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Swiftalunar — Pokemon Explorers of Light (Page 19)
Published: 2012-11-18 09:23:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 1539; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 0
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Sorry for the delay, I finally finished it. Sorry for the lack of detail in color and shading too, I got a bit lazy around the end.
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8'D Glad your eager for more. c:
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Okay, I get how it is: An Eevee jumping at a Bayleef. But there is lack of action in the last panel; the Eevee's expression is somewhat mild. When someone is frowning in concentration, their eyes narrow. It looks like while the tree has shadow, none of the Pokemon do, which makes it look like they are some kind of supernatural being. The bottom legs of the last panel Eevee look like they are together, set on the ground and the left leg kind of twisted to make the paws come together, as opposed the the front legs, which are spread apart.
Good job. Good luck on the next pages. Hope this helped.
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Yeah, the only reason I added a shadow to the tree is it looked weird without one, making it look like it was falling somewhere else. I didn't really add shadows to the Eevee or Bayleef since it was getting really late and I got a bit lazy in the end and just wanted to head off to bed. I can understand that I did make it look quite unnatural and hopefully it will look better in the next page. Oh and for the legs, I tried to spread them apart and it looked quite odd in its own way so I ended up crossing them over.
Thank you for the wonderful critique though, I will try not to mess up with that again.
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