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this is for you.for all of you.
for those who are but are not.
for those who believe love is just a chemical reaction.
for those who are nothing but static on the mainstream radio.
for those who will never know forever.
for those who live in the highs and lows of the roller-coaster ocean breeze.
for those who hurt themselves because they're afraid of hurting anyone else.
for those whose cries have been drowned by the summer rain.
for those who have been mistaken for God.
for those who battle a thousand soldiers of themselves just to find who they really are.
for those who are nothing but natural disasters.
for those who sink somewhere between electric blue oceans and shimmering rainbows of euphoria.
for those whose insanity makes poetry - and those whose poetry drives them insane.
for those who are weighed down by gravity.
for those who have found equilibria in a heart that is caught in a chain reaction of passionate apathy.
for those who wait for the classroom telephone to ring their eulogy.
for those who think God is just another love song.
for those who are nothing but needle eyes and inkless words.
for those who open the windows when it's raining, just to hear the whole world cry.
for those who leave and never return.
for those who forget it all on the ride home.
for those who love - and those who are loved.
for you.
stand up.
stand up against yourself.
and breathe.
breathe it all out.
because tonight,
no one has to bleed
to feel alive.
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Comments: 256
loverz116 In reply to t-writes-poems [2010-06-06 16:36:25 +0000 UTC]
you welcome! and i'll get back to the other soon.
i'm so swamped with school, haha.
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RhayvenNite [2010-06-04 23:03:46 +0000 UTC]
Its not always easy to see the beauty in ones self. Its always nice to see someone standing up and telling me I am beautiful and its OK to be myself
Thank you.
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t-writes-poems In reply to RhayvenNite [2010-06-06 04:02:41 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I'm so glad it spoke to you.
And it's true: you are beautiful just the way you are. I know it's hard to remember, but it's something you just have to keep reminding yourself. :]
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md427 In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 22:57:24 +0000 UTC]
Saying 'beautiful' would be underrating this, but I can't think of an invented word that can bring justice to this piece.
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t-writes-poems In reply to md427 [2010-06-06 04:00:11 +0000 UTC]
Awww, you're too sweet. Thank you!
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md427 In reply to t-writes-poems [2010-06-06 04:06:13 +0000 UTC]
You're very welcome. Thank YOU for creating this.
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IATSATH [2010-06-04 22:54:05 +0000 UTC]
This is quite possibly the most beautiful piece of poetry I have read and I'm not just saying that to be nice. The message is so clear and yet not overworked, the flow is beautiful and the final section has so much hope for the world. This is just what I need right now.
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t-writes-poems In reply to IATSATH [2010-06-06 03:59:33 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thank you so much! You're too sweet! And I'm so glad you could connect with it.
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MyLifeIsRiggs In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 22:10:16 +0000 UTC]
I truly love the message you convey through this. (:
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AlterEgo1629 In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 19:04:22 +0000 UTC]
"For those who hurt themselves because they're terrified of hurting anyone else." Wow. You nailed it with that one.
Brilliant piece, great formatting and structure. Powerful repetition.
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Enigmatic-Infelicity In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 18:29:20 +0000 UTC]
Really amazingly written. This touched me deeply. Its so emotive and the imigary is great. I dont think its abstract at all, its very good. I think it is rather real actually. I am in awe here.
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t-writes-poems In reply to Enigmatic-Infelicity [2010-06-06 03:54:46 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thank you!
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lunastar In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 17:37:14 +0000 UTC]
This is stunning. So simple, but so impacting as it makes me pause and try not to cry. I really don't know what else to say about this; just beautiful.
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mikuX56 In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 13:26:21 +0000 UTC]
I really like this it is beautiful. And i did find my self in some of those lines. I enjoyed reading this.
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indigoblueshine In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 12:17:55 +0000 UTC]
To put it bluntly: I LOVE IT! The flow is just amazing, and I love how simple it is yet it covers so many elements and emotions and concepts and the symbolism is amazing...GAH it's just awesome!
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iPawed [2010-06-04 11:05:25 +0000 UTC]
It flows like syrup: it's slow and steady and it traps you, it's so sweet;
To someone it may be chaos, but to me it is coherent;
It is abstract and it is real and it strikes a chord in me so deep I'd forgotten it was there.
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t-writes-poems In reply to iPawed [2010-06-06 03:52:44 +0000 UTC]
Aww, thank you. I'm glad you could connect with it.
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princessluna In reply to t-writes-poems [2010-06-06 05:48:40 +0000 UTC]
i loved it..
keep the good stuff coming!!
~
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BornWith-A-RebelSoul In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 03:03:40 +0000 UTC]
Magnificant. Beautiful. Brava ^-^
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t-writes-poems In reply to BornWith-A-RebelSoul [2010-06-06 03:50:49 +0000 UTC]
Thank you! :]
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Musical-Ink [2010-06-04 01:52:08 +0000 UTC]
I found myself in here a couple a times. this is beautiful!
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t-writes-poems In reply to Musical-Ink [2010-06-04 02:38:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! :]
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humpheth In reply to ??? [2010-06-04 01:45:54 +0000 UTC]
I'm speechless. Like, really, truly speechless. This is just soo beautiful and moving and meaningful. Instant fave, yo. (:
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t-writes-poems In reply to humpheth [2010-06-04 01:48:24 +0000 UTC]
Awww, thank you so much!
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Omega-Pancake In reply to ??? [2010-06-01 17:04:32 +0000 UTC]
This is absolutely breathtaking.
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oOImperfectionistOo In reply to ??? [2010-06-01 10:47:18 +0000 UTC]
To answer your critique questions, it does all of this and more. This is truly amazing and I would say more but it's been said. Read all of your comments twice and you'll start to get our appreciation
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