.. I don't really know if this is going to work out, not while I'm busy
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Wel... asI said before I doubt any of the Viziard Liuetants achieved Bankai even with training... and I do want to limit the Bankai to at least 20... Hell Kaien and Matsu are he only ones of my Oc's to be Captain level... Kaien to due training and talent and Matsu by virtue of being the MC.(and I have to make a Oc for Squad 8)
As I said before... Jo, Matt and Layla and Maybe Van are Captain level.Chris is unkown as you say and the rest of them can be VC level..
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I know that you have your characters power-scaled different from mine... but mine aren't meant to fit into the current canon story... All the canon characters got a power boost, since I made really touh enemies and it's more fun that way
Anyway, that still kind of goes against my character's histories.. since Eliot is older, got bankai first and was slated to take over the kido corp before she even met the rest... then Chris got hers, then Van, then Jo and Layla, then Matt. Not that having a bankai determines the power level anyway
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Unless you are Kenpachi it oes... hell Ikkaku and Renji have Bankai an they are nowere near Captain level (at least before thetime skip)
Well add Eliot to the Captain level but not all can be Captain level and even with Banksi it doesn't make you Captain levl
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that's what I was saying... bankai doesnt determine power level
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I guess... even with Bankai it doesn't make you Captain level... So even if the viziards had Bankai that doesn't make them Captain level
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Right... So I guess Layla, Matt, Jo and Eliot can be Captain level while Van can be Liuetenant level w/ Bankai and the rest can be Lt w/out Bankai and below
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I honestly don't like categorizing power levels like that anyway, since there are so many different categories in skills.. that number system works better
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Well there is a reason for the categorizing.. The Captains are just stronger period.And Lieutenants are weaker then Captains but still powerful... and Number System? Thats only really valible with the Espada
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Not the number system. Kubo made charts with all the power levels. And certain captains could be defeated by certain lieutenants, and all the characters are at different power levels, which kind of makes two categories moot. A character could be captain level in kido but academy level in zanjutsu.. You have to consider durability/ physical strength, mobility, kido, spiritual pressure, swordsmanship,hakuda/ offense and intelligence...
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