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Page 4! It's fightin' time!
For the record, Komamura has seven shattered ribs, a concussion, and a broke jaw. And Jo now has a dislocated shoulder and wrist and four broken ribs! Injury counting yay!!
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Yeah... though we'd have to d some editing to make the stoires fit... I see your Team coming into actionn right when Matsu leaves for the SS? And Maybe Nightstorm might switch around some Captains...
Yama-ji is already dead in ToM Kyoraku is the current Commander
Soifon is still a captain and Natsuki is her Lt.
I can't remember who NS wanted to be 3ed Captain but maybe we could have Layla in that role...
Unohana is still Capt 4
Ichigo is now Captain 5
Byakuya is still 6
Kaien is Captain 7 replasing Sajin
No idea for 8 right now...
Not sure for 9
Toshiro is still 10 (but a lot taller maybe around 5'9)
Kenpachi is 11 still
MAyuri is still 12
And Renji is Capt 13..
I'm sure we can work things out... I doubbt the SS would excile them for being Viziards though...
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In mine, unohana, Renji, Ichigo, Rangiku and Hitsugaya are missing. Chad, Yamamoto, Kenpachi, Sasakibe, Iba, Ikkaku and a couple of the canon vizards are dead.
Instead of lietenants, there's co-captains of equal-ish power.. and everyone is assigned a patner and aren't allowed to travel anywhere alone.
Byakuya and Ukitake are capt squad 1
Yourichi and Sui Feng 2
Layla and Shinji 3
Orihime and Isane 4
Rukia and Kira 6 (there's no more 5)
Komamura and Hisagi 7
Shunsui and Nanao 8
Urahara and Mayuri 9
And Hachi and Eliot are kido corps..
So I really messed around with the whole structure haha
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Like I said... we can eac hhave our own seperate universes but we can link it up it is a cross0over and I don;t like Byakuya as 1... He' way overrated and it pisses me off...
hm... Maybe we could keep the G-13 in ToM... Maybe the Sombra can appear and nobody knows what they are and Jo's group cmes in shocking everybody since they thought they were dead,,, though i ToM they would probibly go missing for longer then 3 years maybe before Kaien becomes Captain himself... it needs a lot of work but I think we can make a great story
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Yeah sorry... It sounds like it would be fun to do!
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So ho wcould we make it work? We can keep my idea for the G-13 and use the Sombra's as the main enemy... Maybe Matsu could be classmates with one of your group (If yuo don't mind them living in Shinjuku, Tokyo)
Maybe the dissapered on a mission and somehow soe of them became Vizards? maybe they didn't get the memo about their kind being allowed in? Maybe Kaien and Jo were friends or something... maybe before he found Yasuo? I could see Jo being somewhat shocked of Kaien's posisiom
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Hmm... I think we could leave how they became vizards as is. Jo could have met Kaien or Yasuo in the academy.. She was 3rd seat under Komamura when they were exiled..And their friends in SS could have thought they died (They;re all to old for high school except Shinichi..)
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Kain was 4rd seat. Yasuo never went to the acadamy Kaien found him afterwards maybe after they dissapered? I guess Kaien could have taken her place... He's Sajin's adopted son so they had to have at least known eachother somewhat?but maybe she was a year ahead of Kaien and his friends?
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We could say that... Jo, Layla, Matt, and Van were all in the same year, Eliot was already a seated member of the kido corp, Cory was two years ahead of Matt an Shinichi is five years behind them. Maybe he and Jo coukd meet through Sajin... He could be friends with Matt too.. maybe Matt mentored him? Since he has a powerful ice zanpakuto
I have to figure out a new way Jo 'dies' since it was originally Yamamoto too...
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I think Shinichi and AKien could be classmates and hate eachother guts... Shin is a bit of a classist ass right? Kaien is from the 77th one of the worst districts in the Rukongia I doubt a noble like Shin would be happy to see qa 'filthy peasent' outclass him and I bet he'd be pissed seeing Kaien as a Captain when he hasn't even made Bankai XD... it would be interested maybe he had a tiny crush on the younger guuy (never mind that;d make him a pedo Kaien was techncially 14 at that time) He'd look around 17 after the time skip...)
Yeah I can PM NS tommarrow and see what she thinks... this can work nicly
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Shin is sort of a classist, he's trying to fix that but he's kind of a snob at the academy.. he's really young though. You mean Kaien have a crush on Shin? (not that ages really matter in SS, since Jo and Eliot get together and El is several years older)
Van would be the biggest jerk, especially to anyone that got around Eliot (who falls in love with Jo) because he had a mad crush on her. And he thinks that he's better than everyone.
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No Kaien isn't gay I was thinking about Matt...) But yeah I see Kaien and Shin butting heads and Kaien is young as well I say he and Shin could be the same age Kaien is just a prodagy...
