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Published: 2010-04-11 04:22:43 +0000 UTC; Views: 437; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 5
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--"Okay, what I wanted to show you is just over here...."
Æoru led the pale creature out of the shadows and into the dying light of the sunset. "There! Isn't that amazing?.." He turned to his companion who had a sad smile worked onto the white face. The realization hit the dragon suddenly and his heart dropped. "Oh my God, I'm so sorry! I-I didn't even think about it! I'm such an idiot-"
"It's okay, Æoru." Ophion smiled to him and looked out over the pastel sky. "It is beautiful..." The dragon was taken aback.
"But... but you can't see!" He stammered. Laughing softly Ophion spread his arms wide.
"No... but I can feel it....."
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Two new characters, Æoru on the left and Ophion on the right. I'll eventually put something up of these two that isn't fooked to hell with flaws ><
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ohohohoh awesome pic, i wouldn't expect any less from a friend of my cousin.
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oo; And who is your cousin?
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I bet that Ophion didn't make Aeru feel any better with that last melodramatic comment he said.
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Hey Gaby remember when these two characters acted like this? ^
Hur hur hur.
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Love Ophion, he seems to be an interesting character concept. I await further explorations of him
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Hehe, yeah Ophy had the most thought put into him I think.
:] me too. Since this was all pretty no doubt it's time for a more monsterous pic of him.
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Aww. Very touching story. They don't look or sound like the monsters you described XD
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thankie. xD I plan on showing more monsterous aspects of them later, especially Ophion. atm I just wanted them to be cute togathar. o3o
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Also, your need for a writer rings hollow! I found this dialogue to be very effective in the telling of a very good story, albeit brief.
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>< But as far as telling a good story, I can't do that. erk. Connecting events, I suck at it.
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"You got any sun lotion? I don't wanna get melanoma."
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*slaps hands away from the comment button* Quit that. It isn't melanoma, it's a very deep tan.
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