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Published: 2018-03-17 18:14:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 934; Favourites: 23; Downloads: 0
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Hey please don't use this for anything
(Like someone actually would XDD)
Comments and feedback are highly appreciated so please make an effort to give on instead of faving and leaving
Legit I'm honestly so happy with this like I kid you not it took forever and now making this I think it's my largest piece ever! Like I think by the time this was done I had a grand total of either 77 layers, and ever time I opened the file it took forever to load up. Haha I still love it though there's probably a butt ton of flaws as usual but hey well get to those. As for some other stuff I kinda want to use this as stuff, like setting wise for Jordan's apartment. I've done some 3D modelling on her bedroom so I might post those if there's enough interest.
As far as the rest goes it was really fun drawing Jordan again I honestly love her so much she makes me happy. X3. Like to the max, eh can't wait to get my fursuit of her. But ya I think this might be the first proper front view of Jordan that I've drawn so now her snout marking is more visible. As for the rest the perspective here was quite interesting to work with as well as the pose, they where difficult for sure but very fun to work with so I hope you guys like it, hehe also I decided to bring back Jordan's green shirt, I think it really suits her. ^^
And now this part.
- body seems a bit to long considering the position Jordan's in
- Maybe some better defined shadows with the couch
- Hands definitely need work again.
- Few objects on the shelf could be fixed perspective wise
- Possibly reduce eye size
Total flaws found equal 5 and that's mainly it. So comments feedback and recommendations are highly appreciated and see you guys all at 8:35 Pm MST
(Actually maybe not, I work today and I'm closing so 11:00 maybe)
Art and character belong to me
I might start making nsfw content soon, idk it's something. I've wanted to do for quite some time and it feels what I'm doing now is a bit limiting idk though just a possible heads up but I think it'll be really fun. ^^
Completely random thought but I bet it would be hilarious to see Keira try and play the piano. XD Idk I'm tired.
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Hi there! Here from
First of all, I like the blending which you've done with the colors. Also the design for the anthro is very interesting. It's like a mix between a shark and a dog of sorts x3
The absence of any lines gives it more of a 'realistic' and 3D effect but everything looks very unnatural and the shading is 'off'. I would suggest using references of furniture and referring to the shading in the picture. Also the shark anthro should have more shading on its left side if you want the light source to be coming from the window.
I like how the character is is placed in the center of the picture.
Though the perspective is off on a few places. Perspective is very hard and even I haven't mastered it, but you could try a few things to help you.
What I do when doing digital art and these 'room perspectives' is that I do it first on a piece of paper using rulers and straight edges. Then I take a picture of it or scan it and upload it into the program. The reason why I do it on paper first is because I could use a ruler to make thin sketches and also put where the points are. If you could do that on your program then I guess it could work.
This drawing is a one point perspective meaning that there's one point and the lines always follow that point.
www.google.co.in/search?biw=12…
The books on the shelves, the couch, the tiles, even the road outside the window should all follow this point.
www.iss.k12.nc.us/cms/lib4/NC0…
A lot of the lines in your drawing is out of place or not following this one point perspective.
An example is that the books on the shelves are sloping upwards in the back. It shouldn't be like that. They should instead share the same height and be parallel to the shelf and all straight.
Overall it's a good job! Keep up the good work and don't let my criticism let you down xP
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Hey thank you very much a, hehe I'm glad you like some of the elements of this thing at the very least. X3 As far as the rest goes ya, hehenha perpsective has been brought up quite a bit and looking at it more the street veiw is completely out of wack. XXD Hehe guess my ruler skills kinda suck. XD but ya thank you for the links and the critique thing. ^^
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This looks really good! I love the perspective and also the view from the window 
The bookshelf looks really nice as well, I love all the different books!
Plus I think the eyesize is fine imo
Great job!!
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Awe yay thank ya very much, I'm quite glad you like those despite the errors. It me as a lot. ^^
Im glad you think so and thank you very much!
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*faves and leaves* lol no
Hi, I'm from !
Your drawing actually looks really great! It reminds me of something, but I can't exactly place it. I really love how you're paying attention to depth and light source, and actually drawing in the outside world instead of just settling for a vagueish white glow coming from the window. (It both provides a setting to the piece and leaves more to critique, haha)
Well, I'm going to list everything I noticed about this, from foreground to background:
1. Your character looks really cool! I like the pink-and-purple thematic thing she's going on. However, her honestly huge shoulders confuses her gender a bit. She looks more than a bit like a man, and with her pink hair that ends up looking slightly disturbing. Also, unless her t-shirt is custom made, her breasts wouldn't be able to fit inside it the way you've drawn without either being shrunk or ripping the shirt. You could consider increasing the size of the shirt, if you think it's worth the effort. Also, the shadow between her melons wouldn't be a vertical line, since the shirt is clearly being pulled taut between them. In a real-life situation, either the shirt would be smooth in that area, or there would be horizontal folds instead of vertical ones connecting the two breasts via tangent lines. Try drawing horizontal shadows there, or just keep it well-lit and just continue an unbroken shadow underneath her buns.
