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DethPotato In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 19:41:14 +0000 UTC]
Overall, I think you had a TON of comma splices and grammatical mistakes. You may want to look at some of those. But I think this was very nice overall.
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Template93 In reply to DethPotato [2011-11-25 19:44:32 +0000 UTC]
i'm kinda poor when it comes to english skills, never was my best class. I have had people note spots like that out for me, and when i end up coloring this, any error (grammer or image) that is in the comic will be corrected and become the better version. this is just the semi final. sorry if the errors bothered.
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jimmythehoboeater In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 19:17:22 +0000 UTC]
i didnt quite understand... is this based on a fanfic or something? if so, ill read to see if i understnd better, just give me link please, if not, anyone care explain?
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Template93 In reply to jimmythehoboeater [2011-11-25 19:21:18 +0000 UTC]
Its based off an 8-bit game made by link to game here >>>[link] <<<. he also aproves on both this comic and my continuation.
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jimmythehoboeater In reply to Template93 [2011-11-25 19:24:00 +0000 UTC]
why thank you sugarcube, maybe that can clean up my mind a little
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jimmythehoboeater In reply to Template93 [2011-11-25 19:49:54 +0000 UTC]
seems interesting, might finish it later
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BR-MaxtWolf In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 18:34:51 +0000 UTC]
Hoho! An excellent story i might add... And you did an exccelent cover of it.
If you're going to continue it... Many will demand it soon, as i see... Best of luck to you on making a follow-up!
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Template93 In reply to BR-MaxtWolf [2011-11-25 18:42:06 +0000 UTC]
thank you, and glad you enjoyed it.
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CalamusDash In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 18:06:26 +0000 UTC]
This is awesome. well done sir, I applaud you.
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Template93 In reply to CalamusDash [2011-11-25 18:07:04 +0000 UTC]
thank you. hope you'll stick around for the continuation.
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Rrazz426 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 17:37:12 +0000 UTC]
*Applauds* That was incredible.
As a fan of horror, MLP, and the original flash game. I can safely say this hit all the right marks, reading it in the dark at 3am certainly helped But it was truly unsettling, creepy, and faithful to the original game.
Bravo! Bravo...I can't wait to see more in the future
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Template93 In reply to Rrazz426 [2011-11-25 17:52:54 +0000 UTC]
glad you likeed it. hope that you will enjoy my continuation and interpretation of the horror in my next comic as much or more then this one.
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Bolt-The-Cat In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 17:29:46 +0000 UTC]
I can't wait for that continuation. SOTB really needs a sequel, it raises many more questions than it answers.
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Blarging In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 16:40:04 +0000 UTC]
... YOU!!!
SHALL NOT!!!
PASS!!!
Nice back image, I wonder how long she holds out?
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KichaaLion In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 16:33:12 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME comic. I loved the game and this was a great adaptation.
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xPr0j3cTxSiNx In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 15:48:29 +0000 UTC]
Now the game makes more sense. Wonderful comic.
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minimoose772 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 15:44:49 +0000 UTC]
Z.Z.Z.Z...ZOMBIE ponies? seriously though, that was a lot of pencil. I'm quite impressed with the time it must have taken to complete.
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Template93 In reply to minimoose772 [2011-11-25 17:55:28 +0000 UTC]
it toke about 2-3 months and 8-10 pencils. it was a lot of work and the next comic will be a little harder possibly.
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minimoose772 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-26 07:09:22 +0000 UTC]
Yeah.... I could easily see that amount of time. So were those full 8.5x11" sheets of paper, or what size paper were you drawing on? I would imagine drawing a bit smaller than that would help save the wrist some and probably not sacrifice quality all that much. Also, what's your next comic idea? I definitely loved playing Story of the Blanks (this was a nice accompaniment) and am curious as to what else you've got cooked up.
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Template93 In reply to minimoose772 [2011-11-26 08:32:10 +0000 UTC]
i drew the comic on 12x9 inch paper with 1" border on top and bottom with 3/4" border on the sides. all panels are then divided by a 1/4" line. As for my next comic idea, the best i can say is to look at the concepts i have out for view. Dont want to give out too much info as i may end up spoiling it for you. if anything, ask me a question you may have and will see if i can answer it for you.
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ApocalypsePenguin In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 14:26:03 +0000 UTC]
This is amazing. Thank you for all the work you put into it!
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RainsongSkywatcher In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 14:25:25 +0000 UTC]
Very awesome! TOTALLY watching you for the continuation (i read the comments on last page! lol)
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Rockburgh [2011-11-25 14:21:21 +0000 UTC]
This. Ohmigosh this. Whole comic. Saved. All of it. Eagerly awaiting Returning Nightmare. Watched.
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pinkiepie20 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 13:07:27 +0000 UTC]
oh wow i love this back cover does you next comic have something to do with it?
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Template93 In reply to pinkiepie20 [2011-11-25 17:57:06 +0000 UTC]
yes, it my interpretation of what happened. I got the approval from Donitz to continue, and he is even giving some assistance to help me with it.
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pinkiepie20 In reply to Template93 [2011-11-27 02:33:39 +0000 UTC]
I think the back cover just looks epic and her coming back would be amazing
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Nodrasa In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 13:06:29 +0000 UTC]
Congratulations for making a comic of story of the blanks
good job
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Template93 In reply to Echoj2 [2011-11-25 17:59:27 +0000 UTC]
thanks, it was pretty much the first time i was drawing ponies other then my first attempts at "Fairy Dust" and "Devil Soar". i fully agree that i have become better at it thanks to this comic. glad you enjoyed the comic and hope that you will enjoy the next.
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Gabriel313 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 11:12:59 +0000 UTC]
If you know what type of music to play at what time, the Silent Hill 2 soundtrack works AMAZINGLY well with this story. I loved every bit of it, especially how much detail you put in to the artwork. [link]
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DarrianMH In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 10:34:55 +0000 UTC]
wow. i just read everything, but i forgot to fave.
anyway, this is great.
plus everything made traditional. thumbs up.
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BB-K In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 09:46:22 +0000 UTC]
Wow, it is scary indeed. And I know those hauntings I watched in Discovery are never fake, ghosts and demons are real.
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BlackWolfe-Coyoten In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 08:56:23 +0000 UTC]
Heh. Story of the Blanks was the first MLP:FiM thing I ever tried -- before even watching the show -- due to its showing up on JayIsGames. (It made a even LESS sense since I didn't know pony about cutie-marks when I played it.)
It inspired me to finally give the series itself a try. This comic does a good job of capturing the story and feel of the game. I appreciate that you made the fetch-quests go bye-bye, but there's no sense of Applebloom even looking for the key, just that she finds it the moment she needs it.
Despite that one flaw, good job. I particularly like the stuff you did with the zombie-blanks' necks.
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alpha117 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 08:27:58 +0000 UTC]
Well this was wonderful. Bravo, bravo.
But I still don't have any idea what happened!
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enp In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 08:21:05 +0000 UTC]
What? 60 pages already?
I could swear they seemed fewer than that.
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tehferg In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 08:03:34 +0000 UTC]
Amazing job! I loved the 8-bit game. this comic is amazing though! I think this portrayed the terror even better then the game itself did. Now to go watch an episode so I can sleep...
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Gamit12345 In reply to ??? [2011-11-25 08:03:03 +0000 UTC]
I now want to play the game again
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