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Published: 2004-04-16 02:59:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 38; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I've been in a rather foul mood most the day, so I figured I'd write one of my infamous humor poems to snap me out of it.... uuummm... I don't think it worked. The humor is more of a dark humor or... SOMETHING. You judge.
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Comments: 8

1n50mn14c [2004-04-18 11:09:10 +0000 UTC]

very nice work, nice flow, and rhyme which is lighthearted without descending into the banal, great work fitting all those games in there...a clever idea which works well.

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sunrunner68 In reply to 1n50mn14c [2004-04-18 14:04:20 +0000 UTC]

Thanks. It came out a lot darker than I'd intended, but what is one to do when the child overtakes the adult? LOL

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Vhojre [2004-04-16 20:46:36 +0000 UTC]

there is a bomb that is you. this is good, nice work. where are the game names though? i dont get it (joke) D:

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sunrunner68 In reply to Vhojre [2004-04-16 23:29:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.

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Vhojre In reply to sunrunner68 [2004-04-16 23:33:44 +0000 UTC]

uh....yay

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hardlyou [2004-04-16 08:38:58 +0000 UTC]

I love it.... I dont care if it didnt snap you out of your dark mood cause it snapped me out of mine

Best of luck to you dear.

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sunrunner68 In reply to hardlyou [2004-04-16 10:42:05 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad it brightened your day.... seems you've needed it lately.

I'm glad you liked it.... It just didn't come out the way I'd hoped.

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hardlyou In reply to sunrunner68 [2004-04-17 01:00:12 +0000 UTC]

eh my days are no darker than night but no brighter than day its a very mediocre time in my life.

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