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CakecCartoons66 [2019-01-02 19:39:39 +0000 UTC]
well if she's running her legs would move a little differently
assuming she's a horse I don't think I horse can run and jump at the same time (correct me if I'm wrong)
I think the back legs looks quite fine and dandy
where as the front legs are a little wonky
a horse's front legs have a joint near their stomach that always bends back (like most mammals)
but also have another joint that acts like a knee
instead of it moving back like human knees it bends forwards when they run!
and if it is a horse the legs move a little slower but still let them run fast
sorry if I just did this whole thing and she's not a horse but for whatever animal it is I can critique it
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arikaro [2019-01-02 19:35:43 +0000 UTC]
i would say wel to me it looks like she's running but the back legs neede to touch the ground so put more inpakt on the ground at one point the fornt legs the second leg is looks a bit to short and thats it i think sorry i'm Don't know a lot sorry i could help you more
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snake-toes [2019-01-02 19:32:56 +0000 UTC]
kinda looks like leaping right now,, imo it looks pretty good, but i'd say have one of the front legs be a bit behind the other intead of them moving forward as one (same with the back legs) to make it a bit more fluid and natural lookin
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nebtunes [2019-01-02 19:31:10 +0000 UTC]
the back legs aren’t really touching the ground enough so like there shouldn’t be any propulsion .-.
the legs need to have some kinda buildup
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xX-StormyDescent-Xx [2019-01-02 19:30:10 +0000 UTC]
If you wanna make it look like she's running, make it, a little faster, but other than that, this is a great sketch!! The animation is smooth and fluent, nothing seems to be too choppy, I love it! ^W^
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FidNipThefrogmuffin [2019-01-02 19:29:16 +0000 UTC]
the jump needs to be a bit faster and the running needs to be a bit slower
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