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Template93 In reply to ??? [2011-11-28 06:04:55 +0000 UTC]
not negative. everyone has there own opinions and i realize that it is imposible to please everyone. i am sorry that you were not able to enjoy the comic as much as the game, but thank you for at least giving the comic a try.
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asemd7 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-28 06:52:03 +0000 UTC]
Well I'll be looking forward to where you're going with it anyhow. As I said, it isn't bad and if you're planning to extend it past the game it may prove itself quite good on its own merits.
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Aubri In reply to ??? [2011-11-27 19:00:10 +0000 UTC]
I think this could use some re-scripting. If I didn't already know what was going on, the comic wouldn't explain it very well. For instance, it's not at all clear that Ruby was a ghost, or that she was the body in the fireplace.
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Template93 In reply to Aubri [2011-11-27 19:04:33 +0000 UTC]
my version is different. this and any futur comics to be posted relating to this story is of my interpretation and has been approved by the original creator. this comic was based off the game but had minor changes in it. those changes will be explained in the futur.
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thefan2 In reply to ??? [2011-11-27 00:58:47 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome I can not tell if that is Mitta or not but oh well *hears the wall fall what on earth*
Grey Hoove: she had the mark and she had to *looks around* what on earth this isn't Sunny Town.
me: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *runs out of the room bumping into things and then out of the house*
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Inumaru12 In reply to ??? [2011-11-27 00:55:54 +0000 UTC]
This was a very amazing comic. Your detail and background was awesome. I would've loved to see it inked/colored but I don't blame you if you don't. (It would be a lot of work considering how much work you did into the traditional drawling)
Anyway, great job.
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Template93 In reply to Inumaru12 [2011-11-27 03:09:07 +0000 UTC]
thanks,and in the futur this will be colored. and any grammar errors or image flaws will be corrected as well.
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Sprkflare [2011-11-26 22:36:24 +0000 UTC]
Well done template. The comic was nicely drawn and kept me interested. Also I really liked how you made the zomponies. Keep up the good work!
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Template93 In reply to Sprkflare [2011-11-26 22:37:50 +0000 UTC]
thanks, hope you'll stick around for the continuation.
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NaiKujibo [2011-11-26 17:41:33 +0000 UTC]
Applebloom took that well for something that traumatic.
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Nova225 In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 16:20:46 +0000 UTC]
Interesting comic, but I'm not sure to completely understand it ?
So, the villagers (probably from a REALLY long time ago, when cutie marks where... very uncommon ? Beginning to exist ?) believed the Cutie Mark was a curse (or something like that), and killed the filly/mare that had one by burning her alive... and, somehow, this most horrible act they did indeed ended up cursing them ; making them relive that horrible day forever as their punishment ?
Is that it ?
...but, what's with the spirit of the mare/filly with the cutie mark, that was killed ? She's cursed too ? (wouldn't make sense that the good pony is also trapped with the bad ponies)
Is she preventing the 'cursed ponies' to leave ? (that would make for an odd and quite hazardous punishment. I mean, they are essentially zombie-ponies created by the 'curse', and it would mean that they would be free to go and kill more ponies, without her stopping them ?)
And, I can't help but wonder where is Celestia in all this ?
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Template93 In reply to Nova225 [2011-11-26 17:00:39 +0000 UTC]
the story i have created is different then what people are somewhat expecting. as i progresse throughout the story you'll start to find clues and answers relating to any questions you may have.
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Nova225 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 23:28:05 +0000 UTC]
Maybe... maybe.
Meanwhile, people will wonder and theorize, I suppose.
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LeAlphaDawgy In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 04:37:39 +0000 UTC]
I seen the whole comic but i not gonna play the game so people said they never slept again O-O Ok i know they slept but still that scary X_X
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TheYelliaes In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 02:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Amazingly haunting. I played the game, but seeing it closer makes it have a larger impact. Although there was not much description for the dead ponies, I rightly feel that it doesnt even need descriptions or even names. Kinda like a completely different story that Applebloom just was a cameo in, but the cameos side of the story
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TRXAcero In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 02:06:33 +0000 UTC]
I am very grateful for this awesome piece. Well done, youngster.