2. The screen on her tablet's a bit small. You could widen it, or you could just simply make it an old tablet.
3. The wooden plank on the right side of the sofa (your right, her left) looks slightly skewed. Judging from the plank on the other side of the couch, it looks like it's supposed to match perfectly with where the back couch cushions end. You could probably just increase the slope of the diagonal to fix that, it's no big deal really.
If the plank is skewed on purpose, it would probably be wiser to consider that it's a rectangle, and draw the corner of the plank instead of having a hard stop at the back of the couch.
4. The books look pretty uniformly thick! Instead of drawing the same book over and over again (except recolored), perhaps you could try varying the type of book on the shelves. Try adding tall books, short books, thin books, etc! A good way to see what I'm talking about is visualizing Harry Potter and the Order of the Phoenix stacked next to a children's picture book about dogs in pajamas. There's also a great tutorial by deviant STUDIOBLINKTWICE that illustrates more on what I'm talking about.
5. The outside world looks confusing, to say the least. It looks to me like you were confused on where construction ends and road starts, so you compromised by setting up a border separating the two. Try to connect the area covered by the window with the area uncovered by the window! Does it work?
Also, the way you've drawn the perspective outside the window looks like Jordan's sitting in a room that's simultaneously on the second floor and the third floor of a building. This can be easily remedied: just look out the window from time to time and see how the perspective works outside from different stories and distances from the window. Also, it looks like you've drawn a turn in the road; don't forget that you also need to draw in the road paint to match that! There's generally no paint in the middle of an intersection. You could google pictures of intersections for more details.
Alright, now in general.
1. I commented on how I liked your shading in that you paid attention to light source, but I'm honestly bothered by the fact that your shading looks overly blurred. If you're going to use black shading, don't be afraid to use very dark colors! The stuff inside the shelf could also be shaded more accurately.
For now though, I feel like it would be better if you used colored shading, to add warmth and depth to your art instead of a general dirty atmosphere to it. There are a lot of tutorials out there on how to use colored shading, and a lot of them work differently since different people shade differently. Why don't you go check some out?
2. What kind of 3D modelling software did you use to create the room? If this is a direct trace off of the model, don't forget to turn off orthographic mode before you start! Orthographic pictorals are used to see the true size and shape of an object, and shouldn't be used as a direct reference for which to draw. Instead, use the perspective mode, which puts everything in a more realistic viewpoint.
If it's not a direct trace, don't forget to use perspective when drawing your room! You can easily add perspective by drawing converging lines and then basing your drawing on those lines.
And that's pretty much it! Hope this helps--
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Oof oh my I seriously did not expect something like this like wow! XD Hehe still though thank you very much for doing this.
As far far as me of this goes ya looking back at this thing now there is a lot more flaws then I previously thought the shoulders for sure do need to be slimmed down more as well as bulking up the t-shirt. X3 But ya looking back now I definitely could have done more with the shelf more variations would have definitely been good; heh ya the outside is a bit weird the whole roadway is its own layer but judging by what you've said I've clearly failed there. XDD
Ya honestly I'm still working on shading a lot I've been trying a lot of stuff but I can't quite seem to get anywhere with it. Hehe also for this I do not use a 3D modelling thing I just drew the whole thing. XD I'll try harder for perspectives though.
But ya thank you very much for taking the time to critique this silly thing I appreciate it. ^w^ <3
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O o f, well whenever I see art I like I kinda go crazy I guess, no problem!
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Haha no worries at all I kinda do the same it's fun really. X3
Nope. Oh ya haha that, what I was referring to was I was doing scene building as a seprate thing then this. Like actually creating a room in a modelling program just for the fun of modelling. More concept stuff then anything.
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ohhh now i just feel silly.
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As it is, it looks very nice and pleasing to the eye. I especially like the small details in the shelf ^^
Only thing that looks a bit off is the perspective in some places.
I'm no expert but I found that using dark blue or dark purple and lowering their opacity to shade ends up looking better than using only black to shade. But you probably knew that already, I didn't realize that for a long time.
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Oh wow thank ou so very much it really means a lo to hear! ^^ Hehe ya I can agree there especially with the couch. X3
Oh ok gotcha neat, ya im kinda new with the whole thing as well but ill make sure to try it. Thank you very much for the feedback! ^w^
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WOW, I love anything of this drawing, but the window are so small in respect of all objects in the room.
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awe yay thank you very much! ^^ ah ok gotcha thank you fr pointing that out, ill make sure to work on that. ^^
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Your welcome bro, your draws are so awesomes
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Otaku recognize other Otaku. jajajaja
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Ah! This came out quite nice 
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Gaah thank you thank you so so much! Im so glad you like the detail and the shading and stuff, always so worried about it. X,)
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You're very welcome~
Keep up the hard work!
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Ooh yes this looks so good!! The pose is super cute and I love all the details you put into the room, like the light shining in through the windows and the titles on the books.
And wow 77 layers?? How long did it take to upload the file on to here?
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Awe thank you every so much it means so very much! Im very glad you like the pose legit it took so long to figure out XDD Glad you like the rest though.
Haha ya. XDD 1-3 minutes maybe. Kicked my laptop fans quite hard though. XD
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This looks so great! I especially love the background. It's so cool!
I really like how much effort you put into this. x3
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Gaaah yay thank you so so much! The background was such a nightmare to work with. XD
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You're welcome!
Yeah, I bet. XD
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