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synnibear03 β She's jumping kinda running idk just help
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It looks like a short hop. With any and all animations, try to find a real world equivalent to base it one.
Here's a horse galloping, including some position markers in the first couple of seconds. Its a good reference.
www.youtube.com/watch?v=rlSJd2β¦
If you're looking for a jumping pose from a full sprint, you'll wanna blend this into that.
i.pinimg.com/originals/71/54/fβ¦
Hope this helps.
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Idk if this is just me but the back legs don't look like they hit the ground?
Maybe fixing that could help it a little bit and also moving
the legs so that they look look they're running instead of just staying
in the same position??? Idkkk lol
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I would say let her front legs reach back more between the back legs. If you look at horse racing you can copy how much the legs move. I would also say to extend the back legs a bit when pushing off to add more power behind her jumps, it looks like there isn't enough force to push her that far. If you don't want to move her back legs at all, make the animation in general faster
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I feel like its going a bit slow...idk speed it up a bit?
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Maybe in the animation the jumping part (This was if she was walking) make the time in the air shorter...
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1. have both hind legs visible like the front legs
2.if it's gonna be a Pegasus have her wings flap as she moves
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I think it looks very nice, though if I were you I'd edit the hind legs a bit more so when they hit the ground they leap off and maybe make the front legs com back and the hind legs forward a bit and have them cross over each other, like have the front legs go in-between the hind legs.
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The hind leg needs to move more- Like when it touches the ground it needs to leap off-
There isnt really any jump in this which makes it really stiff- The head needs to move with the body as well-
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I think it should have more frames, and the legs should be a bit more exaggerated. The front legs should go inbetween the back when at the highest point of the run, and try to exaggerate the head movement 
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you can observe horses running in slow motion if you want to practice running
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It looks nice although I think you could make it look more like a run cycle if you keep the feet on the floor longer. Right now they just touch and hop back up. Make sure to have em travel
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the back legs need to go a little lower
they look like if they were barely touching the ground
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Artist-chan
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Idk much about animation but i'd add more frames in betweenΒ
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The back leg seems a bit shorter than the front; even when it hits the ground, it doesnβt look like itβs hitting the same ground as the front. I do this all the time, so I know it when I see it at this point
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Maybe more bending in the knees. I don't know ^-^;
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Back leg needs to go just a LITTLE lower... I think, Iβm just eyeballing it.Β
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The body needs to be like in a wave motion? Like, 'legs' down, hooves up, then the opposite.
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A little more kick with the hind legs, more curve with the front ones, and more arch in the back should make for a smoother animation. Also, for further advice, I would recommend drawing a line representing the spine so you can make a smooth connection between the back and the front
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I think it's ok, but if you need more reference just watch something like this:Β www.youtube.com/watch?v=BEw-2Wβ¦
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try more of a diving motion than a sliding one
thats my best advice
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I feel like the head and neck are a little too stiff, and the body could bend slightly more. The legs look alright though!
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I would suggestΒ
1. When the pony stretches outward, I would suggest steatching the front Β and back legs a little more and many moving the shoulders back a wee bit.Β
2. Try offsetting each pair of legs a little bit, so that they donβt do the same movement EXACTLY at the same time. Fore example, have the right leg move a bit befor the left. Try looking up some references from not only actually horses but ponies from the show too.Β
I hope that helped ^^ other than that, the aniemation looks great!Β
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although I don't animate myself, I can help out with the anatomy a little
the legs seem to break in the front and don't fully reach the ground in the back.
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Her front legs should kinda bend while in midair before hitting the ground
Also when horses run all four of their legs bend and move differently, I suggest looking up 'horse run cycles'
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its very well done synthia, just try to extend the back leg a little more on the stretched frame, so it doesnt look like its stuck in the air. also make sure one one of the legs on both pairs move before the other if you're wanting to make it look more like she's running.
i mean i can barely draw atm because im stuck on styles and none of my friends wanna help but hhhh just take my critique pls ;;
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I think you need to draw eachΒ individual leg if you want the running effect to show up more, i'd say use a reference of an animal running to see how they move their legs.
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Ok, here's the best critique i can give:
1. References
I know it's annoying and over-used, but I think it's very important to use references in art
I don't care about the anatomy, that's fine, but try to look up videos or other animations of a horse/pony running
2. Frames
Try adding or deleting some surtain frames (I really recommend smear frames, but be careful to then put it at a reasonable frame rate, any "extra" frame can mess it up. Same goes to regular animation tbh)
Scribble Kibble has wonderful videos about smear frames etc. I recommend checking her out for some advice!
www.youtube.com/watch?v=vMvJiKβ¦
www.youtube.com/watch?v=snG8TO⦠(I know you probably know this one, but there's an important frame advice)
this is all i can actually critique here, the piece/animation is still WIP so i won't be really nit picky here.
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i dunno??
it looks fine to me but that's probably cuz my anatomy sucks balls
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If she's running, it should be much faster than this. The hind leg is also smaller than the front and isn't even touching the ground. my recommendation is to look at videos or gifs of real life horses/ponies running to get a better understanding.
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maybe make the character jump up just a littleΒ
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The body should be moving more. Like the legs are moving but the body's really stiff, like the front part should go up a bit more than the hindquarters while jumping etc.
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Get rid of the middle frame where its mid-air maybe? Its in the air just a TINY bit too long, and if you get rid of the middle one (or a middle frame closer to the "about to jump" pose) itll still look smooth.
Jumping animations are hard aCK--
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It needs moreΒ d y n a m i c sΒ but other than that ur doin greatΒ Β
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I think a bit more stretch is needed
otherwise looking good :3
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The back legs are more flexible, they can reach and bend further
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The back legs are shorter than the front legs. Make a still image and scale them before animating it. Iβm still learning how to animate so my opinion might not be entirely helpful so weβre learning together.
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the back leg doesnt touch the ground when teh run cycle goes back a little
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Itβs actually fine as it is.Β
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but it isn't, it's pretty good but the back leg isnt touching the ground, and the front legs are a bit too stuck together/stiff looking
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If youβre running/leaping in a certain way, youβre legs would be together in a way to make sure you donβt flail around while in the air.
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yes but not fully together, these look like they're pushed together an uncomfortably close amount
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