Waiting for the color version.
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Template93 In reply to raimbowdash20 [2011-11-26 02:04:34 +0000 UTC]
glad you enjoyed it, and hope you'll stick around for the continuation
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KingWaldo In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 01:23:50 +0000 UTC]
Good job on this one! It felt like I was playing the game all over again.
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Template93 In reply to KingWaldo [2011-11-26 01:26:30 +0000 UTC]
thats good to hear. hope you'll stick around for the continuation.
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Desolateshadow30 In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 01:22:20 +0000 UTC]
brilliant comic...are you a fan of the web comic Jack?I think I can see a little similarity in the art work
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Template93 In reply to Desolateshadow30 [2011-11-26 01:25:57 +0000 UTC]
have not heard of this comic. the bigest comic i read online is "sequential art", but not heard of Jack. think you can throw me a link?
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Desolateshadow30 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-30 17:59:48 +0000 UTC]
[link]
there you go...its a long read but well worth it
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Template93 In reply to Desolateshadow30 [2011-11-30 18:13:48 +0000 UTC]
ah, thanks! when i have time i'll check it out.
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jongyon7192p [2011-11-26 00:56:05 +0000 UTC]
Fucking awesome! I really loved it!
I wonder if Mitta should just look like all the other Blanks too, though. She looked just like them in the game.
What about the words at the ending? Something about Equestria's dark secrets/history or something like that.
And the alicorn... will that be explained later?
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Template93 In reply to jongyon7192p [2011-11-26 01:18:12 +0000 UTC]
your questions will be answered in the futur as the story progresses.
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mlpMaconMixx In reply to Template93 [2011-12-01 23:03:54 +0000 UTC]
It's wonderful to hear that you are going to take this story and keep developing it. I can tell you have the talent to do it! This is an amazing body of work, and thank you so much for sharing it.
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Russiarules1 In reply to ??? [2011-11-26 00:19:01 +0000 UTC]
Great work, I really liked... well, I liked a lot everything! It's just like the game!
Awesome...
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Template93 In reply to Russiarules1 [2011-11-26 01:19:19 +0000 UTC]
thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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Template93 In reply to TheEvilTater [2011-11-26 01:19:00 +0000 UTC]
thank you, glad you enjoyed it
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Template93 In reply to Cookiekat9564 [2011-11-26 01:18:44 +0000 UTC]
thanks, glad you enjoyed it
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Cookiekat9564 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 01:42:10 +0000 UTC]
totally did scared the hell out me ur comic
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Template93 In reply to Cookiekat9564 [2011-11-26 01:45:47 +0000 UTC]
well, then your in for a treat when the next one comes out.
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Cookiekat9564 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 01:49:21 +0000 UTC]
this comic kinda reminds me of bone here what it looks like
[link]
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Aulann In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 21:45:18 +0000 UTC]
OMG [link]
This was really good, it was like i was watching a real episode.
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Template93 In reply to Aulann [2011-11-25 21:50:09 +0000 UTC]
thank you. wait till the colored version comes. it will be awesome (hopefully).
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CooperTaco In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 20:48:53 +0000 UTC]
One of the creepest pony stories ever and I read Cupcakes... *shivers in fear and disgust* Never read Cupcakes...
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Template93 In reply to CooperTaco [2011-11-25 20:52:27 +0000 UTC]
read "sweet apple massacre". all the way through, i dare ya.
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CooperTaco In reply to Template93 [2011-11-25 21:15:05 +0000 UTC]
Challenge accepted. I love the creepy ass zombie ponies, the lack of jaws and hanging touge were very nice touches.
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Template93 In reply to CooperTaco [2011-11-25 21:24:25 +0000 UTC]
let me know what you think when your done.
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CooperTaco In reply to Template93 [2011-11-25 22:54:23 +0000 UTC]
I have witnessed some of the worse the internet has to offer all with a straight face, I even read this with a striaght face but now I wish I had the Men In black's memory eraser thing... Celeastia help my sanity!
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Template93 In reply to CooperTaco [2011-11-26 01:14:06 +0000 UTC]
makes Cupcakes look like a walk in the park now, uh.
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