Yasuo's pretty chill he'd probibly get along with Chris (the blonde her name is Chris right?) theu both seem mellow... maybe he could stop Shin from trying to pick a fight with Kaien (I guess he could have held a grudge against Kaien)
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Oh yeah Matt... he has a huge crush on Toshiro before he meets Cory. Shin has the potential to be a captain, he's just sort of lazy.
Chris is two years older than Jo and the others, and she would have just been demoted from 10th seat, fifth squad and would be just getting over a really bad depression.
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Yeah I guess he was a bit jealous thinkig he would be the big man on campus then he meets the peasont... Who happens to outshine him I say Shin could be kinda petty at a young age... Maybe Matt met Kaien when he stopped them from fighting mayb he could strike a frienship with the younger boy? maybe that's how Jo and him met?
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Matt and Jo met at the academy and stayed friends when they graduated.. Layla and Jo both joined squad 7, matt joined 10 since Toshiro kind of took him under his wing.. Van joined squad 4 first for a couple years then went to squad six to follow Chris (I think I accidentally said 5 for her)
Jo could have been a training instructor for zanjutsu at the academy.. she did that for a couple years before getting 3rd seat
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I guess so... Maybe she could have couched Kaien in training his lacking Zanjutsu.. kinda like how Hisagi was for Momo, Renju and Kira...
I guess they could become friends during that time...
Maybe Kaien could've opend up and told her how he came under Sajin's care? I think Reni would have a tiny crush on Van because they are both (in Van's case was) in 4th while Yuri ignored him...
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Van will most likely try to sleep with her... He;s kind of a playboy haha
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By him I meant Kaien... I think she could see him talking to Sajin...
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Well Nightstorms character is half demon so.... basicly Angel's and demons are a higher existance (even higher then Final Form Aizen) maybe you could read some of the bio's of her character it would explain it some... Yue's dad was tossed out of heaven because of another Angel's jelously... so he fell to hell (maybe the demons live in a part of hell not visited by the Nakama) Kain's angelic granfather fell in love with a human woman in the SS and when she got pregnant his grandfather wanted to fall but the same angel who tossed Yue's dad threatened to kill the woman and Kaien;s mother if he did...
(Me and NightStorm are working on a story called Angel's sleep the said Angel grow jealous of Kaien's power and puts a sleeping curse on him and Sajin and Yue have to fight him to release Kaien... he also stole Kori-Kitsune the spirit and he's slowly dieng because he's seperated from Kaien)
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Oh okay, interesting story.. I had read about Yue when I did that request
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Basicly he can take their enimies from afar while Jo takes out the ones who survived Kain's ranged assalt they'd make a good team. Kaien can be the planner and the lure. Basicly he can distract them with his speed and kido whule Jo takes them out
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That would be a good combination!
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Yeah... Kaien's a hybrid as well He's a Angel/Human hybrid... his and Kentori's mom was a Nephilum (Half-Angel) and his dad was a regular soul.. The angel blood in his viens doubles his attributes... So he might be relitivly strong if he was normal but with the boost of Angel blood is why he's so strong (he doesn't know about that though)
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oh I see. I've never seen anyone use a different, non-bleach species like that before
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Well he IS based on a Kitsune and they are famous in Japanese legends for creating illusions plus it fits his control of Air.. And of course it;s powerful he's Captain level but it has it's flaws... he has no defensive abilites he has to dodge and misdirect his enemy confusing them... and he's a total glass cannon in Bankai he'sd attacks are devistating but's he's frail (Kinda like the Ice type in Pokemon XD)
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I see haha. Well Trickster is... an trickster spirit 
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Kaien can't use Sakkaku o kiri outside Bankai and I guess Kaien would balence her out he has plenty of special ranged attacks and he's good enough in close range with his enhanced strength but he prevers to evaide and counterstrike instead of blocking. Plus he's a kido master (though not so good in healing kido) I see his stats as
Reitsu: Well above averge can freeze things if he wants
Kido: Master level cabable of high 70's without chant
Hakuda: Averge prevers to aviod direct contact
Durability: Very Low can't take a hit
Speed: Advanced. Very fast and possibly faster then Yoruichi Bankai
Zanjutsu: Above Averege
Intellegence: Genius level
I guess he's balenced... necause of his fraility he's a glass cannon plus he has low endurance so he has to end it quickly
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True haha, especially if he can't take hits.
I think Jo's stats are--
Reiatsu: Her own is halved and somewhat weak, but her borrowed reiatsu is pretty high.
Kido: Can barely do low level spells
Hakuda: Expert, especially since she likes to see how long she can go before drawing her sword
durability: High in battle, but feels it immediately after the adrenaline dies down
Speed: Decent in movement, high in how she moves her body (like standing still and moving the rest XD)
Zanjutsu: Master, it's her favored skill
Intelligence: Average
haha I always like to make sure my characters are balanced so people don't complain
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Zanpakuto: Kori Kitsune (氷狐 Ice Fox) A Broadsword in the unreleased state. Splits into twin Broadswords in Shikai
Shikai Command: Blow away the Frozen Sky!
