HOME | DD
TargonRedDragon β Warning: Intruder Alert
Published: 2011-04-29 14:00:59 +0000 UTC; Views: 1369; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 37
Redirect to original
Description
A part of art trade withPlatinum Tensaug of Dragon Squadron is an intruder, but he must acquire something. He charges through the enemy ship and shoot enemies on the way where echoes of alarm spread through the walkway. When the red lasers zoom, he takes cover and waits for next plan to defeat them.
This is my second attempt on sci-fic artwork, but having lasers and the blue laser rifle
Platinum (c) ~Tensaug7
Art by Kevin B. Gener
Related content
Comments: 16
Thanks
π: 0 β©: 0
OMG I LOVE THANKS SOOOOO MUCH YOUR THE BEST
π: 0 β©: 1
You are very welcome
π: 0 β©: 1
Positive Aspects:
Light
At least one light source (from the front, upper right) is working fine: the character is casting a correct shadow on the wall and the body shadings work accordingly to the first light source
Colours
It's not too colourful - it does fit into a science-fiction setting!
Negative Aspects:
Proportions
The body proportions are totally off... I dunno, if the character is SUPPOSED to look that way... but I know, YOU want to draw "humanoid anatomy" all the time. And this here is more or less some "MEGA MAN CARTOONY" anatomy!!
He can scratch his knees without bending over...
Secondary light source
The frontal wall is casting a HARD shadow on the floor (assuming there is some more light behind that wall)... but how is that shadow possible, when there is the very strong light source from the FRONT????
Should there be a shadow at all? No way! It totall spoils it all.
The frontal light is SO STRONG, there is no way that the wall could cast another shadow here.
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeew!!!
Room perspective
If we try to figure out that wall he's standing against... it's not believable. The corridor next to it would be sooooo thin and small, nobody can go through it. But having problems with perspective myself (!!), I won't be that picky here this time.
Laser blasts
I can see WHAT you wanted to show... but it looks like a pattern on the wall. Though I cannot tell why the laser does NOT convince me!
Finally... one more thing: your faces!!!!!
My brother and I have ultimately and finally figured out why you're NOT able to draw facial expressions! At least, I think I have the solution.
Looks at this picture:
[link]
I hope you see, what I mean!
Maybe, you try to use this advise next time. Believe me, I know what I'm talking about.
π: 0 β©: 1
Wow, these are all aspects! 
About the face which I repeat for many times... you can see my replies and explanations on the new , yet sketchy submission ^^
---> [link]
π: 0 β©: 0
Well, indeed. ItΒ΄s not that simple the Sci fic stuff like this if you havenΒ΄t practice that much. But I value your effort, Platinum looks good with your style, even with his drawings, which they look kinda difficult to make more with the details, but still, it looks good. And somehow that weapon reminds me one of HaloΒ΄s, but it was a good try. But the lasers bothers me a little. I might suggest you to add some screen effect in the center of the lasers to show some energy source or something.
π: 0 β©: 1
I wasn't sure about lasers that I referred from those images. But, you're right. energy source in the center should be shown like those of Star Wars lightsabers.
π: 0 β©: 0
nice!
the red lasers make me think to the Portal Game:
there you have to face, sometimes, chambers with turrets, it's awesome, because you can't even shoot them, you can just void them xD
but the true fun is their voice xD they seem deadly when they shoot, but their is voice is kid-like
π: 0 β©: 1
Ehh, are those red lasers from "childish turrets"? These are to target where Chell can be aimed to shoot. But there are no laser weapons in Portal, actually. Just mini missiles, portal gun and bullets.
π: 0 β©: 1
heheh yeah, but those childish turrets give quite a punch xD
"are you still there?"
"nope"
xD
π: 0 β©: 1
"Searching" (Scans area)
"Hello" "There you are" (Finds you and shoots you) "Hey, it's me!"
"I don't blame you" (Stops shooting)
"Goodnight" "Bedtime" (Rests)
(You grab it) "Who are you?" "Hey, put me down"
(Topples and shoots around) "Gwaaaaah!"
π: 0 β©: 1
heheheh
and when you throw them in the barriers?
"yayayayayyy" xD
π: 0 β©: 0
I haven't drawn laser guns which I saw from Mass Effect and Halo games. It's my 1st draw of it ^^
π: 0 β©: 0