Shikai Ability: Control over Ice and Wind has access to five abilities called ‘Waves’
Wave 1: Tōketsu furasshu (凍結フラッシュ Freeze Flash) - Kaien’s blades create a blinding light everything within 30 yards is frozen solid
Wave 2: Fantajī no kiri (ファンタジーの霧 Fog of Fantasy) - Creates a thick mist that covers Kaien’s movement
Wave 3: Shimo Tsume (霜爪 Frost Claw) - Kaien swings one of his blades and creates a massive claw that slices the opponent
Wave 4: Rīsaru kyōfū (致死強風 Lethal Gale) - Kaien slices his other blade to creating a massive gale that slices through the opponent
Wave 5: Sōdai reitō keimusho (壮大冷凍刑務所 Grand Frozen Prison) - Kaien stabs his blades to the ground creating a seal at his opponents feet and is immediately frozen in a massive pillar of ice if Kaien uses the spell Shatter the person inside is killed instantly.
Bankai: Reitō kitsune kiba (冷凍狐牙Frozen Fox Fang) - A white mist envelops Kaien and he transforms into a fox/human hybrid with total control over Ice and Wind. He also controls two lances and control up to 9. He has several powers unique to Bankai
Enhanced Strength and speed: Kaien’s speed and Strength is magnified by 5
Freezing Touch: Anything he touches turns to ice
Weather Control- Kaien now has complete control over the atmosphere and can manipulate the weather at will
Akuma shippū (悪魔疾風 Demon Gale) - Kaien slices one of his lances and creates a monstrous gale that slices through everything in sight
Tsurara kōu (つらら降雨 Icicle Rain)- Kaien swings one of his lances creating hundreds of icicles and launches them at the foe
Harikēn yari aki (ハリケーン槍秋 Hurricane Spear Fall) - Can only be used when Kaien has nine lances. It’s his most devastating move. Sends all nine lances into the sky and thousands of lances rain down on the foe
Sakkaku o kiri (錯覚を霧 Illusion Fog) - Kaien’s ultimate ability! The Fog generated from Kaien’s Bankai acts as a hallucinogen allowing Kaien to manipulate his foe’s senses. He is able to control Sight, smell and hearing but his illusions disappear when touched.
I included his Shikai what do you think?
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Interesting! the shikai is very powerful. It;s funny that he has a sense-altering ability, Jo has something similar to that haha
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Nothing.. I really have nothing to do but talk to people XD... I would think Kaien and Jo would make a good team... Kaien covers her Weakness in Kido while she makes up for his weakness in direct combat... Thoug both of them would probibly e glass-cannons in bankai... I can send you his Bankai...
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I think Jo would be a glass cannon except for the fact that she almost takes damage as well as Komamura haha. (at least while she's fighting)
Let's see it, then!
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not a whole lot, studying. You?
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So what did you think of my idea's about the Zan Spirits being with the characters/
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Oh yes sorry, I can try that. Might take longer though
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Yeah I think it would look cool
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um.. haha I don't know if I'll be able to go into that much detail
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That's okay... You know I think most of My OC's could get along with yours... Yasuo is gay himself (though Straight Gay he's into sports fighting and the like) I see him as being a put cheeky compared to Kain's more serious and cold nature (so naturally they're best friends)
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yeah? haha some of mine are easy to get along with... not Van cause he's a jerkface, and Chris is... interesting XD
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Which ones Chris? I don't know your OC;s well... Yeah Yasuo is the easiest to get along with he's ussually prety chearful but he suffered through a lot of abuse beforre Kaien found him... though h edoesn't deal with much gay bvashing (Maybe being a giant wolfman as something to do with it or maybe because they don;t want to piss KAien off XD)
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She's the other blonde girl. Yeah haha if Jo encountered gay bashing she would destroy them XD
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I could see Kaien and Van getting in a fight... expesually if he tried to flirt with Yuri XD... I was thinking... I think Kaien's shikai blades can be a hybrid of a broadsword and schimitar...
I think Chris and Yasuo would get along great... and I guess he could relate to Matt on chrushing on guys with white hair and ice Zanpakuto's (Kaien)
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yeah Van can get really annoying XD
And Matt is also kind of difficult to get along with, cause he's kind of snarky and sarcastic haha. But they could get along if Yasuo can handle Matt being kind of an ass
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HE's best friends with Kaien XD he can probibly handle anything... And I see Yuri and Cory getting along. they both are total geeks when it comes to plants (though Kaien isn't good with them he accedenly freezes them)
Does any one of your OC's have a lightning Zanpakuto?
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no lightening, Jo's mentor had one but I've never drawn her... The only elemental types I have are fire/sun, ice, metal, and plant
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Kaien, Yuri and Yasuo are the only ones to have elemental Zan's as well (Ice, Plant, Lightning) Kentori's is Kido/Melee and Reni's is a shield type... it allows her to temperaly paralyze anybody who looks into it if they have lower reitsu.... comes in handy since she's a healer (9th seat)
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